Sander Posted August 15, 2007 Report Share Posted August 15, 2007 short, but very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted August 15, 2007 Report Share Posted August 15, 2007 Rainbow Dragon needs 7 Cyrstal Beast monsters to Tribute Summon, not one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 15, 2007 Report Share Posted August 15, 2007 they may be in the Graveyard as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 15, 2007 Report Share Posted August 15, 2007 For rainbow, they need to be on the field or in the graveyard, then you special summon him. This isn't the last appearance Rainbow Dragon will make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 16, 2007 Report Share Posted August 16, 2007 you rule man nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toclfane Posted August 17, 2007 Report Share Posted August 17, 2007 I think you should make the Balance monsters come back, but instead of the Evil type you can change them to the good type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 When's the next one going to be posted? I can't wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Yugioh: Hidden Legacy Episode 17: Enter Jake Mahadi! Seto Kaiba and Riley are standing in the park, along with Crystal, Ace and Mokuba. Seto was talking with Riley. "I told you that there was one test you had to take. You must duel against Jessie Andersen. Now, he may not be at my level, but he is a skilled duelist. If you defeat him, I am sure you will be ready to face Shadow. You need some time to prepare." Riley smiled as he looked at Seto. "I'm ready for anything! I will win, and prevent Shadow from destroying this world!" Crystal smiled as well. "There he goes again, full of confidence. Sometimes I wish I could be as confident as Riley is.""Well, that's how he is", Ace said. A young looking boy walked up. He was around Riley's age, with brown hair. He was wearing a white T-Shirt, Blue Jeans, and a Blue Jacket. Seto looked at him. "Can I help you? Were busy at the moment.""Actually I think you can. I'd like to duel.""I just explained we were busy. There's no time to duel right now.""I got some time for a duel", Crystal interrupted. "It's been a while since I dueled.""But Crystal, we don't have time right now", Ace said. Seto looked at Ace, then at Riley. "I think she should duel.""Really?", Ace said suprised."Yes, after all, she does need to have practice as well, just incase anything happens.""So kid, what's your name?", Seto asked."The name's Jake Mahadi. I'm a great duelist." Crystal thought to herself. *I wonder why he randomly asked us for a duel. Maybe he has something to do with Shadow. I really hope not. For once, I want to play a duel where I don't have to worry about losing.* Jake shuffled his deck. "You ready to duel?""Sure, but are you ready to lose?""Confidence. That's a good thing. But victory won't be easy for you!" Duel! "If you don't mind, I will make the first move.", Jake said drawing 5 cards. "It's fine with me, Crystal Snow doesn't lose!""Ok Crystal, watch this. I set one monster face-down, and activate the spell card, Wave Motion Cannon. That will do it for me.""*Oh No! That spell card can finish this duel in four turns if I don't destroy it! That's a problem.* "My turn. I activate the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon and destroy your Wave-Motion Cannon.""Heh. Nice move. Let's see what else you got!""You asked for it! I discard Zeradias, Herald Of Heaven to the graveyard. Now, I can add one Sanctuary In The Sky from my deck to my hand! Next, I will activate The Sanctuary In The Sky!" The field turns into a big Sanctuary, and it looks like they are in the sky, surrounded by clouds. "Now, I summon Warrior Of Zera in attack mode! Riley and Ace, make sure your watching! I want to prove to you guys that I am a good duelist, and that I can hold my own in battles!" Riley and Ace smiled as Crystal was talking. "So that's why she was so eager to duel, don't you think Riley?""I guess. I just hope she can win." Seto joined the conversation. "I hope this kid has nothing to do with Shadow, because that would cause even more problems.""Me too. But Ace and I can take him anyway. Crystal is doing this duel to prove something to us, and for that reason, I am going to stay out of this." Back to the duel. "Now, my Warrior Of Zera will attack your face-down monster!" Jake flipped the monster card up. "Apparently today isn't your lucky day, because you attacked my Stealth Bird. It has 1700 defense points, so you lose 100 points.""Fine. I'm at 3900. I guess I'll end my turn by playing one card face-down.""Ok, I summon Solar Flare Dragon in attack mode. Now, I flip my Stealth Bird face-down with his effect. Then, I set one card face-down. I end my turn.""That was a short move.""I forgot to mention, each time I end my turn, you lose 500 lifepoints!""What? That's not good. I'm at 3400 now. *I have a lot of lifepoints right now, but If that dragon remains on the field, it could spell trouble.