HQCardmaker Posted November 5, 2021 Report Share Posted November 5, 2021 I am looking to make effects that play off of this idea that a monster has to be summoned over another monster in order to make it stronger. Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy/Effect Effect: If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 2000 or above or below 1000, banish this card face down. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel. ATK:1000/DEF:1000 Broth Goldie - 2000 Strong Attribute: EARTH Level: 6 Fairy/Effect Effect: If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 3000 or above or below 2000, banish this card face down. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel. You may Tribute 1 Monster with the Original Name of "Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong" as all required Tributes to Summon this card. Broth Goldie - Camera Creature Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy ATK: 1100/DEF: 1100 The film this monster uses to record events is of unknown origin. But it can broadcast and fend off with the best of them. Yellow-Furred Camera Warp Continuous Trap Card Every time you Summon a "Broth Goldie" Monster or your opponent casts a Spell, place a Broadcast Counter (max. 3) on a Monster you control whose Original Name is "Broth Goldie - Camera Creature" if possible. At the end of your Draw Phase, you may remove 2 Broadcast Counters from any of your Monsters; choose and activate one of the following effects: * Banish the last card your opponent drew until the start of their next Draw Phase. * Banish the last card you drew until the end of your End Phase. * Banish all "Broth Goldie" Monsters on your side of the Field. Anything they add to effects that look for Banished cards is halved. Winged Sphere the Faithful Attribute: WIND Level: 5 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 2000/ DEF: 1600 A Tribute is not required to Summon this Monster. However, if this Monster is about to be used for another Summon (Tributed, paid as a Cost, attached, etc.), Treat this card's Level as 3, and if the Monster being Summoned is a Fiend or has "Chaos" or "The Wicked" or "Jinzo" in its Name, that Monster's post-its-other-calcuations' ATK and DEF are halved (even if the Effect of said Monster says otherwise) if you battled in the Battle Phase prior, "Kuri" Monsters being an exception. Rainbow Winged Sphere Attribute: WIND Level: 8 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 3000/ DEF: 2000 You can not Normal Summon this card. You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Winged Sphere the Faithful" on your side of the Field. If this attacks or is attacked while in Attack Position in the Battle Phase, after Damage Calculation, if possible, if this has less Defense than Attack at the time, swap the Attack and Defense of this card and which gets changed by Effects (except for this Effect) until the end of your next Battle Phase after. If this Effect is negated, the Attribute of this Monster becomes LIGHT instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted November 6, 2021 Report Share Posted November 6, 2021 The yellow kirby is back to the scene, @HQCardmaker You missed mentioning the ATK / DEF of 2000 Strong (but we can imagine them lol). I suggested last time that these do not need the Once per Duel Clause. These cards... welp, they aren't dangerous or strong, really, there's no need to hurt them. Ummm... don't take it bad, but the PSCT/Card grammar is still all over the place. I dunno, I could mention where the mistakes are, but the main thing I'd suggest before even pointing out grammar rules and stuff is to read your official cards, or take a peek at a site like Yugipedia and read lots of card effects. Read them a couple of times, and read them carefully, so the actual terms that should be used stick to you. I suggest this in the most friendly manner, because I don't want to hurt you, but the way you write your cards right now is, either difficult to understand at times, or redacted in a way that is very off from the official way you're supposed to write cards. Trust me, I want you to improve, hence why I dare to tell you this >_<''. Just don't give up and keep creating cards, ok? Heck, Yellow-Furred Camera Warp has potential if you manage to make support that lets you swarm the Broth Goldie guys (obviously that would mean, removing the once per Duel thing) and replacing the other effects by something that affects the opponent. Winged Sphere has that cool effect to not require Tribute and change Level depending on the situation, but the archetypes mentioned in the card seem a bit random, IDK exactly which criteria you used to include them. Rainbow Winged Sphere is ok. Again, IDK what kind of lore is behind certain effect, like the Attribute changing one (but it's Rainbow, so one can only suppose). Anywho, since it swaps stats after attacking, you'd do well in changing its battle position too for the funzies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted November 8, 2021 Report Share Posted November 8, 2021 On 11/5/2021 at 6:22 PM, HQCardmaker said: I am looking to make effects that play off of this idea that a monster has to be summoned over another monster in order to make it stronger. Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy/Effect Effect: If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 2000 or above or below 1000, banish this card face down. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel. ATK:1000/DEF:1000 Broth Goldie - 2000 Strong Attribute: EARTH Level: 6 Fairy/Effect Effect: If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 3000 or above or below 2000, banish this card face down. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel. You may Tribute 1 Monster with the Original Name of "Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong" as all required Tributes to Summon this card. Broth Goldie - Camera Creature Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy ATK: 1100/DEF: 1100 The film this monster uses to record events is of unknown origin. But it can broadcast and fend off with the best of them. Yellow-Furred Camera Warp Continuous Trap Card Every time you Summon a "Broth Goldie" Monster or your opponent casts a Spell, place a Broadcast Counter (max. 3) on a Monster you control whose Original Name is "Broth Goldie - Camera Creature" if possible. At the end of your Draw Phase, you may remove 2 Broadcast Counters from any of your Monsters; choose and activate one of the following effects: * Banish the last card your opponent drew until the start of their next Draw Phase. * Banish the last card you drew until the end of your End Phase. * Banish all "Broth Goldie" Monsters on your side of the Field. Anything they add to effects that look for Banished cards is halved. Winged Sphere the Faithful Attribute: WIND Level: 5 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 2000/ DEF: 1600 A Tribute is not required to Summon this Monster. However, if this Monster is about to be used for another Summon (Tributed, paid as a Cost, attached, etc.), Treat this card's Level as 3, and if the Monster being Summoned is a Fiend or has "Chaos" or "The Wicked" or "Jinzo" in its Name, that Monster's post-its-other-calcuations' ATK and DEF are halved (even if the Effect of said Monster says otherwise) if you battled in the Battle Phase prior, "Kuri" Monsters being an exception. Rainbow Winged Sphere Attribute: WIND Level: 8 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 3000/ DEF: 2000 You can not Normal Summon this card. You can only Special Summon this card by Tributing 1 "Winged Sphere the Faithful" on your side of the Field. If this attacks or is attacked while in Attack Position in the Battle Phase, after Damage Calculation, if possible, if this has less Defense than Attack at the time, swap the Attack and Defense of this card and which gets changed by Effects (except for this Effect) until the end of your next Battle Phase after. If this Effect is negated, the Attribute of this Monster becomes LIGHT instead. "You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel." This is a problem it hurts so much. If it is necessary make it once per turn.  Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy/Effect Effect: Once per turn, During either Player's main phase 1: If you control no monsters you can Special summon this card from your hand or banished. If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 2000 or above or below 1000: banish this card, then you can add one "Broth Goldie" from your deck to your hand. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with an equal or higher Original Defense than this card has this turn. ATK:1000/DEF:1000 Broth Goldie - 2000 Strong Attribute: EARTH Level: 6 Fairy/Effect Effect: Cannot be normal summoned/set. Must first be special summoned by tributing one "Broth Goldie" you control. If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 3000 or above or below 2000, banish this card. Unaffected by monsters with more than 3000ATK or DEF or less than 2000ATK or DEF. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Turn. ATK:2000/DEF:2000 Broth Goldie - Camera Creature Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy ATK: 1100/DEF: 1100 You can special summon this card from your hand If you control a Broth Goldie with a lower original ATK and DEF as this card. Every time you Summon a "Broth Goldie" Monster or your opponent casts a Spell, place a Broadcast Counter (max. 6) on this card. Once per turn (quick effect) you may remove Broadcast Counters from this card; choose and activate one of the following effects for each 2 Broadcast counters removed: * Banish a random card in your opponent's hand. * add a random card you own that has been banished facedown to your hand * Special summon a banished "Broth Goldie" monsters with different names  Winged Sphere the Faithful Attribute: WIND Level: 5 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 2000/ DEF: 1600 If you control a "Kuri" monster you an Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Winged Sphere the Faithful" once per turn. Rainbow Winged Sphere Kuriboh Attribute: WIND Level: 8 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 3000/ DEF: 2000 This card cannot be Normal Summon/Set this card. You can only Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 "Winged Sphere the Faithful" on your side of the Field. If this battles: After Damage Calculation if this has less Defense than Attack at the time, swap the Attack and Defense of this card.  I made these way more powerful and now they might be good? Thoughts?  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HQCardmaker Posted November 13, 2021 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2021 On 11/7/2021 at 7:13 PM, Loleo said: "You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Duel." This is a problem it hurts so much. If it is necessary make it once per turn.  Broth Goldie - 1000 Strong Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy/Effect Effect: Once per turn, During either Player's main phase 1: If you control no monsters you can Special summon this card from your hand or banished. If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 2000 or above or below 1000: banish this card, then you can add one "Broth Goldie" from your deck to your hand. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with an equal or higher Original Defense than this card has this turn. ATK:1000/DEF:1000 Broth Goldie - 2000 Strong Attribute: EARTH Level: 6 Fairy/Effect Effect: Cannot be normal summoned/set. Must first be special summoned by tributing one "Broth Goldie" you control. If the ATK or DEF of this card becomes 3000 or above or below 2000, banish this card. Unaffected by monsters with more than 3000ATK or DEF or less than 2000ATK or DEF. You can not Summon this card if you Summoned another "Broth Goldie" with a higher Original Defense than this has this Turn. ATK:2000/DEF:2000 Broth Goldie - Camera Creature Attribute: LIGHT Level: 3 Fairy ATK: 1100/DEF: 1100 You can special summon this card from your hand If you control a Broth Goldie with a lower original ATK and DEF as this card. Every time you Summon a "Broth Goldie" Monster or your opponent casts a Spell, place a Broadcast Counter (max. 6) on this card. Once per turn (quick effect) you may remove Broadcast Counters from this card; choose and activate one of the following effects for each 2 Broadcast counters removed: * Banish a random card in your opponent's hand. * add a random card you own that has been banished facedown to your hand * Special summon a banished "Broth Goldie" monsters with different names  Winged Sphere the Faithful Attribute: WIND Level: 5 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 2000/ DEF: 1600 If you control a "Kuri" monster you an Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned: draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Winged Sphere the Faithful" once per turn. Rainbow Winged Sphere Kuriboh Attribute: WIND Level: 8 Winged-Beast/Effect ATK: 3000/ DEF: 2000 This card cannot be Normal Summon/Set this card. You can only Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 "Winged Sphere the Faithful" on your side of the Field. If this battles: After Damage Calculation if this has less Defense than Attack at the time, swap the Attack and Defense of this card.  I made these way more powerful and now they might be good? Thoughts?  I like the retrain. Making a creature a Kuriboh out of nowhere seems a bit tight of a conception, but I get that it is to balance it, so I'll let it be that way. I like how the 1100 Attack-backed effect seems to behave like Goku Black's Scythe. Seems like there is a bit of lore there. Your representation seems to be on the money. I like how you seem to have taken into account the Attributes as well and said: Well, the Field effects can't make these similarly named monsters get the same power boost, as far as I know, so... this effect should work nicely. It shows attention to detail. It is sad that the original effect of the Winged Sphere card had to die, but these things happen. Especially since I worded the effect wonky-like. Sometimes XYZ-Card power-plays do not equal a fun enough play. (There is a card or two that could play off a card being a level 3 or attach a level 3 card, I think. I'd have to look them up, but I'm pretty sure they exist.) I'm not sure, but I think if someone really wanted to stretch the meta, they could be teamed up with 4-Starred Ladybug of Doom