Darch Lord Juno [Written] - Counter Fairy and Darklord support?

[Sangan7]

Darch Lord Juno

WIND - Fairy - Level 8 - ATK: 2600/DEF: 2000

You can discard this card and 1 Fairy monster: Activate 1 effect, based on that monster's Attribute. LIGHT: Set 1 Counter Trap Card from your Deck, and if you do, it cannot be destroyed by card effects. DARK: Special Summon 1 DARK Fairy monster from your GY, also gain LP equal to half that monster's ATK. If this card is in the GY: You can banish 2 Fairy monsters from your GY; add this card to your hand. You can unly use each effect of "Darch Lord Juno" once per turn.

[Rayfield Lumina]

Hey @Sangan7! New to the site, aren't you? First of all, welcome and make yourself at home n.n   Having said that, onward to the card:

Firstly, allow me some grammar polish.

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You can discard this card and 1 Fairy monster; apply the following effect, depending on the Attribute of the Fairy monster discarded.
● LIGHT: Set 1 Counter Trap directly from your Deck. It cannot be destroyed by card effects.
● DARK: Target 1 DARK Fairy monster in your GY; Special Summon it, and if you do, gain LP equal to half that monster's ATK.
If this card is in the GY: You can banish 2 Fairy monsters from your GY; add this card to your hand. You can only use each effect of "Darch Lord Juno" once per turn.

Note the differences. In the first effect I use a semi-colon instead of a colon. Semi colons separate costs/targets and actions. Then I use "apply" because the all those first three lines of text are a single effect that activates and in which you apply 1 possible effect depending on a certain something, in this case the Fairy's Attribute. Using bullets is the correct way to go when redacting effects with multiple possibilities or choosing. In LIGHT's effect, you use "and if you do". While that's a conjunction you see veeery often, I don't think you need it there, specially because and if you do denotes another action that happens after the first. In here, it's just a clause that prevents destruction. In DARK's effect, you need it, because yeah, first you do A, the Special Summoning, AND If you do, you do B, gaining LP. The rest is fine :D

And the card is pretty balanced and cool, imo, I like how it plays with both Attributes and supports their respective gimmick nicely, plus the recycling effect is looking good. 

[Sangan7]

6 hours ago, Rayfield Lumina said:

Hey @Sangan7! New to the site, aren't you? First of all, welcome and make yourself at home n.n   Having said that, onward to the card:

Firstly, allow me some grammar polish.

Note the differences. In the first effect I use a semi-colon instead of a colon. Semi colons separate costs/targets and actions. Then I use "apply" because the all those first three lines of text are a single effect that activates and in which you apply 1 possible effect depending on a certain something, in this case the Fairy's Attribute. Using bullets is the correct way to go when redacting effects with multiple possibilities or choosing. In LIGHT's effect, you use "and if you do". While that's a conjunction you see veeery often, I don't think you need it there, specially because and if you do denotes another action that happens after the first. In here, it's just a clause that prevents destruction. In DARK's effect, you need it, because yeah, first you do A, the Special Summoning, AND If you do, you do B, gaining LP. The rest is fine :D

And the card is pretty balanced and cool, imo, I like how it plays with both Attributes and supports their respective gimmick nicely, plus the recycling effect is looking good. 

Hey! Thanks for the clarification, it was really helpful Glad you liked the card!

[Rayfield Lumina]

No problem, I'm glad my reply was of help to you.

Also, please do not accept any more abuse from the Tour Guide from the Underworld. She's cute, but she has no right to treat you this badly @Sangan7 xD

See ya around n.n

[DifferentDimensionVanessa]

On 11/28/2021 at 9:47 AM, Sangan7 said:

Darch Lord Juno

LIGHT: Set 1 Counter Trap Card from your Deck, and if you do, it cannot be destroyed by card effects.

This is like a judgment coming from a courtroom. When you face this card, you know you know what's coming, but you cannot stop it, and the judgment is known by both players just like how it's known by plaintiff and defendant in court. Then again, maybe it's more like a cease & desist.