* "I activate my face-down card, Call Of The Haunted! So I can special summon Zeradias, Herald Of Heaven from the graveyard! Next, I attack your Solar Flare Dragon with Warrior Of Zera!" Zera charges at the Dragon, slashing it with his sword. Jake looked at Crystal, in complete shock. "*I thought this girl would be an easy opponent I could defeat in one turn! It doesn't seem like that now. I'm kind of worried here. I can't follow through with the plan this way! I heard she wasn't tough at all. What am I going to do.*" "Not so fast, I activate Mirror Force! Now all of your monsters are destroyed!""It doesn't matter. I have something to prove, and I will win this duel! I end my turn!""Well, I'm sorry to say, you aren't going to win this duel at all, because it's over. I summon another Solar Flare Dragon, and activate Mystical Space Typhoon! Now, your face-down is destroyed, and I can attack your lifepoints directly! So, both of my dragons, attack with Pyro Strike! The blast hits Crystal as her lifepoints are decreased to 400. "Now, when I end my turn you lose 1000 lifepoints! That means this game is over! You were an easier opponent than I expected. Shadow will be pleased that I defeated you this easily!" Seto turns to Riley and Ace. "He said Shadow! That means he is working for him. I knew it! Your friend could be in trouble Riley! We have to do something." Seto walks toward where the duel is happening, but Riley stops him. "I don't care who you are Seto. Crystal wants to prove something, and she's determined to win! So we are going to watch this duel happen!""But she already lost, you just saw it!""I wouldn't be so sure." Back To The Duel. "*I knew this guy had something to do with Shadow. I wont lose, I have to prove myself. I want to help save the world as well.*""Your a pitiful duelist. I knew I was going to win. So, dragons! Finish her off! The flames from the solar flare dragon's blast Crystal. "That's all. Your just talk, you can't back up what you say." The smoke cleared, and Crystal was standing, with her lifepoints at 1000. "What the?""I told you, I wasn't going to lose, and I meant every word of it. I promise, I will win this duel!" Crystal stared at Jake. "*She...She's not kidding. But how? This was over!*" Next Episode: Fighting Fire With Fire! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 dang, kinda short but whatever, GREAT EPISODE!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 short? that was actually a decent length episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Yea, I was (for some reason) expecting something longer, but the length it was was perfectly fine. I may have expected longer because I went from reading TO's to reading yours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 short? that was actually a decent length episode.sorry, I'm just a little bit used to reading TotalObelisks Fan Fic and every episode was long, VERY longyeah, you're right, it was an decently long episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 nice job but i was hoping for mine to be used,but oh well it's ok.after all it is your fantc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dag 417 Posted August 20, 2007 Report Share Posted August 20, 2007 Nice job on the new chapter, it was great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 Previously On Yugioh: Hidden Legacy "Now, when I end my turn you lose 1000 lifepoints! That means this game is over! You were an easier opponent than I expected. Shadow will be pleased that I defeated you this easily!" Seto turns to Riley and Ace. "He said Shadow! That means he is working for him. I knew it! Your friend could be in trouble Riley! We have to do something." Seto walks toward where the duel is happening, but Riley stops him. "I don't care who you are Seto. Crystal wants to prove something, and she's determined to win! So we are going to watch this duel happen!""But she already lost, you just saw it!""I wouldn't be so sure." Back To The Duel. "*I knew this guy had something to do with Shadow. I wont lose, I have to prove myself. I want to help save the world as well.