in a special way with this retrain. It'd be a weird combo, considering the effects that would play off of each other, but it would work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loleo Posted November 13, 2021 Report Share Posted November 13, 2021 8 hours ago, HQCardmaker said: I like the retrain. Making a creature a Kuriboh out of nowhere seems a bit tight of a conception, but I get that it is to balance it, so I'll let it be that way. The original was advantageous for "Kuri" monsters and was "Rainbow Winged Sphere" not a Kuriboh reference? I like how the 1100 Attack-backed effect seems to behave like Goku Black's Scythe. Seems like there is a bit of lore there. Your representation seems to be on the money. I like how you seem to have taken into account the Attributes as well and said: Well, the Field effects can't make these similarly named monsters get the same power boost, as far as I know, so... this effect should work nicely. It shows attention to detail. :) It is sad that the original effect of the Winged Sphere card had to die, but these things happen. Especially since I worded the effect wonky-like. Sometimes XYZ-Card power-plays do not equal a fun enough play. (There is a card or two that could play off a card being a level 3 or attach a level 3 card, I think. I'd have to look them up, but I'm pretty sure they exist.) I was really confused about the original effect. The way I read it it was extremely UNDER powered. A level 5 monster that could be normal summoned without tributes, was treated as level 3 when used as tribute or material, and sometimes halved the attack of the monster you were trying to summon. It seemed like you could of just had a level 3 monster that said "If this card is used as material or tribute for the summon of a monster: You can halve the summoned monsters ATK." ... Am I missing something? I'm not sure, but I think if someone really wanted to stretch the meta, they could be teamed up with 4-Starred Ladybug of Doom in a special way with this retrain. It'd be a weird combo, considering the effects that would play off of each other, but it would work. What an interesting thought that would be hilarious and I'd love to see it.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pommelo Posted November 15, 2021 Report Share Posted November 15, 2021 I didn't realize until now that my comment was completely ignored by HQ while other replies were attended, I suppose the nature of my post wasn't appreciated despite my full positive intention. Very well then, @HQCardmaker, suit yourself. Now you can be sure I'm never posting in your content anymore, so you can be happy and comfortable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HQCardmaker Posted November 15, 2021 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2021 On 11/6/2021 at 3:34 PM, Rayfield Lumina said: The yellow kirby is back to the scene, @HQCardmaker You missed mentioning the ATK / DEF of 2000 Strong (but we can imagine them lol). I suggested last time that these do not need the Once per Duel Clause. These cards... welp, they aren't dangerous or strong, really, there's no need to hurt them. Ummm... don't take it bad, but the PSCT/Card grammar is still all over the place. I dunno, I could mention where the mistakes are, but the main thing I'd suggest before even pointing out grammar rules and stuff is to read your official cards, or take a peek at a site like Yugipedia and read lots of card effects. Read them a couple of times, and read them carefully, so the actual terms that should be used stick to you. I suggest this in the most friendly manner, because I don't want to hurt you, but the way you write your cards right now is, either difficult to understand at times, or redacted in a way that is very off from the official way you're supposed to write cards. Trust me, I want you to improve, hence why I dare to tell you this >_<''. Just don't give up and keep creating cards, ok? Heck, Yellow-Furred Camera Warp has potential if you manage to make support that lets you swarm the Broth Goldie guys (obviously that would mean, removing the once per Duel thing) and replacing the other effects by something that affects the opponent. Winged Sphere has that cool effect to not require Tribute and change Level depending on the situation, but the archetypes mentioned in the card seem a bit random, IDK exactly which criteria you used to include them. Rainbow Winged Sphere is ok. Again, IDK what kind of lore is behind certain effect, like the Attribute changing one (but it's Rainbow, so one can only suppose). Anywho, since it swaps stats after attacking, you'd do well in changing its battle position too for the funzies. Your dare is acknowledged. I'll try to look up the information needed. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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