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Booster Pack Contest


Kallan

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This is the contest. It needs to be a set of 9 or (not "to") 13 cards. Their is no special type needed to be made. No little Booster Pack graphics need to be made. :P

 

The cards will be rated by:

 

1. Creativity

2. Nice variety of useful, but not overpowered cards.

3. Grammar

4. Carefulness

5. Wording

6. Artwork (Please, no white backgrounds.)

7. Effect realisticness

 

Make sure the pack has a nice name also.

 

The due date is July 11th.

 

The prizes are as follows:

 

1st Place: 3 Reps [soulChildXXXX]

2nd Place: 2 Reps [Gist] BONUS REP! 5 POINTS!

3rd Place: 1 Reps [Quagmire_jr]

 

Yes, I am giving the bonus prize to our second place winner, Gist. He did excellent in description, artwork, realism (kind of), creativity, and grammar! Those are what I most look out for, so I am awarding my bonus prize to Gist! Quagmire would have gotten first if not for his over-used artwork. Sorry![/b]

 

If I find someone doing super special awesome in all seven categories, they will get a bonus rep and 5 points.

 

Also, I don't need any judges. :D Thanks for attempting to ask. :P

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Replying to Quag.

 

I liked those cards. Make sure you put face-down, not face down. That's because face-down is one word. I spotted a couple typos in a few of the cards also. Also, instead of "for the remainder of the turn," say "until the end of the turn."

Lastly, it is "defense," not "defence."

 

Doppleganger- I love the idea...and the name. TYPO!

Switch-Master- I like the artwork on this. There is a grammar mistake, the wording could use some work, and there is a typo.

Trans-Vampire- This is a pretty awesome card. It's useful and it's not in any way broken. Good work. TYPO!

Breaker Enforcer- Everything is good on this one except what is mentioned at the very top. The artwork isn't bad, the effect is useful, and it is quite creative.

Dragoness Witch- Make sure you always capitalize "Dragon Counter!"

Tributar- Woah, I really want that card. :( Don't capitalize "level."

Shield Defender- I definitely want this card too.

Dark Decider- There are a few grammar mistakes here. Don't say "magic" anymore; say "spell"!

Phase Disruption Blademaster- That's a mouthful. :P TYPO!

Shadow Shifter- 9/10

Defensive Marytr- The artwork should be...changed...and you should get rid of the "or 300 Life Points" part. That's too small a cost for a card like that.

Soul Blaster- original

Dark Bargain- There's a serious wording problem here.

 

If you can't spot some of these errors, I'll show them to you.

 

 

Ratings:

 

1. 96/100

2. 81/100

3. 78/100

4. 72/100

5. 75/100

6. 90/100

7. 80/100

 

Total: 572 out of 700

 

By the way, those points mean barely anything when it comes to winning the contest. I was just criticizing you. :P

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Defence is spelled wrong?!?!?!?! iv been spelling it that way forever (even on school papers)... if thats true i have it all over the forum... AHHHHHHHHH

 

can i say "magic" if i want and just pretend it was from metal raiders?

 

but overall, il try to fix it all... and ty for the heads up...

 

but r u sure i spelled defence wrong??? plz tell me that it is spelled defence...

 

how can u take points off for "for the remainder of the turn," when some cards actually phrase it that way???

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I promise you, it's spelled "defense". Well, I think in certain conditions it can be spelled "defence," but I'm not sure. All I know is, on the cards, they spell it "defense."

 

I like "spell" better. :P

 

By the way, I'm not doing that for everyone. I'm just doing it for the lucky person who entered first. Sorry!

 

And your ratings won't go as far up as they would go if you'd already done it before I told you. Sorry, probably only half those points will be added.

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no/ i use the same pic cuz i love it... but the card itself is different. I lso just love that word- "doppleganger" -so i use it wherever i can. if you look atht eh effect u would see its different.

 

with all of my cards ul see that when i find a pic i like i try to use it again and again and again...

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u must b slipping bhim... i still dont see any critisism for my cards...

 

I've been gone, and will be for the next week and a half, so yeah haha

 

I'll criticize them when I get back :)

 

And defence is British, defense is American.

 

And "Doppleganger" is spelled "Doppelganger." I assume that's the typo?

 

As for my reservation, I'm removing it.

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It doesn't matter. "Doppleganger" can still be used for the cards, as most have odd names. Mike has the only reserved entry left. Anyone can post their entries until 11:59 E.S.T. tonight.

 

This looks good for you, Quag. :D

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