OvoMaster Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 [align=left]So, this is my new Fan - fic, i'm pretty new to this thing so don't flame me if it isn't very good, just tell me what do i need to change.Ok, here's it: INTRODUCTION In this world, everyone duels.If you are not a duelist, you are considered an outlaw.Even if you are a Racer, Engineer, Actor or anything you must duel.Duels decide your life, if you are a thief, you must defeat the police to go free, if you lose, you go to the prison.Even if you want to be an engineer, you must go to a duel school first, and graduate.You cannot escape your destiny : DUEL.When someone is born, they get a set of cards, from the doctors or their family.The doctors give very common cards, but your family can give you cards from other generations, that are really stronger than the normal ones… CHARACTERSName: Nabu (Main Character)Age: 20Gender: MaleProfessions: Nabu is a professional Racer and duelist, who likes to watch cartoons, and in his world its not normal to see someone with 12 years or more watching cartoons.They think its Childish.Deck: Turbo Deck.Has two secret cartoon cards that he’s got from the producer, who has liked his personality, and was happy to know an adult was watching his cartoons.Background: He’s a very good duelist and racer, when he’s not running or dueling, he will be watching cartoons. His “Turbo” deck comes from his Father, who was a racer, and died during a car accident.His last words were “Take those cards with you. I’m Sure they will help you”.----------------------------------------------- Name: NoopyHistory: Noopy is Nabu’s duel spirit, that he has got when he got the card “Turbo Warrior”.Only Nabu can hear him, not even people who can speak to duel spirits can understand Noopy.-----------------------------------------------Name: Jhen (Main Antagonist)Age: 28Proffessions: The leader of the racers clan, who doesn’t like Nabu, and kind o fears him because he seems to be the only racer that will be able to defeat Jhen in both dueling and racing some day.Deck:??Background: Once Friend of Nabu, now he doesn’t like him, so Nabu can’t join the racers clan.Jhen has never been defeated in duels and races, and that’s why he fears Nabu.-----------------------------------------------Name: Sir FertosHistory: Sir Fertos is Nabu’s administrator, who finds important people to duel or race with Nabu .He’s really rich, and is a good person.He is always happy with good things to tell Nabu.-----------------------------------------------[spoiler=CHAPTER 1] Dueling ChangesNot much has changed since our time, only that dueling is really serious now and is in your destiny, you must duel regardless of your profession. CHAPTER 1- And Nabu is leading the race !!!!!!!Shouts the narrator of the raceNabu is looking behind, and Jhen is in the second place.Without Nabu noticing, Jhen gets near him.Nabu quickly pushed the Nitro Button, but Jhen did that too, and won the race.- Nabu, I said it, im unbeatable- I almost got you this timeSaid Nabu Smiling-Why are you so happy!!!Furiously, Jhen puches Nabu in the face.The Narrator comes running.-Stop the fight here.We will decide this with a duel.Who wins will get the race’s prize so DUEL START:--------------------------------------------DUEL--------------------------------------------------Nabu: You will still lose this prize to meJhen: So, finally dueling someone who can be a real challengeNabu: Are you ready punk?Jhen: …You can’t beat meNabu and Jhen: DUEL!!!Nabu: I’ll start, DRAW!!!Hmm, I Summon Turbo Bike in Attack mode!!!Now I place a face-down card.End Turn!Jhen: My turn, DRAW!!!I Special Summon Cyber Dragon in Attack mode.Then I Normal Summon Machine King Prototype in Attack mode also.Cyber Dragon, ATTACK(Cyber Dragon goes forward and destroy’s turbo Bike -400 LP for Nabu)Now Machine King Prototype DIRECT ATTACK(-1700 LP for Nabu)Nabu: AhhhhhhJhen: I said it.I’m unbeatable.I set a card.Nabu: Lets see, DRAW!!I Summon Turbo car in attack mode!I send Turbo Toy from my deck to the Grave, and destroy 1 face-up monster on the field.I select Cyber Dragon!!!Jhen: heh, not so bad but I activate the Trap Card Shift.With this I can change your Effect to another monster on my field.i Choose Machine King Prototype.Nabu: Very nice move, but I activate my Trap card NOS - Nitrous Oxide SystemSo my monster gets 1000 bonus ATK until the End PhaseTurbo Car, ATTACK Cyber Dragon!!!I set 2 cards.(-800 LP for Jhen)<<<<>>>>>Jhen: I’m still winning in Life Points.My turn DRAW!!!!!I activate Power Bond from my hand, and fuse together 2 “Cyber Dragons” in my hand, to Special Summon Cyber Twin Dragon.CTD ATTACK (Cyber Twin Tries an Attack but…)Nabu:Trap card Magic Cylinder, i got ya.Jhen: Not so fast. I activate De-Fusion, And now I have 2 cyber dragons ready to attack.Cyber Dragons attack!!! (Both cyber dragons try to attack)Nabu: Another Trap card, Draining Shield. (+2100 LP for Nabu)(The other Cyber Dragon destroy’s Turbo Car. -200 LP for Nabu) I End my turn, so I lose 2800 points due to Power Bond.<<<<>>>>>Nabu: My turn.DRAW!!!!I summon another Turbo Car in attack mode.Jhen: What, another one?Nabu: I have 3 of this oneI send Another Turbo Toy to the Graveyard to destroy 1 Cyber Dragon!!!Then I activate the card that a cartoon producer gave me, and I knew it would be very useful against that popular Cyber Dragon.I ACTIVATE the Spell card Johnny Bravo in this world!!!!Now I can summon 1 Johnny Bravo from my deck or hand.I Summon Johnny Bravo in ATTACK position, and due to the Spell card’s effect it gains 100 ATK so it has 2200, just enough to Destroy you!!!!Johnny, Attack (Johnny says : NACHOSSS and destroys Cyber Dragon -100 LP for Jhen)ATTACK DIRECTLY Turbo Car<<<<>>>>>---------------------------------------------DUEL OVER----------------------------------------------------So, I win this duel, bu you can have your prize, since I’m not a bad guy and you won the race.Says Nabu- No, I don’t like you, but you won this duel and who wins the duel gets the prize, so…NABU IS THE NEW WINNER!!!!People cheer, and Nabu gets so Happy, He found out that Jhen isn’t so evil at all.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 I see,so what's the plot on? I guess...the life and times of a dueling racer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 its very nice. i will read the next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 well,that was rather impressive.Like those cards you made for the fan-fic,except for Johnny Bravo. (I've seen that show during childhood & it was a perfect piece of s*** to me,but if you like him,you can keep him) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proffesser Yugi Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 sigh this is 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OvoMaster Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Ty for the comments, i'm making the 2nd chapter when i get some time.Johnny Bravo is pretty much a Cyber Dragon counter, he won't use it in many chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Demon Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Good. I never liked Johny Bravo but if you like him that's fine with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proffesser Yugi Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 me to but that one was funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Ty for the comments' date=' i'm making the 2nd chapter when i get some time.Johnny Bravo is pretty much a Cyber Dragon counter, he won't use it in many chapters.[/quote']Oh good!Now I won't need to force myself with that disgrace to guys everywhere just to watch this fanfic.Wait!Did I just say it out loud? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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