"Dark Legion" Archetype.

[Thanatos Thanatos]

[Loleo]

2 hours ago, Thanatos Thanatos said:

Dark Legion Sorcerer - Alphraz.

Lvl: 4.     DARK.    Spellcaster.

ATK: 1200.          DEF: 2000.

Once per turn, you can discard a card; Special Summon a "Dark Legion" monster from your hand on your side of field, You cannot Special Summon monster the turn you activate this effect, except DARK monsters. If this card is in your GY: you can Detach 1 material from a "Dark Legion" Xyz monster you controls; Special Summon this card, but banish it when it leave the field. You can tribute this card; Special Summon 1 "Dark Legion" monster from your hand or your GY in Defense Position, but it has its effects negated and is destroyed during the End Phase.

A pretty nice searcher for an archetype I hope to see more cards for!

I think I fixed PSCT

[Loleo]

Persival OMG card advantage! I don't know how to fix this without ruining the point of the card but at least can you say "you can only use each effect of "Brave knight of dark legion Persival" once per turn"

Amathias do you want it to be draw 2 from one effect or from effects? I don't think it needs the gain ATK effect, I would probably apply that to an XYZ monster that used this card as material (and maybe let you draw a card also when used as material? Once per turn of course)

[Dokutah]

in general: well the archetype traits is really well supported for the most part being Level 4, DARK, with popular typing combo of spellcaster and warrior. we havent yet to see the xyz but safe to say it will be easy to summon. effects is a little bit crammed and for the most part lack some opt clause. so its has potential to do bonkers things but of course the big question of either fun bonkers or overly kind of bonkers still remains

Alphraz: it pretty much 1 card xyz by vacuum that can extend again for another (note that banish penalty can be actually nullified by attaching as xyz material since official ruling dont considered it as removed from the field) so its actually able to field-in 2 xyz with barely -1 value (summon this > use 1st effect to summon monster > tribute itself (3rd effect) summon another > overlay 2 summoned monster > detach to summon itself > reuse the 1st effect (since you you regular OPT, it get reset'ed when it removed from the field) > overlay this and the summoned monster for the second xyz) which as mention before is pretty bonkers. might need harsher limitation than just regular OPT and locked on DARK

Persival: damn those draw effects. the first draw effect kinda fine since it dont have self summon effect so akin to Sacred Crane its the 2nd and 3rd draw effect that concerns me. getting detached by xyz is pretty easy and Alphraz already facilitate it by it self. but the banish is definitely has to either go OR limited by HOPT. since DARK cards has means to dump large amount of card. i can see this and another copies net you like 3-7 draws  pretty much complement Alphraz plays by out-value the minuses (-1 vs +2 through +6)

Amathias: looks pale compare to Persival but still dangerous. easy to summon and just straight up net you something