growler7 Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 you still need a character? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDrawer Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Your fanfic roxks!!the first one I´ve read in this site,but still good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Thanks. There's a movie coming out for it. You can see it in another thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 I can't wait for the movie...Say...Have you checked out my Reversal of Fear yet??? The Season Finale is tomorrow!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 I did. It's great. By the way, all fans of this fan-fic, should check out my movie trailer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 31, 2007 Report Share Posted August 31, 2007 nice job you should make some more heros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red-eyes Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Good Job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Episode 20: Eria The Water Charmer! Riley, Ace, Seto, Jessie, and Crystal are standing in the park, as Crystal tries to recover from her duel. Riley: Crystal, you did a great job out there. I'm very proud of you.Ace: Me too.Jessie: That was some of the best dueling I've ever seen.Crystal: Thanks you guys. But I don't think anything was accomplished. I mean, Shadow still got some energy, and we didn't stop him yet.Seto: Take things one step at a time, ok. So Jessie, what inspired you to show up.Jessie: Well, after I defeated one of Shadow's duelists, I overheard someone talking about Jake dueling you guys. I had to come and see what was going on. Unfortunately, I couldn't stop him in time.Riley: It's the effort that counts. Jessie: Thanks everyone. As they all talked, and introduced themselves to Jessie (except for Seto of course), a huge flash of blue energy came down, hitting them all. Riley: What's happening?!Jessie: I don't know, but I have a feeling it's not a good thing. They all passed out, then woke up near a waterfall. Ace: Where are we?Riley: I dunno. The last thing I remember was talking in the park.Seto: Apparently we've been transported somewhere else. Jessie: That Blue Energy! That's what transported us here!Crystal: I'm confused.Riley: I think we should find a way out of here! Seto: So do I, but we should find out where we are.Jessie: Right. Let's get out of here. ???: You can't leave just yet.Jessie: What? Who are you????: My name is Eria. Welcome to the world of duel spirits. As they all looked over, Eria The Water Charmer was standing there, duel disk and all. Jessie: Your a duel spirit?Eria: Yes. You must be Jessie Andersen?Jessie: Yes, but how did you know?Eria: You can see duel spirits. There are only a few duelists who can. Seto walked up. Seto: No offense, but we have important business to take care of. So tell us how to get out of here.Eria: Yes, I know. You have to duel Shadow.Seto: That's right. We can't do that here.Eria: You see, you were brought here to be tested. Before Riley can duel Shadow, he must defeat all four of us charmers. Riley: I'm not suprised you know my name. But I am suprised that you think I am the one who should duel Shadow.Eria: You are very talented Riley. If you can defeat all four charmers, then you will be able to defeat Shadow.Riley: I dueled Shadow a few weeks ago, and defeated him.Eria: That wasn't Shadow. That was a duelist who works for him.Ace: Wow. I never knew that.Riley: Me neither. Well, I guess if I have to duel you, I will.Crystal: This should be a good duel. Eria and Riley walked over to an open area, and activated their duel disks. Riley: Ladies first. Eria: Thank you. I'll start by summoning Treeborn Frog in defense mode. Then, I play one card face-down and end my turn.Riley: My turn. *I fixed up my deck since I last dueled, so hopefully these new cards will be helpful.* I summon Spear Dragon in attack mode. Attack her Treeborn Frog with Emerald Strike!"Eria: Ouch. The second turn of the duel and my lifepoints are already 2200.Riley: I guess I am a good duelist. Maybe I will be able to defeat Shadow with no problem.Eria: Don't get overconfident. You haven't won yet. This duel just started.Riley: I end my turn.Eria: My move. I summon Eria The Water Charmer in attack mode. Riley: Whoa. She just summoned herself! Crystal: She just summoned herself to the field!Jessie: Well yes. This is the world of duel spirits, so you can't be suprised at that! Eria: You look suprised. I am the first of many duel spirits you will duel against. Anyway, I activate the spell card, Hydro