*""Your a pitiful duelist. I knew I was going to win. So, dragons! Finish her off! The flames from the solar flare dragons blast Crystal. "That's all. Your just talk, you can't back up what you say." The smoke cleared, and Crystal was standing, with her lifepoints at 400. "What the?""I told you, I wasn't going to lose, and I meant every word of it. I promise, I will win this duel!" Crystal stared at Jake. "*She...She's not kidding. But how? This was over!*" Episode 18: Fighting Fire With Fire! “It would have been over, if I hadn’t activated the effect of my Sanctuary Gift spell card.”“But..how! You can’t activate cards from your hand.”“If you gave me a second to explain, you would understand. If I take damage from an effect monster, I can discard my Sanctuary Gift to negate that damage. Then, if Sanctuary In The Sky is on the field, I can destroy one monster on the field. I chose your Solar Flare Dragon, so it’s effect didn’t activate!”“She....I didn’t expect a move like that! *And now I have nothing to protect my dragon!*” Seto was suprised. “Well, look at that, your friends not so bad after all. Just when she was about to lose, she pulled through and stopped it from happening.”“I told you so”, Riley said smiling. “Crystal defeated me once, she knows what she’s doing.”“Wait, if she defeated you, why does she want to prove herself?”“Just because she defeated me once, doesn’t mean she’s a better duelist than me. Or at least, that’s what she thinks.”“So Crystal thinks that by winning this duel, she can prove she’s just as good as you are?”“I think so. Isn’t that right Ace?”“I’m not quite sure actually. She probably thinks that by winning this duel, she can prove to herself and the rest of us that she is a good duelist, even though we already know she is.” Back To The Duel. “It’s my turn now, and I’m still in this duel. I summon Harvest, Angel Of Wisdom in attack mode. Now, Harvest, attack his Solar Flare Dragon!” Harvest fired a beam at Solar Flare Dragon, destroying it and decreasing Jake’s lifepoints by 300, making them 3700. “I set one card face-down, and end my turn.” Jake drew a card and smiled at it. “Finally. I didn’t want to use this card, but you leave me no choice! I set one card face-down! Then, I end my turn.”“That’s the best you can do? My move!” Riley felt weird. “I don’t feel right. I think that card he played is trouble.”“Huh? What do you mean?”“When I was with Shadow, I had that Fate Of Balance card, which give Shadow energy from the loser.”“If that card is anything like your trap, Crystal could be in big trouble.” Back To The Duel. “I summon Meltiel, Sage Of The Sky in attack mode! Now, Harvest, Angel Of Wisdom, attack his face-down monster! *If I’m right, that monster is Stealth Bird, which means my Angel Of Wisdom can destroy it!*”“It’s my Stealth Bird, and it’s destroyed.”“Now, Meltiel, attack his lifepoints directly!”“My lifepoints are now 2100. Who would have thought a weak duelist like you could do that much.”“I play two cards face-down and end my turn.”“It’s time for me to win. I summon another Solar Flare Dragon! Now, I activate my face-down, Fire Strike! You should be afraid! This trap card inflicts 2000 damage to your lifepoints every turn, as long as I discard two cards from my hand, and tribute one fire monster each time!” Riley looked at Seto and Ace. “That card is like the one Shadow gave me. Crystal is going to lose right now!”“We have to help her!” Jake overheard them talking. “I’m afraid it’s too late for that. She will lose, and Shadow will get even more power!”Crystal laughed. “What’s so funny. I wouldn’t be happy if I were you.”“I’ll tell you what’s funny. The fact that you still don’t understand what I said. I told you I was going to win this duel, and I meant it.”“I admire your bravery, but that won’t help you now. There’s nothing you can do about it.”“*I’m not going to lose this duel. I promised myself that, and my friends. Luckily, I will be able to do something about it. This kid is good, but I am better.*” Riley yelled to Crystal. “Be careful! You’re a good friend, and we’re here for you! You don’t need to continue, we know your good! Don’t get yourself hurt!”