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[ared winner]

[Problamatico]

Overflow is easily the best one out of them. This would absolutely kill an opponent on their first turn. This with Yata-Garasu is a guaranteed win. However, that's the issue. This card would be banned immediately. If you gave the effect an activation requirement a bit stricter, like you'd also need to send a Level 8  Water attribute Sea Serpent type monster from the field to the GY. 

[ared winner]

is this better? thanks for your feedback

[Loleo]

It's a little easier to comment on cards if you have a writen version bellow it but there is few enough words to were I think I can makes some decent comments

On 12/19/2021 at 8:41 AM, ared winner said:

Attack gain effects are not very powerful and especially when a card like "United We Stand" exist this card is objectively worse. You can make it more powerful or give it another effect!

I don't understand the intention behind this one at all? Can you give me a couple situations that would change by this effect?

So if I understand the intention, both players draw monsters the player that activated this card takes 1000 points of damage otherwise both players discard the drawn cards? This is a really risky card for an ok effect. I don't know if you're worried about the difference between "Draw and Add" but if you're not the easiest way to make this card better "Both players excavate the top 2 cards of their deck. if both players excavated at least one monster: you can add one excavated card to your hand and pay 1000 LP." 

This card is a little strange in how it works. First of all your opponent can draw 2 cards simultaneously, would you like to count 0,1, or 2 of those drawn cards to the total? Also, this card specifies "Draws" not "adds" so it is limited by that factor. Your new version is much harsher, but this is the sort of card that you only want to see turn 1 and if it's negated you lose if it goes through it's practically an instant win. Also "When" effect miss timing with some BS yugioh stuff.

I would word this "If your opponent adds a card from their deck to their hand: Discard one card; your opponent must discard cards until they have the same or less cards in hand as the number of cards in your hand and on your field."

Much more flexible and requires a little more thought and setup. 

If I screwed up any of your intentions, please let me know the effect you were going for and I can try again.

[Problamatico]

14 hours ago, Loleo said:

It's a little easier to comment on cards if you have a writen version bellow it but there is few enough words to were I think I can makes some decent comments

If I screwed up any of your intentions, please let me know the effect you were going for and I can try again.

With the way you did Overflow, that would still leave them with one card since this would still be on the field until it's fully resolved. So if you want to empty their hand, you'll have to change the effect. So either we follow my suggestion, change your effect so they simply discard their entire hand no questions asked or option given,  or we do this: If your opponent draws a card and their hand size becomes 5 or more, pay 3000 LP to activate this effect: Your opponent must either send all cards in their hand to the GY or take 1000 points of damage for each card in their hand. This card cannot be negated or chained.

 

[Loleo]

3 hours ago, Problamatico said:

With the way you did Overflow, that would still leave them with one card since this would still be on the field until it's fully resolved. So if you want to empty their hand, you'll have to change the effect. So either we follow my suggestion, change your effect so they simply discard their entire hand no questions asked or option given, or we do this: If your opponent draws a card and their hand size becomes 5 or more, pay 3000 LP to activate this effect: Your opponent must either send all cards in their hand to the GY or take 1000 points of damage for each card in their hand. This card cannot be negated or chained.

 

You are correct and I like this most recent submission. You can make this a counter trap and then it just can't be responded to. This card would be a godsend in Trickstar draw burn.

[Problamatico]

Sorta like this