the best heros

[gamee463]

the best heros

[Frlf]

The cards are very good!

 

i can use links now.. so i saw them

 

keep good work..

 

Basic Ocg errors.. make corrections...

 

Also use pictures for the cards..!

 

 

14.28/16.12 for you ^_^

 

add pics..

[Parting Shot]

Cards without pics belong in Written Cards.

 

~Moved~

 

-Darth

[Umbra]

Browarod, this is not a written card. It is just a card without a picture. Written cards are in a format. Like this:

 

Alien Guard

EARTH

Reptile

3 / 800 / 200

When this card is destroyed, place 2 "A-Counters" on 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. (A monster with an "A-Counter" on it that battles with an "Alien" monster loses 300 ATK/DEF during damage calculation only.)

[Parting Shot]

While that is the technical definition of Written Cards, Dj and I have decided that it's much easier just to put any cards without pics, whether in Written or Card form, into Written Cards. That way it's more organized.

[Umbra]

Ok, just wasn't updated on that info.

[Protoman]

thanks that clears alot up. I half knew what it was.

[Pikachu]

well, not bad cards, a newcomer making good cards is rare

not bad though 7/10

[Charlie016]

They're Good, but not the best... I see many errors. so..6/10.

[Dark_Pride]

My dear, I've seen your cards and I have some suggestions:

*When a monster is unaffected by Traps, there is no need to state that it can't be targeted by traps. That means you can omit the "it can't be targeted by traps" part in your first 2 cards.

*For card#4, the card errata should be like this:

-Select 1 of your removed from play "Evil Hero", "Elemental Hero", or "Destiny Hero" monster and Special Summon it on your field ignoring any summoning conditions they have. When this card is removed from the field, destroy and remove from play the selected monster. When that monster is destroyed, destroy this card.

*For card#5, the card errata should be like this:

-Your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. Special Summon 1 "Evil Hero", "Elemental Hero", or "Destiny Hero" monster from your Graveyard ignoring any summoning conditions they have. This turn, that monster's effect is negated and it can't declare an attack.

 

Overall, your cards are good for a newbie.

[Typhoon brightness]

Use Img tags please, i wont rate until you do, but basic ocg errors.