“Listen to your friend and stop being a hero. Just quit now and get this over with.”“Thanks for the support Riley! You too Ace. But I am going to finish this duel one way or another. Unfortunately for Jake, I am going to win!”“You talk too much. You won’t win, so just quit now. This is your last chance.”“For years I have dueled. It’s something I do for fun, and I enjoy it. When it comes down to it, other than my friends and family, it’s the most important thing to me. Therefore, I am going to follow through on what I said, and defeat you. So we can stop Shadow once and for all. Your trap won’t work, it will be destroyed. I will see to that.”“It can’t be destroyed by card effects, so you can’t do anything about it, my card will not leave the field!” Jessie Andersen walked up. He walked over to where the duel was going on. “Hey, it’s Crystal right? How’s it going?”“It’s Jessie Andersen!”“I’ve never heard of you kid. Get out of here now, can’t you see were dueling. Go somewhere else.” Jessie walked up to Jake. “What are you doing, get out of here!” Jessie took the card out of the duel disk..........and ripped it in half. Next Episode: Neo-Parshath, The Sky Paladin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Ash Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 OMG! EVIL JOHAN!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:/Jishin//Enigma/:. Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 [attachment=5123][attachment=5123][attachment=5123]hi ke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 21, 2007 Report Share Posted August 21, 2007 wrong section, please post them somewhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 22, 2007 Report Share Posted August 22, 2007 nice job man,i wonder what card he ripped in half Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 S*T, how long til the next one? I can't wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 StevenBray: S*T isn't here, he'll return on Wednesday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
027982 Posted August 27, 2007 Report Share Posted August 27, 2007 huh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 28, 2007 Report Share Posted August 28, 2007 Star, when is the next episode coming up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 Last time on Yu-Gi-Oh Hidden Legacy “Be careful! You’re a good friend, and we’re here for you! You don’t need to continue, we know your good! Don’t get yourself hurt!”“Listen to your friend and stop being a hero. Just quit now and get this over with.”“Thanks for the support Riley! You too Ace. But I am going to finish this duel one way or another. Unfortunately for Jake, I am going to win!”“You talk too much. You won’t win, so just quit now. This is your last chance.”“For years I have dueled. It’s something I do for fun, and I enjoy it. When it comes down to it, other than my friends and family, it’s the most important thing to me. Therefore, I am going to follow through on what I said, and defeat you. So we can stop Shadow once and for all. Your trap won’t work, it will be destroyed. I will see to that.”“It can’t be destroyed by card effects, so you can’t do anything about it, my card will not leave the field!” Jessie Andersen walked up. He walked over to where the duel was going on. “Hey, your name’s Crystal right? How’s it going?”“Hey, your’e Jessie Andersen!”“I’ve never heard of you kid. Get out of here now, can’t you see were dueling. Go somewhere else.” Jessie walked up to Jake. “What are you doing, get out of here!” Jessie took the card out of the duel disk..........and ripped it in half. Episode 19: Neo-Parshath, The Sky Paladin! Riley watched as Jessie ripped the card in half. Something was wrong. *Even though Jessie destroyed the card, I can still feel the dark power that I felt while the card was activated. I think Crystal may still be in danger!*“Something wrong?” Riley noticed Seto and Ace standing there “I think Crystal may be in danger, even though Jessie destroyed the card.”“That’s not possible. You said the card was giving off that power, so now, every thing should be fine.""I thought so too, but I think the card didn't matter. I still feel the dark energy." Seto could feel the dark energy as well. *I feel this too. I don't know what this is, but I do know that Crystal is in danger. I've felt this energy before. Oh! No, that's...impossible. I felt the same energy when we dueled Dartz, and he used the Seal Of Oricalcos! Could it be that the Seal Of Oricalcos had something to do with Shadow's power?