Joey the Questionable Guy Posted December 18, 2021 Report Share Posted December 18, 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted December 18, 2021 Report Share Posted December 18, 2021 Hello again, @Cadyn Neece Here's a friendly pointer: In this site, it is mandatory that you write the effect of the card below the image. In this case, the effect can be appreciated easily, but that won't always be the case. The rule is there to let people read the effects easily regardless of the device they're using About the card: We're missing vital info, which is, what is "Thundering Sky". I tried to look for it among your posts, but couldn't find it, so as things stands I think that Thunder buddy only exists in your mind xD. Since we don't know what kind of monster it is, we can't know if trying to preserve "Thunderling" for 5 turns is worth it. To be honest, considering the current meta, keeping a monster that has 0 immunities on the field is near impossible, to the point that in order for this to be worthy, Thundering Sky should have a win condition or something pretty close to that. +ATK/DEF per card in hand is a cute wink to Slifer but honestly negligible, I wish it was at least 200 so it could reach 2200 with the limit of 6. Welp, I see you're pretty new to the site, so I tell you Welcome, make yourself at home! Always remember that, even if a feedback you receive is not pure praise and instead is pointing out flaws, that is made with the intention of helping you in your path to becoming a great card maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joey the Questionable Guy Posted December 19, 2021 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2021 thank you for pointing this out to me and i am sorry about not posting the effects with the card. i am also trying to make the card weak so that it harder to bring out Thundering Sky which turns into Slifer the Sky Dragon also Thunderling is weak because it is a baby and hasn't brought out its "power". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted December 19, 2021 Report Share Posted December 19, 2021 1 hour ago, Cadyn Neece said: thank you for pointing this out to me and i am sorry about not posting the effects with the card. i am also trying to make the card weak so that it harder to bring out Thundering Sky which turns into Slifer the Sky Dragon also Thunderling is weak because it is a baby and hasn't brought out its "power". Hey, no problem, you needn't apologize, that's a rule that's usually not known by newcomers. Now that you know it there's nothing to worry about. I see what you mean about the power of the baby, but you gotta think about how strong cards are nowadays and the pace of games (which usually end in a matter of 2 or 4 turns. I'm not going to be too persistent as this is Casual Cards and feedback is more lenient here, but I'll mention again a bit of a buff won't do any harm. In addition, when making cards I recommend that you don't include in their effects the mention of cards that do not exist yet, because as you can imagine it makes harder to determine a card's power. It's as if I made a card with this effect: If this card is Normal Summoned: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon 2 "Ninja Cat" from your Deck. In my mind, I know Ninja Cats are Level 2 monsters with 500/0 that can't be Tributed/used as material the turn they're summoned, so they aren't particularly dangerous. But since I've never posted that card anywhere, how will people will know they're not 3000/2500 monsters that negate Spell/Traps? lol. SOmething to keep in mind, k? n.n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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