Thoughts on these cards?

[Ankh_Dev]

What do you think of these cards? i'd like to say these are my first ever cards. But i think they are well ballanced.

 

[Loleo]

There is no scale 14 so you can't Pendulum summon the first card as far as I know. 

I would also touch on a card in card discussion posted a few hours ago for grammar help "and you have “Performapal Lady Ange Ankh, The Hidden God Of All” in your other Pendulum Zone"

The second monster is just a 7500 ATK beat stick easy to Pend summon with no protection. using these guys Pendulum effects would be useful. I also think cheating them both out to win might be too easy.

[Ankh_Dev]

12 minutes ago, Loleo said:

There is no scale 14 so you can't Pendulum summon the first card as far as I know. 

I would also touch on a card in card discussion posted a few hours ago for grammar help "and you have “Performapal Lady Ange Ankh, The Hidden God Of All” in your other Pendulum Zone"

The second monster is just a 7500 ATK beat stick easy to Pend summon with no protection. using these guys Pendulum effects would be useful. I also think cheating them both out to win might be too easy.

It has to be face up in the extra deck, so basically if it was summoned and destroyed. And I meant 12, ill fix that. But if I tone it down, what do you think about the other effects?

[Loleo]

I'lll do a full review if you could paste the text bellow the cards.

For now I'll say despite the apparent absurdity these cards are surprisingly very well balanced

[The Nyx Avatar]

I will ask you to drop the 7500 ATK and DEF. Digits on cards only go up to 5000. If you want more, you use ? and list how it works in the effect.

 

If it is not changed in a day from now, I am moving this thread to Casual Cards.

[Ankh_Dev]

5 hours ago, The Nyx Avatar said:

I will ask you to drop the 7500 ATK and DEF. Digits on cards only go up to 5000. If you want more, you use ? and list how it works in the effect.

 

If it is not changed in a day from now, I am moving this thread to Casual Cards.

I apologise, im fixing that now, and thanks for letting me know.

5 hours ago, Loleo said:

I'lll do a full review if you could paste the text bellow the cards.

For now I'll say despite the apparent absurdity these cards are surprisingly very well balanced

Ra, the Sun God

Divine

Level 12

Divine-Beast / Pendulum / Effect

<13> Pendulum Scale  <13>

Pendulum effect:

Once per turn, If "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" is on the other side of the pendulum zone, you can special summon one monster from either players banished pile to your side of the field, but destroy it in the next end phase. This effect cannot be negated. Your opponent cannot activate effects in response to this effect

Monster effect:

If you can pendulum summon 13, you can pendulum summon this card from your face up extra deck. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing "Slifer the Sky Dragon", "Obelisk the Tormentor" and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" monsters on either side of the field. When this card is special summoned, special summon as many cards from your GY, that are not Divine-Beats in face-up defence position, up to the number of cards tributed for this card's summoning. If this card and "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" are both in your main monster zones, You automatically win this duel.

5000 / 5000

 

Ankh, the Hidden God of All

Divine

Level 12

Divine-Beast / Pendulum / Effect

<0> Pendulum scale <0>

Pendulum effect:

If "Ra, the Sun God" is on the other side of the pendulum scale, you can target one card in your opponent's GY, banish it, and negate it's effects. This effect cannot be negated. Your opponent cannot activate effects in response to this effect.

Monster effect:

If you can pendulum summon 13, you can pendulum summon this card from your face up extra deck. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing "Slifer the Sky Dragon", "Obelisk the Tormentor" and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" monsters on either side of the field. When this card is special summoned, special summon as many cards from your GY, that are not Divine-Beats in face-up defence position, up to the number of cards tributed for this card's summoning. If this card and "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" are both in your main monster zones, You automatically win this duel.

 

[Loleo]

Ra has the wrong text I'll do the review when I get home if that is fixed.

[Ankh_Dev]

14 hours ago, Loleo said:

Ra has the wrong text I'll do the review when I get home if that is fixed.

I forgot to tell you that I changed it a bt, so the text is the correct one

[Dokutah]

Despite using Legendary Dragon frame, ultimately its still reguler effect monster. To avoid confusion please change it to reguler dark brown effect monster frame (irl legal prints of gods use the same frame anyway)

speaking off things that unneeded you also dont need "If you can pendulum summon [the monster level], you can pendulum summon this card from your face up extra deck." Part. Thats already part of pendulum ruling on rule book rather than have to be printed on the card. Banished pile is also not official term, just use "banished card"

The pendulum effect actually really bonkers for extreme scales of 0 and 13. It can disturb opponent setup while having uninterupted "steal" on opponent stuff 

The summon effect require abit of rework:

"Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. Must be either Pendulum Summoned OR Special Summoned by [its own effect/its own procedure, which one you like]. ~~~~~~. If this card is Special summoned by [its own effect/its own procedure, same one as above],"

The last part its actually balancing since your good effect trigger on any instance of summon kinda OP

In Ra case the last insta-win effect is bit too strong i simply dont like it. There no stopping you on pendulum summon this guys after directly send to Extra deck with stuff like Weavering Eyes which happen to float any 2nd copy of the scale you destroy and from there is dirt cheap to pendulum summon them back for the insta-win

 

[Loleo]

On 11/15/2021 at 11:43 PM, Ankh_Dev said:

I apologise, im fixing that now, and thanks for letting me know. 