Draw. Now, I can remove from play any card on my side of the field, and draw 1 card from my deck. So I will remove from play my face-down Charmer Summon, and draw 1 card. Then, I activate my Element Strike spell card. I can increase the attack of one monster with a Water, Fire, Wind, or Earth attribute by 500 points. Then, if the increased monster destroys a monster in battle, I gain lifepoints equal to the destroyed monster's attack points. So, Eria The Water Charmer attack his Spear Dragon!Riley: What a good move. Now, she gains 1900 lifepoints.Eria: It's your turn now.Riley: Watch this! I summon Elemental Hero Avian! Jessie: What the?! Episode 21: A New Set Of Heroes! This episode isn't very long. Episode 21 will be posted today as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Episode 20: Eria The Water Charmer! Riley, Ace, Seto, Jessie, and Crystal are standing in the park, as Crystal tries to recover from her duel. Riley: Crystal, you did a great job out there. I'm very proud of you.Ace: Me too.Jessie: That was some of the best dueling I've ever seen.Crystal: Thanks you guys. But I don't think anything was accomplished. I mean, Shadow still got some energy, and we didn't stop him yet.Seto: Take things one step at a time, ok. So Jessie, what inspired you to show up.Jessie: Well, after I defeated one of Shadow's duelists, I overheard someone talking about Jake dueling you guys. I had to come and see what was going on. Unfortunately, I couldn't stop him in time.Riley: It's the effort that counts. Jessie: Thanks everyone. As they all talked, and introduced themselves to Jessie (except for Seto of course), a huge flash of blue energy came down, hitting them all. Riley: What's happening?!Jessie: I don't know, but I have a feeling it's not a good thing. They all passed out, then woke up near a waterfall. Ace: Where are we?Riley: I dunno. The last thing I remember was talking in the park.Seto: Apparently we've been transported somewhere else. Jessie: That Blue Energy! That's what transported us here!Crystal: I'm confused.Riley: I think we should find a way out of here! Seto: So do I, but we should find out where we are.Jessie: Right. Let's get out of here. ???: You can't leave just yet.Jessie: What? Who are you????: My name is Eria. Welcome to the world of duel spirits. As they all looked over, Eria The Water Charmer was standing there, duel disk and all. Jessie: Your a duel spirit?Eria: Yes. You must be Jessie Andersen?Jessie: Yes, but how did you know?Eria: You can see duel spirits. There are only a few duelists who can. Seto walked up. Seto: No offense, but we have important business to take care of. So tell us how to get out of here.Eria: Yes, I know. You have to duel Shadow.Seto: That's right. We can't do that here.Eria: You see, you were brought here to be tested. Before Riley can duel Shadow, he must defeat all four of us charmers. Riley: I'm not suprised you know my name. But I am suprised that you think I am the one who should duel Shadow.Eria: You are very talented Riley. If you can defeat all four charmers, then you will be able to defeat Shadow.Riley: I dueled Shadow a few weeks ago, and defeated him.Eria: That wasn't Shadow. That was a duelist who works for him.Ace: Wow. I never knew that.Riley: Me neither. Well, I guess if I have to duel you, I will.Crystal: This should be a good duel. Eria and Riley walked over to an open area, and activated their duel disks. Riley: Ladies first. Eria: Thank you. I'll start by summoning Treeborn Frog in defense mode. Then, I play one card face-down and end my turn.Riley: My turn. *I fixed up my deck since I last dueled, so hopefully these new cards will be helpful.* I summon Spear Dragon in attack mode. Attack her Treeborn Frog with Emerald Strike!"Eria: Ouch. The second turn of the duel and my lifepoints are already 2200.Riley: I guess I am a good duelist. Maybe I will be able to defeat Shadow with no problem.Eria: Don't get overconfident. You haven't won yet. This duel just started.Riley: I end my turn.Eria: My move. I summon Eria The Water Charmer in attack mode. Riley: Whoa. She just summoned herself! Crystal: She just summoned herself to the field!Jessie: Well yes. This is the world of duel spirits, so you can't be suprised at that! Eria: You look suprised. I am the first of many duel spirits you will duel against. Anyway, I activate the spell card, Hydro Draw. Now, I can remove from play any card on my side of the field, and draw 1 card from my deck. So I will remove from play my face-down Charmer Summon, and draw 1 card. Then, I activate my Element Strike spell card. I can