Fanmade Archetype Cards #1

[Golden Person Who Exists]

Ashante, The Dominier In Training

Monster/Effect

Level: 7/Attribute: Wind

 

Assuming this was a real card, would it need a hard once per turn or a soft one? Or none at all? Also, drawing is not mine. Link to it: Seeker by Tsabo6 on DeviantArt

https://www.deviantart.com/tsabo6

[Golden Person Who Exists]

#2 Serviur Formation - Alpha/Omega

Spell/Continuous

did not make art

 

#3 Adasar, Dominu-Kaiser of Divinity

Warrior/Fusion/Effect

Attribute: Light/Level: 7

2 LIGHT Dominier Monsters

This card's Fusion Summon cannot be negated while you have more LP than your opponent. Once per turn, when this card would battle an opponent's monster, (Quick Effect) you can pay LP equal to that monster's ATK, and if you do, that monster's ATK/DEF become 0. This card cannot be targeted or destroyed by cards or effects while you have less LP than your opponent

 

 

 

[Loleo]

A few things

1. Please Edit the original post rather then replying to yourself or Post a new topic.

2. I would be happy to review your cards if you could copy the effects bellow.

3. Serviur Formation Alpha is broken. It is really easy to gain 8k LP in one turn and instead deal that damage to your opponent.

[Golden Person Who Exists]

For the first one, I'm new here, sorry.

For the second one: Will do later on

For the Third one: Hmm, yeah, you have a point. I should put a "Destroy this card if you control a monster that is not a "Serviur" "Dominier" or "Dominu-Kaiser", kinda like Burning Abyss. I made this with the presumption that most card in the archetype that gain/pay a lot of LP (like in the 3000+ bracket) will usually have a "This does not count as LP loss/gain" or something like that. Thanks for the feedback though. Much appreciated.