Mortal Kombat and Other Similar Games ( If Sucessful I will make more cards of similar Ilk )

[BowWow]

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Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan .

Level.4

Attribute.Dark

Type.Warrior 

Attack.2000

Defence.1500

Effect. You have to pay 800 Life Points in order for "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" to attack. ". Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan can attack twice per battle phase but only if your opponent has a monster on the field . "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" has piercing . When "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" inflicts battle damage to your opponent they have to discard 1 card from their hand at random. If Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan has attacked this turn he gets destroyed and you take 1000 points of damage from how many cards your opponent discarded. Once Per Turn you can look at 1 random card in your opponents hand. When Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan is destroyed you can add 1 "Black Dragon Clan" from your deck to your hand .

Need help as "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" is a SERIOUS mouthful ( The Name I mean) (Still read through his effect and tell me what you think)

 

Liu Kang

Level.4

Attribute.Light

Type.Warrior

Attack.1800

Defence.1100

Effect. During your Standby Phase your opponent takes 500 points of damage for every card in their hand when "Liu Kang" is on the field face up on the field. When "Liu Kang" attacks a Facedown monster on your opponents side of the field it's immediatley destroyed and if it's a "Dark" Attribute Or a "Fiend" Type monster your opponent takes 400 damage X the level of the destroyed monster . Everytime "Liu Kang" destroys a "Dark" Attribute or a "Fiend" Type monster it gains 300 attack . Once Per Turn you can send "Liu Kang" from yourside of the field to the Graveyard to look at your Opponents hand ( I do know this effect could be problematic ) and banish all "Dark" Attribute and "Fiend" Type monsters in their hand .

 

 

Shang Tsung 

Level.6

Attribute.Dark

Type.Spell Caster

Attack.2400

Defence.1500

Effect/Tuner/Spirit. "Shang Tsung"  returns to your hand during your end phase if you normal summoned  a monster this turn .  "Shang Tsung" cannot be Normal Summoned .  "Shang Tsung" can only be Special Summoned by banishing 1 monster from your GY or your opponents GY . During your end phase  you can Banish 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and "Shang Tsung" gains half the attack points of the banished monster and you gain life points equal to half the attack points of the banished monster . You can keep "Shang Tsung" on the field if you banished 1 monster in either players GY or field . (Once Per Turn" If "Shang Tsung" was going to be banished or destroyed you can banish 1 monster from your GY or your opponents GY to (Keep Shang Tusng on the field ???????) . Once Per Turn you can Banish 1 "Spirit" monster in your hand and then Banish 1 card in your opponents hand at random .

 

 

Smoke

Level.4

Attribute.Dark

Type.Warrior

Attack.2000

Defence.1200

Effect/Spirit. "Smoke"  returns to your hand during your end phase if you normal summoned "Smoke" this turn. You can Banish "Smoke" from your hand to add 1 "Spirit" monster from your DECK or GY to your hand or you can Special Summon a "Spirit" monster from your hand without summoning conditions. The turn after "Smoke" is Banished you can banish 1 "Spirit" monster from your GY or hand to add "Smoke" back to your hand.

 

 

 

 

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On 9/25/2021 at 6:12 PM, BowWow said:

Need help with text 

 

 

 

Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan .

Level.4

Attribute.Dark

Type.Warrior 

Attack.2000

Defence.1500

Effect. You have to pay 800 Life Points in order for "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" to attack. "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" is also a Machine Type monster. Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan can attack twice per battle phase but only if your opponent has a monster on the field . "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" has piercing . When "Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan" inflicts battle damage to your opponent they have to discard 1 card from their hand at random. If Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan has attacked this turn he gets destroyed and you take 1000 points of damage from how many cards your opponent discarded. Once Per Turn you can look at 1 random card in your opponents hand. When Kano - Leader Of The Black Dragon Clan is destroyed you can add 1 "Black Dragon Clan" from your deck to your hand .

This card can attack twice during each battle phase. If this card inflicts battle damage: your opponent must discard one random card.