increase the attack of one monster with a Water, Fire, Wind, or Earth attribute by 500 points. Then, if the increased monster destroys a monster in battle, I gain lifepoints equal to the destroyed monster's attack points. So, Eria The Water Charmer attack his Spear Dragon!Riley: What a good move. Now, she gains 1900 lifepoints.Eria: It's your turn now.Riley: Watch this! I summon Elemental Hero Avian! Jessie: What the?! Episode 21: A New Set Of Heroes! This episode isn't very long. Episode 21 will be posted today as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Last Time On Yugioh Hidden Legacy Eria: My move. I summon Eria The Water Charmer in attack mode. Riley: Whoa. She just summoned herself! Crystal: She just summoned herself to the field!Jessie: Well yes. This is the world of duel spirits, so you can't be suprised at that! Eria: You look suprised. I am the first of many duel spirits you will duel against. Anyway, I activate the spell card, Hydro Draw. Now, I can remove from play any card on my side of the field, and draw 1 card from my deck. So I will remove from play my face-down Charmer Summon, and draw 1 card. Then, I activate my Element Strike spell card. I can increase the attack of one monster with a Water, Fire, Wind, or Earth attribute by 500 points. Then, if the increased monster destroys a monster in battle, I gain lifepoints equal to the destroyed monster's attack points. So, Eria The Water Charmer attack his Spear Dragon!Riley: What a good move. Now, she gains 1900 lifepoints.Eria: It's your turn now.Riley: Watch this! I summon Elemental Hero Avian! Jessie: What the?! Episode 21: A New Set Of Heroes! Jessie: Did he just say Elemental Hero Avian?Ace: Where did he get those cards?! Riley: So, you guys noticed my new cards.Eria: *Where did he get those cards? I thought Riley had a dragon deck?* Impressive. You put new cards in your deck before we dueled.Riley: I've always wanted to use Elemental Heroes to save the world like Jaden does. Now I have that chance. So let's continue. I activate the spell card Elemental Destiny! Now, I can fuse my Elemental Hero Avian with the Destiny Hero-Doom Lord in my hand, to summon Elemental Hero Dark Wing!Eria: *Destiny Heroes as well?!* He has cards that Aster Phoenix and Jaden Yuki use! Jessie: Riley's got Destiny Heroes too! That's awesome.Ace: I wonder when Riley got these cards?Crystal: Me too.Seto: Impressive. This kid has Elemental Heroes and Destiny Heroes. Let's see how well he does with them. Eria: Even though your monster looks tough, it only has 1000 attack points. What do you plan to do with that?Riley: My Elemental Hero Dark Wing may be weak, but he has an awesome special ability. Here's what happens. I can discard one card from my hand to the graveyard, and add one card from the graveyard to my hand. If the card I take isn't a monster card, I can destroy one monster on the field. The card I took was my Elemental Destiny, so I will destroy your Eria The Water Charmer!Eria: Wow. What a good special ability. Riley: Now, Elemental Hero Dark Wing, attack her lifepoints directly! Eria: I'm at 3000. Are you finished yet?Riley: I will set one card face-down and end my turn.Eria: I activate the effect of my Treeborn Frog. Since it's in the graveyard during my standby phase, and I have no spell and trap cards on the field, I can special summon him back to the field!Now, I tribute my Treeborn Frog to summon Mobius The Frost Monarch! I will use the effect of Mobius to destroy your face-down card.Riley: I don't think so.Eria: What do you mean?Riley: Before you destroy the card, I'll play the card. I activate Fusion Strike. Now, I can inflict damage to your lifepoints equal to the original attack points of a fusion monster on my side of the field. So you lose 1000 lifepoints. Eria: A good move, but you still have no defense against my Monarch's attack. So Mobius, destroy his Elemental Hero Dark Wing! Riley: Ok, I lose 1100 lifepoints. I will win this duel, and save the world.Eria: Even if you defeat me, which you most likely won't, that doesn't mean you can defeat the other three charmers.Riley: I am going to defeat all four of you. Eria: It's your turn.Riley: Ok, I activate Card Of Demise. I can draw five cards, and in four turns, I have to discard my entire hand. I'll summon Elemental Hero Burstinatrix in attack mode! Now I activate Miracle Fusion! So I remove from play my Elemental Hero Burstinatrix from the field, and my Elemental Hero Avian from the graveyard, to summon Elemental Hero Flame Wingman! I'm not finished yet! I activate Elemental Destiny! I fuse my Elemental Hero Flame Wingman with my Destiny Hero-Defender to summon Elemental Hero Flame Guardian! Eria: Once again you summon a fusion monster with 1000 attack points. I wonder if this card has a good effect like the last one.Riley: Your about to find out! I activate my Elemental Hero Flame Guardian's special ability! Once per turn, I can destroy a monster on the field, and inflict 1000 damage to my opponent's lifepoints. So Elemental Hero Flame Guardian, destroy Mobius The Frost Monarch!Eria: My Monarch!Riley: Don't forget, you lose 1000 lifepoints as well! Eria: That means I only have 1000 lifepoints left.Riley: Now, Elemental Hero Flame Guardian, attack her lifepoints directly!Eria: I lose the duel. You are a good duelist Riley. Although you defeated me, it doesn't mean you will defeat the next charmer.Riley: Who do I have to duel now? Ace: Riley won!Crystal: That was a good duel.Jessie: Riley's Elemental Hero fusions are cool.Seto: Riley may have won this duel, but he still has three more to go. Shadow is talking to someone. ???: Shadow, Riley and his friends defeated Jake Mahadi, and now they are in the Duel Spirit World.Shadow: I know that. I guess it's time for me to duel Riley myself. I will have to wait until they are out of the duel spirit world though.???: Are you sure you want to duel them?Shadow: Yes. I think I have enough energy now. Next Episode: Wynn, The Wind Charmer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Last Time On Yugioh Hidden Legacy Eria: My move. I summon Eria The Water Charmer in attack mode. Riley: Whoa. She just summoned herself! Crystal: She just summoned herself to the field!Jessie: Well yes. This is the world of duel spirits, so you can't be suprised at that! Eria: You look suprised. I am the first of many duel spirits you will duel against. Anyway, I activate the spell card, Hydro Draw. Now, I can remove from play any card on my side of the field, and draw 1 card from my deck. So I will remove from play my face-down Charmer Summon, and draw 1 card. Then, I activate my Element Strike spell card. I can increase the attack of one monster with a Water, Fire, Wind, or Earth attribute by 500 points. Then, if the increased monster destroys a monster in battle, I gain lifepoints equal to the destroyed monster's attack points. So, Eria The Water Charmer attack his Spear Dragon!Riley: What a good move. Now, she gains 1900 lifepoints.Eria: It's your turn now.Riley: Watch this! I summon Elemental Hero Avian! Jessie: What the?! Episode 21: A New Set Of Heroes! Jessie: Did he just say Elemental Hero Avian?Ace: Where did he get those cards?! Riley: So, you guys noticed my new cards.Eria: *Where did he get those cards? I thought Riley had a dragon deck?* Impressive. You put new cards in your deck before we dueled.Riley: I've always wanted to use Elemental Heroes to save the world like Jaden does. Now I have that chance. So let's continue. I activate the spell card Elemental Destiny! Now, I can fuse my Elemental Hero Avian with the Destiny Hero-Doom Lord in my hand, to summon Elemental Hero Dark Wing!Eria: *Destiny Heroes as well?!* He has cards that Aster Phoenix and Jaden Yuki use! Jessie: Riley's got Destiny Heroes too! That's awesome.Ace: I wonder when Riley got these cards?Crystal: Me too.Seto: Impressive. This kid has Elemental Heroes and Destiny Heroes. Let's see how well he does with them. Eria: Even though your monster looks tough, it only has 1000 attack points. What do you plan to do with that?Riley: My Elemental Hero Dark Wing may be weak, but he has an awesome special ability. Here's what happens. I can discard one card from my hand to the graveyard, and add one card from the graveyard to my hand. If the card I take isn't a monster card, I can destroy one monster on the field. The card I took was my Elemental Destiny, so I will destroy your Eria The Water Charmer!Eria: Wow. What a good special ability. Riley: Now, Elemental Hero Dark Wing, attack her lifepoints directly! Eria: I'm at 3000. Are you finished yet?Riley: I will set one card face-down and end my turn.Eria: I activate the effect of my Treeborn Frog. Since it's in the graveyard during my standby phase, and I have no spell and trap cards on the field, I can special summon him back to the field!Now, I tribute my Treeborn Frog to summon Mobius The Frost Monarch! I will use the effect of Mobius to destroy your face-down card.Riley: I don't think so.Eria: What do you mean?Riley: Before you destroy the card, I'll play the card. I activate Fusion Strike. Now, I can inflict damage to your lifepoints equal to the original attack points of a fusion monster on