Parion555 Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 YU-GI-OH FUTURE THE BEGINNING A long time ago there was a dark force who was ceeping them under their control.But seven riders of the light showed up and destroyed the dark force.But the dark force wasn’t destroyed,it was in the seven riders.And then they were separated.Because they wanted to have bigger power.Their leader Judai found a way to put the dark force from the riders into cards.But to put the dark force into cards,he needed to put himself into a card because they were too powerful.And those cards were called YU-GI-OH! THOSAND YEARS LATER... In one house,there was a boy who had great beilef in his YU-GI-OH cards.He lived with his grandfather.His grandfather was the owner of a toy store who was bying YU-GI-OH cards for his grandson.“Hi grandpa!Here are my new friends,Gloria Gardner and John Taylor.Hello,sir!Hello kids!How was it in the new school Ben!Well,it’s fine.We must go grandpa.See ya!Bye kids.So,where are we gonna go Gloria?We are going to go see my mom.Alright!” says Ben.On the way to Glorias moms work,they saw many kids in one place.“Let’s go and see what’s happening over there.Alright.They went over there and then Ben was surprised because they were playng YU-GI-OH cards.John asked someone who are playing.And one kid told him that Max Wheeler is playing against Johny Oxwhile.Ben told John that he knows that kid.That kid is the bully of our school. “I summon my Vorse Raidor and i atack your monster” says Max.Not so fast,i activate my trap card,Spellbinding Circle.Now your Vorse Raidor cannot atack”.Says Johny.“I put these two face-down cards and i end my turn”. says MaxNow i sacriface my Aligator Sword to summon Judge Man and i atack your Vorse Raidor”! says Johny.Agh!My life points are now 4700!But i activate Michuzure and because of his efect i can destroy one monster on your side of the field,and i choose Judge Man!“NO”! says Johny.”Now i activate field-spell card Yami.And i end my turn”. Says Johny.“Alright,now it’s my turn.I activate my spell card,Heavy Storm”. Says Max.“NO!My Sakuretsu Armor is destroyed”!says Johny.That’s not all!Now i activate my shalow grave.We can both call one monster from our graveyards in face-down position.Then i activate Monster Reborn and bring back Vorse Raidor and i sacriface these two monsters to summon my favourite monster,RED-EYES BLACK DRAGON! “Hmph.He still isn’t a match for my Defender”. Says Johny to himself.“And now i activate Shield Crush.Say bye,bye to your face-down monster. Says Max.“NO!My Defender”!“Now my red-eyes black dragon,atack!!! ”NO!My,i’m finished!All of my life points are gone”! Says Johny. “Ha!You’re cards are worthless”! Says Max. “Wow!Max realy knows how to play.No Ben,he just wants to act cool,he’s the same as before.He’s the same bully. Says John. Who wants to duel against me now!?Haha. says Max. What an idiot,let’s get out of here. says Gloria. By the way home,they saw three people runing.One of them pushed Gloria.”Are you okay,Gloria”?Then Ben saw a box that felt from one of the men.”Hey,your box”! See what’s inside. says Gloria. Okay,in this box there are someYU-GI-OH cards.“Wow,elemental heroes!” says John. “Ha!?”What are they? Says Gloria, “I read about them.They’re realy cool.What should i do with them? says Ben. “Take them.The one who droped them is already gone.When you find him,you will give him his cards.” “Alright.” Says Ben. “I must go home now.My grandpa is waiting for me.” “Bye.” Say Gloria and John. By the way Ben was looking at his cards and sudenly one of the cards started to shine. “What the...agh!” A strange man came out of the cards. “Who are you?” said Ben. “I am Judai,the leader of the seven light riders!I have been waiting for you.I knew this day would come.The day that i finaly arrise to save the world again.From now on i will be your friend and i will protect you from any evil.” “What are you talking about?” “When the day of truth comes,you will understand.” “Alright.” “Now what’s your name”. “My name is Ben Uzumaki.” “Okay,Ben Uzumaki,from now on i will live in your deck and help you in every duel.” “Okay!” “Hi,grandpa!“Where have you been? “I was watching a YU-GI-OH duel with Gloria and John.” “I already made dinner.Let’s. eat. After dinner... Oh,i’m stuffed.I’m gonna go to my room now. “Wait Ben,i have something to tell you.Come here.” “What is it grandpa?” “I want you to have this five cards.Use them when you need them the most.” “Thanks!” In his room... “Ha!?These are just some weak cards that look like arms,legs and a head! In school... Ben saw Max threating some kids. “Leave them alone!” “Or what!?” In that moment a bright light apeared. “Let’s make a deal.We will play a YU-GI-OH card game.If i win,you will no longer bully kids. “And if i win!?” “Belive me,you won’t.” “We will see about that!Let’s duel!” “Ben,stop!You can’t beat him in a YU-GI-OH duel!” “I know what i’m doing.” “Whoa’he’s realy confident.” Says Johny to himself. “Come on!Stop talking! “Alright!Let’s duel! more coming soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 This is a complete rip-off of the original YGO anime. Don't do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Overlord Inferno Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 umbra's right! Yugi and his grandpa, hi to friends, the shining card, the seven riders, elemental heroes it's all a copy of the original Yu-Gi-Oh and Yu-Gi-Oh GX. And also if you payed attention you would notice that in the series they call it duel monster not Yu-Gi-Oh card game! There is no originality in this fan-fic at all. Things To Improve:-Delete this or change it completely and come up with YOUR OWN IDEA! I give this Fan Fic a: 2/10Rubbish, Rethink the Whole Idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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