The Second Egyptian God

[Joey the Questionable Guy]

This card is treated with no levels. you can only have one Sliforsis the Egyptian God Dragon of Thundering Realms in your Deck you are allowed to summon this card if you tribute one Slifer the sky dragon, one Slifer the Superior Sky Dragon, and one Slifemos the Divine Thundering Sky Dragon on your field then, when you summon remove all monsters from your deck from the current duel, also when this card is summoned this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined ATK of the monsters Tributed for this card. this card is cannot be affected by either players cards. when your opponent summons a monster switch that monster to your side of the field. if your opponent activates a Spell or Trap, negate the effect then inflict 3,000 LP to your opponent, then banish that card. this card can attack eight times per Battle Phase. when your opponent enters the Battle Phase make it become the End phase. when it is your Draw Phase you can pick two cards from your deck instead of your normal draw. when this card has been on the field for ten turns remove this card from the duel then Special Summon one "Slifer the Sky Dragon" then that monster gains 4,000 ATK and 4,000 DEF, also ignoring all of its effects then replace it with this effect: This card cannot be affected by other cards. this card can attack two times per turn.

[0PxPz0]

lemme try cleaning this up first, tho i'm not the best at wording things the right way

"Sliforsis The Egyptian God Of Thundering Realms"
(DIVINE/Divine-Beast/Egyptian God/Effect/Level 0/ATK ?/DEF ?)

"This card is always treated as having no Level. You can tribute one "Slifer The Sky Dragon", "Slifer The Superior Sky Dragon", and "Slifemos The Divine Thundering Sky Dragon" you control, Special Summon this card from your Hand. this cards ATK and DEF are equal to the combined ATK of the tributed monsters. When this card is summoned banish all other monsters from your Hand, Deck, GY, and side of the field. This card is immune to card effects. When your opponent summons a monster take control of that monster, When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card negate that card and inflict 3000 damage to your opponent then banish that card. This card can attack eight times per Battlephase. Your opponent skips their Battlephase and Mainphase 2. While you control this card skip your normal draw and add two cards from your Deck to your Hand instead. After 10 turns remove this card from the game and Special Summon one removed from play Slifer The Sky Dragon., that monsters ATK and DEF become 4000, it's effects are negated and it is immune to all other card effects and can attack twice per Battlephase.

(you can only have one "Sliforsis The Egyptian God Of Thundering Realms" in your Deck.)"

so there's a lot going on with this, I did bold everything that wasn't necessarily what you wrote but was my best guess at your intention. I can't really make a fair judgement on the summoning condition without looking at all of the required tributes and, while I don't want to go into cards that aren't necessarily in this post, i will say that you didn't include a clause stating it can't be normal summoned or special summoned other ways which, being level 0, means you can just use your NS this thing without tribute. Granted that means it's atk and def are 0 that doesn't matter too much if you just clear out any problematic monsters first since it's immune to any form of removal and steals any monsters summoned after it (assuming you have room). As I'm not exactly up with the meta myself, though I'm sure this is still a bit much, I'll focus mainly on the more casual experience of using the card based on my own knowledge of the game. this card would not be fun to play for me, and that's assuming it was intended to only be summonable by it's own effect. it's wide array of effects seem random, unrelated, and intended to simply make it unreasonably strong. it's total immunity, while too much in my opinion, is somewhat in line with the idea of an ultimate form of an egyptian god in my mind, as is the double deck search (specifically for slifer) but the rest feels just kind of tacked on to me.

While less important i'd also like to ask, why the "egyptian god" type? divine beast is already exclusive to egyptian god card so it seems redundant, in the same vein, why treat is as having no level?

[DifferentDimensionVanessa]

There is room for more versions of the three original Gods. Gods are, in some circumstances, creators and beings from primitive times of the Earth. It's a lot older than any past events in the anime. This could be thought of as an Osiris that retained its original power.

Reminds me of these Pokemon Formes called Primal Reversions. The design concept of them is that Groudon and Kyogre in Pokemon had a much stronger power in ancient times. That's what I think of as I imagine a really ancient God Card.

[Peter Hallin]

[Booloomer]

Definitely an unstoppable card.