my side of the field. So you lose 1000 lifepoints. Eria: A good move, but you still have no defense against my Monarch's attack. So Mobius, destroy his Elemental Hero Dark Wing! Riley: Ok, I lose 1100 lifepoints. I will win this duel, and save the world.Eria: Even if you defeat me, which you most likely won't, that doesn't mean you can defeat the other three charmers.Riley: I am going to defeat all four of you. Eria: It's your turn.Riley: Ok, I activate Card Of Demise. I can draw five cards, and in four turns, I have to discard my entire hand. I'll summon Elemental Hero Burstinatrix in attack mode! Now I activate Miracle Fusion! So I remove from play my Elemental Hero Burstinatrix from the field, and my Elemental Hero Avian from the graveyard, to summon Elemental Hero Flame Wingman! I'm not finished yet! I activate Elemental Destiny! I fuse my Elemental Hero Flame Wingman with my Destiny Hero-Defender to summon Elemental Hero Flame Guardian! Eria: Once again you summon a fusion monster with 1000 attack points. I wonder if this card has a good effect like the last one.Riley: Your about to find out! I activate my Elemental Hero Flame Guardian's special ability! Once per turn, I can destroy a monster on the field, and inflict 1000 damage to my opponent's lifepoints. So Elemental Hero Flame Guardian, destroy Mobius The Frost Monarch!Eria: My Monarch!Riley: Don't forget, you lose 1000 lifepoints as well! Eria: That means I only have 1000 lifepoints left.Riley: Now, Elemental Hero Flame Guardian, attack her lifepoints directly!Eria: I lose the duel. You are a good duelist Riley. Although you defeated me, it doesn't mean you will defeat the next charmer.Riley: Who do I have to duel now? Ace: Riley won!Crystal: That was a good duel.Jessie: Riley's Elemental Hero fusions are cool.Seto: Riley may have won this duel, but he still has three more to go. Shadow is talking to someone. ???: Shadow, Riley and his friends defeated Jake Mahadi, and now they are in the Duel Spirit World.Shadow: I know that. I guess it's time for me to duel Riley myself. I will have to wait until they are out of the duel spirit world though.???: Are you sure you want to duel them?Shadow: Yes. I think I have enough energy now. Next Episode: Wynn, The Wind Charmer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 very nice. The fusions of E and D Heroes was completely unexpected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 very nice. The fusions of E and D Heroes was completely unexpected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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red-eyes Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Great mon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red-eyes Posted September 1, 2007 Report Share Posted September 1, 2007 Great mon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Thanks for copying my ideas of duel monster spirits dueling...lol jking...I thought the episodes were cool and the E-Heroes...I did not expect so, way to make a super-special-awsome plot twist!!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Thanks for copying my ideas of duel monster spirits dueling...lol jking...I thought the episodes were cool and the E-Heroes...I did not expect so, way to make a super-special-awsome plot twist!!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Thanks. Only 9 episodes left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Thanks. Only 9 episodes left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDrawer Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Wow,good job,the Elemental+Destiny heroes was a good idea,the last one was sooo unexpected. Only 9 episodes left!?wow,I want read them soo much,but still...I don´t want that your fanfic will be end... (sry for my bad english,I am from sweden...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDrawer Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Wow,good job,the Elemental+Destiny heroes was a good idea,the last one was sooo unexpected. Only 9 episodes left!?wow,I want read them soo much,but still...I don´t want that your fanfic will be end... (sry for my bad english,I am from sweden...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 End? Are you crazy? xD. That's only season 1. Don't forget the movie and season 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkDrawer Posted September 2, 2007 Report Share Posted September 2, 2007 Ops!I´ve forgot it ^^' I hopes your Invert Heroes will be in the movie/fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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