Wierdmin's Custom Cards

[Wierdmin]

Some custom cards. I though this site had a tutorial about how to write effects, but I can't find one. I'll do the best I can :).

 

 

[spoiler=Trojan Gatekeeper]

A bit overpowered, but meh.

 

[spoiler=Short-Term Battle Orders]

I like it :).

 

[spoiler=Deadly Bindweed]

There needs to be more Plant cards.

 

 

Please post any sort of criticism. It's very much appreciated. I want to perfect these cards.

[Zeroshot]

wheres the pic?

[elemental hero neos!]

give me a pic!!!!!!!!!

[Rina Kasakura]

Dunno. It is a tad much, only a tad (the constant destruction effect), but I like it. ...It'd hurt my stall-burn deck, though ^_^'

I think it would only really affect decks like that, anyway, since the effect only works during the opponent's Standby Phase. Is the effect a mandatory one?

 

Here's how I'd write it with more updated card grammar (no offense intended):

 

Mandatory Effect:

During your opponent's Standby Phase, destroy 1 face-down Defense Position monster he/she controls.

 

Optional Effect:

During your opponent's Standby Phase, you can destroy 1 face-down Defense Position monster he/she controls.

[avariademon]

its decent, im not seeing it be overpowered its effect only stops face down if it was face up or just monster then it might be more overpowered but thats my openion, the picture is obvious so im not going to mention it any more then i just did. but as i said it looks just fine for a sak i cant really think of any way to improve apon it 8/10

[Wierdmin]

Ah. Thank you much ^_^. Will edit.

 

One problem, you say "may" not "can."

 

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I don't like adding pictures. IF the official artist of the ofiicial TCG made some art for me, sure, but it doesn't look right otherwise, in my opinion.

[Junk Raver]

Cards with no images = Written cards.

[Wierdmin]

Hrm... okay.

 

Thank you for moving. ^_^