Task Rabbit 🐇: Generic Yu-Gi-Oh Card

[TheDeckmaker]

TASK RABBIT 

Simple Yu-Gi-Oh card I cooked up while working on a new archetype I was working on. I thought it had a really nice effect so I decided to share. What do you think? 

 

[Loleo]

Could be super broken, I'd restrict it to level 4 or lower monsters, or monsters from the archetype since some monsters are supper hard to summon and may even have horrible stats with great effects, one thing I can see is time lords, Alpha master of beasts, The Wicked Avatar etc.

[D1G1TAL]

- You have to say “always treated”

- There has to be “except “Task Rabbit”” in the effect

- Not this cards effect, just this effect

- Comma before until

- Maybe say “While this card is face-up on the field”, just to remove confusion on floating effects

- With effect-copying effects, you always also have to change the name of the card too, not just the effect, this may be the most important point of this comment

Can confirm, with how many monsters in the game, this is broken if the playerbase finds all the monsters that break this card.

”But what if he reveals a BA?”

[TheDeckmaker]

On 7/8/2022 at 12:31 AM, Loleo said:

Could be super broken, I'd restrict it to level 4 or lower monsters, or monsters from the archetype since some monsters are supper hard to summon and may even have horrible stats with great effects, one thing I can see is time lords, Alpha master of beasts, The Wicked Avatar etc.

Thanks for the feedback @Loleo. I have noticed everyone at YCM can always rely on you for opinions when they really need one. I made some changes to the card; hoped to 'unbreak' the card and somehow salvage it but still keep its flexibility at the same time. Heres the Link: https://www.cardmaker.net/forums/topic/415790-domestica-my-new-archetype/

 

On 7/10/2022 at 2:47 PM, Robin Berger said:

- You have to say “always treated”

- There has to be “except “Task Rabbit”” in the effect

- Not this cards effect, just this effect

- Comma before until

- Maybe say “While this card is face-up on the field”, just to remove confusion on floating effects

- With effect-copying effects, you always also have to change the name of the card too, not just the effect, this may be the most important point of this comment

Can confirm, with how many monsters in the game, this is broken if the playerbase finds all the monsters that break this card.

”But what if he reveals a BA?”

Reworded the card's texts. Thanks for the tip. I am still new at this so I tend to make these mistakes. I put up the card along with its Archetype, so you can see the changes here: