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This is my first thread and fanfic hope you like. I'll make more episodes whenever I can. And one more thing please reply.

 

[spoiler=Characters]

Characters

Name:Zero Langworthy

Deck: Wolf Army

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Dorm: Slifer Red

Bio: Always was underestimated but automatically put in duel academy for skill and an IQ level of 226 with a full scholarship and every place is begging for him so he took the scholarship but he needed a special favor so instead of being put in Ra he was put in Slifer. He is the main character.

Name: Anna Harmon

Deck: Girly Roids

Age: 12

Gender: Female

Dorm: Slifer Red

Bio: A very shy girl who was only accepted at duel academy at Zero's request with another friend.

Name: Dallas Yaeger

Deck: Future Heros

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Dorm: Slifer Red

Bio: Zeros oldest friend. Dallas is a little obnoxious and a very trustworthy friend.

Name: Dillan Blair

Deck: Demons

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Dorm: Obelisk Blue

Bio: Always thinks hes the best and will never except defeat. He is the most obnoxious character and a bully with a big gang of students in all dorms.

 

 

[spoiler= Episode 1 The beggining]

(Zero and a couple of people are debating about Zero)

Shepard: And finnaly a full scholership.

Zero: None of your offers please me.

???: Then what would please you.

( Two kids then burst through the door)

Anna: Where have you been we called you thirty what the heck is going on here.

Dallas: Yeah what is going on here.

???: Who are they.

Zero: They are my condition.

Dallas: Whats going on here.

???: No way.

Zero: What if one of us beat any of you in a duel or maybe those two in a tag duel against any of you two.

???: Fine.

???: Us two.

Anna: Me and Dallas.

???, ???, Dallas, and Anna: Duel!!!

 

???=4000 ???=4000 Dallas=4000 Keshena=4000

 

???: My turn I draw and play Destiny Hero Deffender in deffense position and end my turn.

Dallas: My turn draw, and I play Future Hero Scrapman ( ATK/100 DEF/1900) in deffense mode and two face down cards and that ends that.

???: Draw! And now Gene Warped Warwolf and destroy Scrapman.

Dallas: Don't forget deffender and scrapman's effect. I draw a card and two junk tokens(ATK/0 DEF/0) go on my field.

Anna: Finally I play Union Fusion but I can't do anything this turn.

???: Bad choice. Draw!!! I play vorse raider now say good by to your tokens.

Dallas: To bad you lose 500 LP when you destroy a Junk token.

???=3000 ???=4000 Dallas=4000 Anna=4000

Dallas: Now My Turn Draw!!! By paying half my LP I can activate Future Hero Fusion to get rid of these cards from my deck to Summon Future Hero Satteliteman(ATK/3000 DEF/2000) and now Union fusion activates to fuse any monster on my side of the field with any monster in Anna's fusion deck. Fuse Sattleliteman and Super Union Girlroid(ATK/4000 DEF/2500) to make Super Future Hero Missle Bowma(ATK/6000 DEF/1000) and now attack gene warped warwolf.

???: No I Lose!!!

Dallas: Not done because now I activate my face down card De-Fusion and you know the rest.

Zero: So Shepard what is it going to be.

Shepard: Fine I don't care who else is in my academy just as long as your their.

Anna and Dallas: WHAT!!!

 

To be continued...

 

 

[spoiler= Episode 2 It's Final!]

(It's been an hour later from the duel)

Anna: You want us to go to duel academy.

Zero: Thats what I'm saying.

Dallas: We're not even that good.

Anna: Hey I don't know about you but I'm the best.

Dallas: Then how come Zero always beats you.

Anna: Oh no you didn't.

Dallas: Do you really want me to answer that.

Anna:........No.

???: Is that guy supposed to be the Zero. I could duel circles around him.

Zero: I didn't know I was that bad because you don't even look like you could duel around a paper bag.

???: My name's Dillan. I'm in the top ten.

Zero: No you're not I checked those ranks 3 hours ago. Get lost.

Dillan: I wanted to duel you but it doen't seem this is the right time or place.

Dallas: What a freak.

Anna: I know.

Zero: So where were we. Oh yeah you two are going too duel academy I talked to your parents besides it would be boring without you two and you guys will be as bored as heck without me.

Dallas: Good point.

Anna: That might actually be fun.

 

To be continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Episode 3 Rarity]

Dallas: Come on Zero how come your so slow.

Anna: Yeah come on.

Zero: I'm ahead of you two. Hurry up or we'll be late.

Dallas: Oops.

(A weird man pops out of nowhere)

WM: DUEL!

Anna: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zero: Where do you get of scaring frail girls.

Anna: Hey what do you mean by frail.

WM: I'm a rare hunter and I'm here to take those cards of yours.

Zero: Your not getting my dad's cards.

Dallas: Zero made us these decks and you're defiantly not getting them.

RH: Give me those cards.

Zero: Go on I'll take care of him.

Anna: Right come on Dallas.

RH and Zero: DUEL!!!

 

RH LP=4000 Zero=4000

 

RH: My Draw! I play cost down and place millenium shield in deffense mode end my turn.

Zero: My move I play Wolf Shield(ATK/1000/2000) in deffense. Turn End!

RH: Hah You Call That A Monster! My move heh. I play a face down card!

Zero: Finnaly I play Pot Of Greed and then Wolf Fusion To make Ulti-mate Gaurdian Wolf of all elements(4000/4000). Now Wolf Sheild in attack mode. Ulti-mate attack Millenium Shield.

RH: Not so fast I activate Mirror Force.

Zero: You forgot my face down card Seven Tools of the Bandit.

RH: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!

Zero: Sorry didn't catch that attack Ulti-mate ELEMENTAL BURST!!! And don't forget his special ability you lose 500 per level of your monster. Which puts you at 1000 LP deffensless with what do you know my monster that hasn't attacked. Wolf Shield Shield Ram!

RH=0000 Zero=4000

Zero: Tell your boss your getting squat.

 

Too Be Continued...

 

 

[spoiler=Episode 4 Arrival]

(Dallas, Anna, and a lot of other people getting into duel academy are at a dock)

Dallas: Where the heck is he?!

Zero: Hey guys, you miss me?

Anna: Where were you?

Zero: did you forget about that weirdo already?

Anna: Who?

Zero and Dallas: Hopeless.

Anna: Huh?

Dallas: Nevermind.

???: Hey it's that smart kid.

Zero: What the...?

Teens: Duel him.

Zero: Fine 3 only. Hey guys Will you help me.

Dallas: I'm fine with it.

Anna: Are you sure you, just dueled that rare hunter.

Zero: I'm not hurt it was just a duel. Come on which three will duel us!

???: Are you sure what about your condition.

Teen1: I'll duel because those two will just hold you back

Teen2: Yeah I'm In!

Teen3: I agree.

Teen1,2, and 3: But on a special condition.

Zero: I swear they practiced that.

Dallas: You swear. Dude I'm going to tell your parents.

Zero and Anna: Hopeless.

Anna: What kind of conditions.

Teen1: The total LP of each team equals...

Teen1 and 2: 5000 but you can go first.

Zero: Okay.

Everybody at dock: DUEL!!!!

Z,A,D=4000 3 Teens=4000

Zero: I'll go first, DRAW!!! Hmmm this duel might be so boring. I start with pot of greed uuhhhhhhh man a one turn win.

Everybody but Zero: WHAT!!!

Dallas: But then again this isn't the first time.

Anna:True that.

Zero: Ooookaaaayyy that was weird.

Anna: Sorry.

Zero: Wolf Polymerization! I fuse the five wolf gaurdians to make Ultimate Gaurdian Wolf of all Elements(ATK4000/DEF3000)!!! Now it's time to activate his effect, for each wolf card in my graveyard Ultimate he gains 200 attack points.

The 3 Teens: So what will that help.

Zero: Not done yet. I play Wolf Speed which alows my wolf to attack no matter what.

Zero=4000 Teens=0

Teens: No way it can't be.

Anna: Oh yes he did.

Evereyone but Anna: ...

Anna: Sorry.

Teen: Hey the boats here!!

 

 

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First of all, each character talking should be in a color and the description too but the narrator should be in black (I'll be able to read it better then). Second, for each card you put, you should: either put a picture of it or put a link in another section for it. I would suggest you do a section for real cards and you put fake cards in the story but it's up to you. Third, you should use spoilers to seperate the sections. You put episode 1 on the first episode then episode two for the next one. You would also need to put a spoiler for the character section and, if you're creating the new card section, you should put one for the card section. You do a spoiler like this [+spoiler+=+Title+] (you don't use the plus signs, it was just to seperate) and then put whatever you want in it. To close it you put [+/+spoiler+] so it would like like this [spoiler=Title] whatever you want goes in here like episode 1

This was just in case you don't know and I'm not calling you dumb, it was just in case because I learned a while ago and it was pretty new to me.

As you can see I wrote a comment on your and one of the longest comments I've ever written.

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Ok but you should still put when the characters talk in different colors.

 

You should NEVER do this, it makes it look so pointless. Colors should only be used for the dramatical effect, not for telling characters apart. He already uses the PAP:D format, what more do you want?

 

Now, back to the story. A total LOEACDKAS. (Lack Of Environmental And Character Description Kills A Story) Describe what the characters look like and what the monsters look like, and be as exact as possible.

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