I would just leave it as this ^

 This card is also treated as machine type (I get that this is lore but it is unnecessary there are other machine warriors that are just treated as one). You can look at one card in your opponent's hand. You must pay 800 LP in order to declare an attack with this monster. If this card attacks and is destroyed by battle: take 1000 LP of damage per card your opponent discarded by the effect of "Kano". If this card is destroyed: you can add 1 "Black Dragon Clan" from your deck to your hand .

This^ is how you would rewrite your effect PS make sure to note there are no other dragon clan cards yet. You could also abbreviate to "of the BDC" Fairly Powered

 

On 9/25/2021 at 6:12 PM, BowWow said:

Liu Kang

Level.4

Attribute.Light

Type.Warrior

Attack.1800

Defence.1100

Effect. "Liu Kang" is also a "Fire" Attribute Monster . During your Standby Phase your opponent takes 500 points of damage for every card in their hand when "Liu Kang" is on the field face up on the field. When "Liu Kang" attacks a Facedown monster on your opponents side of the field it's immediatley destroyed and if it's a "Dark" Attribute Or a "Fiend" Type monster your opponent takes 400 damage X the level of the destroyed monster . Everytime "Liu Kang" destroys a "Dark" Attribute or a "Fiend" Type monster it gains 300 attack . Once Per Turn you can send "Liu Kang" from yourside of the field to the Graveyard to look at your Opponents hand ( I do know this effect could be problematic ) and banish all "Dark" Attribute and "Fiend" Type monsters in their hand .

First 3 things

1. The first 2 monsters both incentivize your opponent to play with an empty hand (which isn't too good)

2. more lore double attribute/type

3. It's a hate card targeted against a type and/or attribute

During your Standby Phase: your opponent takes 500 points of damage for every card in their hand. If this card destroys a facedown monster: this card gains 300 ATK, if you do, inflict 400 damage X the rank/level of the destroyed monster. OP

 

 

On 9/25/2021 at 6:12 PM, BowWow said:

Shang Tsung 

Level.6

Attribute.Dark

Type.Spell Caster

Attack.2400

Defence.1500

Effect/Tuner/Spirit. "Shang Tsung"  returns to your hand during your end phase if you normal summoned  a monster this turn .  "Shang Tsung" cannot be Normal Summoned .  "Shang Tsung" can only be Special Summoned by banishing 1 monster from your GY or your opponents GY . During your end phase  you can Banish 1 monster on your opponents side of the field and "Shang Tsung" gains half the attack points of the banished monster and you gain life points equal to half the attack points of the banished monster . You can keep "Shang Tsung" on the field if you banished 1 monster in either players GY or field . (Once Per Turn" If "Shang Tsung" was going to be banished or destroyed you can banish 1 monster from your GY or your opponents GY to (Keep Shang Tusng on the field ???????) . Once Per Turn you can Banish 1 "Spirit" monster in your hand and then Banish 1 card in your opponents hand at random .

This is a psuedo spirit and just a wayyyy better D/D crow. I don't feel like going through this card's grammar except

remove all the once per turns and just make a HOPT (You can only use each effect of "Shang Tsung" once per turn), replace all the instances of the cards name with "this card", and "If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effect: you can banish one monster from either player's GY instead" OP

 

On 9/25/2021 at 6:12 PM, BowWow said:

 

Smoke

Level.4

Attribute.Dark

Type.Warrior

Attack.2000

Defence.1200

Effect/Spirit.  "Smoke" is also a "Zombie" type monster. "Smoke"  returns to your hand during your end phase if you normal summoned "Smoke" this turn. You can Banish "Smoke" from your hand to add 1 "Spirit" monster from your DECK or GY to your hand or you can Special Summon a "Spirit" monster from your hand without summoning conditions. The turn after "Smoke" is Banished you can banish 1 "Spirit" monster from your GY or hand to add "Smoke" back to your hand.

Psuedo spirit, Double typed (triple including spirit)

Banish "Smoke" from your hand; You can add 1 "Spirit" monster from your Deck or GY to your hand or Special Summon a "Spirit" monster from your hand ignoring its summoning conditions. The turn after "Smoke" is Banished (when? at the start of your opponent's turn?) you can banish 1 "Spirit" monster from your hand or GY; return 1 banished "Smoke" to your hand.

Ignoring summoning conditions is a little much... OP

 

 

 

I would like to change Just right to OP.