Spirit Message Support [Written]

[Thomas★Zero]

The Dark Spirits
lv 3 DARK
Fiend/Effect
If this card is Normal Summoned: Special Summon up to 2 "The Dark Spirits" from your hand, Deck or GY, also, for the rest of this turn, you cannot Special Summon monsters from your Extra Deck except DARK Fiend monsters. If this card is tributed by the effect of a Spell Card: Apply 1 of the following effects.
* Set 1 "Destiny Board" from your Deck, also, that card can be activated during the turn it was set.
* Shuffle "Spirit Message" card from your hand or GY into your Deck.
You can only use each effect of "The Dark Spirits" once per turn.
ATK/1000 DEF/0

Malice Doll of Doom
lv 4 DARK
Fiend/Effect
If this card is Special Summoned from your GY: This card gains 100 ATK for each DARK Fiend monster in your GY. You can only use the following effects of "Malice Doll of Doom" once per turn.
* If this card was tributed by the effect of a Spell Card: You can Special Summon this card from your GY, and if you do, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponents LP, then, gain 800 LP.
* You can send this card from your hand, field or GY into the Deck; add 1 Level 5 or higher DARK Fiend monster from your Deck to your hand.
ATK/1600 DEF/1700 

The Earl of Doom
lv 5 DARK
Fiend/Effect
If you Normal Summoned a DARK Fiend monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand or GY, also, for the rest of this turn, you cannot Special Summon monsters from your Extra Deck except DARK Fiend monsters. You can only Special Summon "The Earl of Doom" once per turn this way. If this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can add 1 "Dark Sanctuary" or "Ectoplasmer" from your Deck or GY to your hand. You can only use this effect of "The Earl of Doom" once per turn.
ATK/2000 DEF/700

Phantom Ectoplasmer
Continuous Spell Card
(This card is always treated as "Ectoplasmer".)
Once per turn while this card is on the field or in your GY: You can tribute 1 monster; Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of the tributed monster, also, if this card is on the field you can destroy it. If this card is sent from the field to the GY by its own effect: Add 1 Level 5 or lower DARK Fiend monster from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Phantom Ectoplasmer" once per turn.

Drawn forth Spirits
Spell Card
Tribute 1 DARK Fiend monster you control; draw 2 cards. During your Main Phase, except the turn this card was sent to the GY: You can banish this card from your GY; Special Summon 1 DARK Fiend monster from your hand or GY. You can only activate 1 "Drawn froth Spirits"  per turn.

[D1G1TAL]

Do i hear BA support?????

- First off, with the first card: why would you ever want to add a spirit message card to your hand?

- The last effect of “Malice doll of doom” is a bit strange. It’s weird that you can shuffle it from the hand, field or GY. It doesn’t really need to do that either, because it moves so much anyway, but meh.

(- You have to say shuffle into the deck.)

- Ok so the earl of doom’s effect are worded a bit wrong. The first line is an effect that starts a chain, so you can’t write “you can only special summon X once per turn this way”. Just remove that line and replace “this effect” with “each effect” at the end there.

-Ok so the Ectoplasmer retrain now:

- (This card’s NAME is always treated as “Ectoplasmer”)

- You can tribute 1 monster: ; dont use “you control” (also applicable in the last card)

- Oh and also you have to say “use” instead of “activate”.

- Last card: remove the “once” at the end.