Ra, the Sun God

Divine

Level 12

Divine-Beast / Pendulum / Effect

<13> Pendulum Scale  <13>

Pendulum effect:

Once per turn, If you have “Ankh, The Hidden God Of All” in your other Pendulum Zone: You can special summon one monster from either players banished pile to your side of the field, but destroy it in the next end phase. This effect cannot be negated. Your opponent cannot activate effects in response to this effect

Monster effect:

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card must be either Pendulum Summoned from your extra deck or Special Summoned This card can only be special summoned by tributing "Slifer the Sky Dragon", "Obelisk the Tormentor" and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" monsters on either side of the field or pendulum summoned from your extra deck. When this card is special summoned, special summon as many cards from your GY, that are not Divine-Beats in face-up defense position, up to the number of cards tributed for this card's summoning. If this card and "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" are both in your main monster zones, You automatically win this duel. You can only activate each effect of "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" once per turn.

5000 / 5000

I don't know if a Hard once turn on a pendulum monster works on that monster's pendulum effect, but that effect shouldn't be able to repeat.

I simplified the allowance to pendulum summon it

Both the tribute the big 3 condition and the special summon effect by association will never be used because there is already an instant win fusion of the god cards.

Not being able to respond to the pendulum effect is a little off putting but makes sense. Choose either not being able to respond or not being able to be negated because if you can't respond you can't negate

On 11/15/2021 at 11:43 PM, Ankh_Dev said:

 

Ankh, the Hidden God of All

Divine

Level 12 (Yes I'm saying to make it level 1)

Divine-Beast / Pendulum / Effect

<0> Pendulum scale <0>

Pendulum effect:

If you have “Ra, the Sun God” in your other Pendulum Zone: You can target one card in your opponent's GY, banish it, and Your opponent cannot activate effects in response to this effect.

Monster effect:

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card must be either Pendulum Summoned from your extra deck or Special Summoned by tributing "Slifer the Sky Dragon", "Obelisk the Tormentor" and "The Winged Dragon of Ra" monsters on either side of the field. You can only activate each effect of "Ankh, the Hidden God of All" once per turn.

 

My fault I said the wrong monster Ankh has Ra's monster effect but I'll review anyway since that was my mistake

 

 

 

Don't need the instant win text on both cards.

Again the on summon effect is so negligible compared to the original cards it just won't happen I mean you can keep it but it doesn't change anything except lore, card space and maybe a fun challenge.

Might need a condition you cannot summon other monsters the turn you summon each of these so you have bring them out one at a time at least.

18 hours ago, Dokutah Gory, Woundslinger said:

Despite using Legendary Dragon frame, ultimately its still reguler effect monster. To avoid confusion please change it to reguler dark brown effect monster frame (irl legal prints of gods use the same frame anyway)

Oh cool.

speaking off things that unneeded you also dont need "If you can pendulum summon [the monster level], you can pendulum summon this card from your face up extra deck." Part. Thats already part of pendulum ruling on rule book rather than have to be printed on the card. Banished pile is also not official term, just use "banished card"

Well He needs to restate it is pendulum summon able because of the summoning rest, but there is a beter way to do thatriction

The pendulum effect actually really bonkers for extreme scales of 0 and 13. It can disturb opponent setup while having uninterupted "steal" on opponent stuff 

The summon effect require abit of rework:

"Cannot be Normal Summon/Set. Must be either Pendulum Summoned OR Special Summoned by [its own effect/its own procedure, which one you like]. ~~~~~~. If this card is Special summoned by [its own effect/its own procedure, same one as above],"

I incorporated this

The last part its actually balancing since your good effect trigger on any instance of summon kinda OP

In Ra case the last insta-win effect is bit too strong i simply dont like it. There no stopping you on pendulum summon this guys after directly send to Extra deck with stuff like Weavering Eyes which happen to float any 2nd copy of the scale you destroy and from there is dirt cheap to pendulum summon them back for the insta-win

I suggested additional limits on the card especially if they are being pendulum summoned, but the alternate Special Summon isn't viable because you could have just won.