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Skilled Apocalypse Magician & End, the Deity of Apocalypse [Written]


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Skilled Apocalypse Magician
lv 4 DARK
Spellcaster/Effect
While face-up on the field or in your GY, this card is also LIGHT Attribute. You can only use the following effects of "Skilled Apocalypse Magician" once per turn.
* If this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned: Add 1 "Cycle of the World" and either 1 "Ruin" Ritual Monster or "Demise" Ritual Monster from your Deck to your hand. 
* If you have 3 or more Ritual Spell Cards in your GY (Quick Effect): You can banish this card from your GY; Special Summon 1 "Ruin" Ritual Monster or "Demise" Ritual Monster from your hand or GY (This Special Summon is treated as a Ritual Summon.)
ATK/2000 DEF/0

End, the Deity of Apocalypse
lv 12 DARK
Zombie/Fusion/Effect
1 Level 8 or higher "Ruin" Ritual Monster + 1 Level 8 or higher "Demise" Ritual Monster
Must be Fusion Summoned by banishing the listed Fusion Materials from your GY (You do not use Polymerization.) While face-up on the field or in your GY, this card is also LIGHT Attribute. You can only control 1 "End, the Deity of Apocalypse". You can only use the following effects of "End, the Deity of Apocalypse" once per turn.
* If this card is Fusion Summoned while you have 3 Ritual Spell Cards with the same name in your GY: Banish all other cards on the field face-down. 
* (Quick Effect): Target 1 face-up card your opponent controls; negate that cards effects and banish it.
* If this card is destroyed or banished by an opponents card effect: Special Summon 1 "Ruin" Ritual Monster and 1 "Demise" Ritual Monster from your hand, Deck or GY (This Special Summon is treated as a Ritual Summon.)
ATK/4000 DEF/4000

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I like the effect of the first card. Support for Ruin and Demise is welcomed by me. The 2nd effect feels cheap despite the setup required. Maybe make it simulate a Ritual Summon more and make it banish monsters in the GY as "tributes" for the monster you are Ritual Summoning? For example, if you Summon the Level 4 Ruin, then make it banish monsters in the GY whose total Levels equal 4 (not more, or else you can abuse banish effects by banishing all your monsters in the GY). Also, the effect doesn't resemble the standard effects of the colored Skilled Magicians (gain Spell counters, Tribute it with 3 Spell Counters to Summon a monster from a series) so IMO a name change is in order.

2nd monsters feels so out of place, though. I'm not a fan because, the way you wrote it, it can be shortcut into it like the ABC Fusion monster, so it's just a matter of having mill power to get the 2 Ritual Monsters in the GY and then bam!, you get a 4000/4000 behemoth with a negation and floating effect. If it required the materials to be properly Ritual Summoned first, you would be onto something, but then the card would fall in the "awesome but impractical" trope.

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