Dice Ninja

[Horu]

Just a little card inspired by the prettiest man on YGO, Duke Devlin.

 

Dice Ninja

Earth

Warrior/Effect

Lv4

400/300

Once per turn, roll a six-sided die and apply the appropriate effect:

● If the result is greater than the number of monsters your opponent controls: This card's ATK becomes equal to the result ×400 until the End Phase.

● If the result is lower than the number of monsters your opponent controls: This card can attack directly.

● If the result is equal to the number of monsters your opponent controls: This card is unaffected by card effects until the End Phase.

[Pommelo]

Mmm... I don't remember seeing a card that "multiplies" the ATK (though perhaps it exists, I just can't remember right now). ATK increases/decreases, doubles/halves, or becomes X. By that amount is a bit problematic as well as it could refer to either the result or the number of monsters the opponent controls, though by saying that amount is likely you refer to the die result. At any rate, I'd use another formula to clarify the effect.

This card's ATK becomes the result x400.

There's another reason for which it needs this wording: ATK change. Say that you control 3 face-up mobs and equip this card with United We Stand, so 400+2400 = 2800. The result was 5? Lol, 14k ATK.

Second effect seems fine, and since this card is not too powerful but something more casual, I'd add a third effect: If the result is equal to the number of monsters your opponent controls. I daresay it's fine if you give this monster some sort of immunity with this effect, like mob effect protection or something n.n

[Horu]

37 minutes ago, Rayfield Lumina said:

Mmm... I don't remember seeing a card that "multiplies" the ATK (though perhaps it exists, I just can't remember right now). ATK increases/decreases, doubles/halves, or becomes X. By that amount is a bit problematic as well as it could refer to either the result or the number of monsters the opponent controls, though by saying that amount is likely you refer to the die result. At any rate, I'd use another formula to clarify the effect.

This card's ATK becomes the result x400.

There's another reason for which it needs this wording: ATK change. Say that you control 3 face-up mobs and equip this card with United We Stand, so 400+2400 = 2800. The result was 5? Lol, 14k ATK.

Second effect seems fine, and since this card is not too powerful but something more casual, I'd add a third effect: If the result is equal to the number of monsters your opponent controls. I daresay it's fine if you give this monster some sort of immunity with this effect, like mob effect protection or something n.n

Updated.

I also made the first and third effect last only until the EP since the die roll is opt. Also, a 2400 ATK Lv4 is quite a big monster. Also having an extremely lucky omni negate should be limited to that turn.

[Horu]

5 minutes ago, Horu said:

Updated.

I also made the first and third effect last only until the EP since the die roll is opt. Also, a 2400 ATK Lv4 is quite a big monster. Also having an extremely lucky omni negate should be limited to that turn.

Changed the last effect to protect this card instead of an omni negate.

[Pommelo]

Just now, Horu said:

Changed the last effect to protect this card instead of an omni negate.

You beat me to that, omni-negate was too strong.

[Horu]

27 minutes ago, Rayfield Lumina said:

You beat me to that, omni-negate was too strong.

Yeah. I usually try to save omni-negates for boss monsters. Very rarely will it go on something lower than a Lv9.