* Back To The Duel Crystal's Lifepoints-400Jake's lifepoints-2100 Jake stared at Jessie. The card he had ripped was on the ground. Crystal was suprised to see Jessie as well. "Well, I guess I've stopped Shadow's plan from working this time", Jessie said, smiling."Not so fast. Even though you ripped the card, I still activated it, so the power is here already.""Say what? I guess Shadow is more powerful than I thought. Come on Crystal, you can win this duel. If you don't, Shadow will get even more power.""Thanks Jessie, I'll try. Let's finish this game up!" Jessie looked nervous. *I hope she can win, because we will all be in trouble if she doesn't.""My move. I activate Raigeki! Now, all of your monsters are destroyed!""Oh no!""That's not the worst of it. Now, my Solar Flare Dragon will attack you directly!""I activate my Magic Cylinder trap card! Now, your Solar Flare Dragon attacks you instead!""Heh. Lucky shot. I'm at 600. Still have more lifepoints than you. And now I will win! I end my turn, and blast youfor 500 points of damage." Crystal fell down, and her lifepoints dropped to 1. On her side of the field, was Neo-Parshath, the Sky Paladin. "What the!" Riley and Ace were shocked! "She's still in this game. What do you think Riley.""I...I can't believe it. She's at the point where she should quit, but she won't. I'm proud.""You know kid, your friends not bad. Let's see what she did." Jessie couldn't believe it either. "*She....What an amazing duelist. She might just win this duel." Back to the duel. "That's cheating. You can't do that. Your lifepoints are at 0!""I'm not done yet. I'm still having...fun. I activate my trap card, Soul Relay! When my lifepoints reach 0, I can special summon one monster from my deck, ignoring any summoning conditions. However, when that monster is destroyed, I lose the duel. I chose, my Neo-Parshath, The Sky Paladin!""No big deal.""Meet the most powerful Fairy type monster in duel monsters!""I don't care. That monster's effect won't work, so I'm not worried.""He's right. All I have to rely on is my monsters special ability.""I'll play one card face-down and end my turn.""Finally. I activate the spell card Monster Reborn! So now, I can special summon Solar Flare Dragon from my graveyard. Next, I tribute him to summon Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch! Now, I can randomly discard a card from your hand. Since you won't lose lifepoints anyway, the second effect doesn't matter, but you still have to discard a card.""I only have one card, and it's Freya, The Spirit Of Victory." Crystal discards her card to the graveyard. "It's time to end this duel! I attack your Neo-Parshath! Firestorm Blast!""I told you, I won't lose. I activate my trap card, Take One Chance!""What's that do?""I can put my whole graveyard face-down, and choose one card from it randomly, then activate it." Riley, Seto, and Ace looked suprised. "She's taking a huge risk there! What's she thinking?""Riley, don't worry. We have to believe in her.""Ace is right Riley, we have to trust in her ability to win." Crystal shuffles her graveyard. "Here we go...""Your wasting your time. You won't get the right card.""*I can do this. I promised my friends I would win, and I meant it.*" Crystal chose a card. She had a sad look on her face. "What's wrong? Did you finally realize that you can't defeat me?""No, I'm upset because this duel was just getting interesting, and now it has to end.""What are you talking about?""I activate Magic Cylinder!""No way...That means..!""I win!" Riley smiled. "Crystal won!""That's awesome! I told you she would win." Seto thought to himself. "*That girl is a skilled duelist." Jessie was amazed too. "*That was a great duel. I'm suprised Crystal won. But that means, Shadow, you're one step closer to being defeated!* Jake's lifepoints dropped to 0. "*How did she...defeat me? I lost...". Shadow is sitting in his office. "Shadow, I'm sorry to tell you this, but Jake has lost.""Don't worry, because the next opponent I have for them to face, will win." Shadow then stands up and laughs. Next Episode: Eria The Water Charmer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StevenBray Posted August 30, 2007 Report Share Posted August 30, 2007 Cool episode, can't wait for the next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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