Mew 101 Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 [align=center]Note: This is just a preview.The Legend Of PokémonComing to Fan-Fic 5/14/08Mew 101Poké-Items DeluxePokémon Elite 2000Spriters-ResourceYu-Gi-Oh Card MakerMicrosoft Note: Manaphy & the Pokemon under it are not flying, so that is why there aren't shadows of them. Sry about white outline around large Orange Text.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Not all the picture can be seen, and the text is barely readable. Otherwise, not bad ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OCG Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 I'd pay 2 points per isssue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Good job, Mew. Will you be making more? I'd certainly read them. ^.^ ~ Lucas 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Not all the picture can be seen' date=' and the text is barely readable. Otherwise, not bad ^_^[/quote'] What do you mean "Can't be seen?" Also, the text used isn't official. I'm trying out fronts to see which one would be the best. The color in the official for the text is going to be white in the dark areas & black in the bright areas. I'm also trying to get a front that is small but can still be seen without squinting so much at it. Lucas: Yes I will be making more. Also a side note. The background of the whole thing is curently Black. It is going to change 3 times through out the story. 0/4-1/4 of Story: Black, 1/4-2/4: Dark Gray, 2/4-3/4: Light Gray, 3/4-5/6: White, & 5/6-6/6(Or Ganon's Castle): Multi-Colord. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 wow!this is gonna turn out to be great! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Not all the picture can be seen' date=' and the text is barely readable. Otherwise, not bad ^_^[/quote'] What do you mean "Can't be seen?" Also, the text used isn't official. I'm trying out fronts to see which one would be the best. The color in the official for the text is going to be white in the dark areas & black in the bright areas. I'm also trying to get a front that is small but can still be seen without squinting so much at it. Lucas: Yes I will be making more. Also a side note. The background of the whole thing is curently Black. It is going to change 3 times through out the story. 0/4-1/4 of Story: Black, 1/4-2/4: Dark Gray, 2/4-3/4: Light Gray, 3/4-5/6: White, & 5/6-6/6(Or Ganon's Castle): Multi-Colord. That's what I mean, I can only see half of the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 You need to move over to the left to view the whole thing. If you can't then something is wrong Because I'm having no probloms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 You need to move over to the left to view the whole thing. If you can't then something is wrong Because I'm having no probloms. Ah, thanks much better, and now I'm even more interested! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 11, 2008 Report Share Posted May 11, 2008 Use speech bubbles. But other than that, yeah, I'd pay two points an issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 I would use them...if I didn't suck at making them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 They're pretty easy if you use GIMP or Photoshop. I can do them, so you ought to be able to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 Interesting comic, but I can't help but point out that you have a few issues. You got Farore and Nayru mixed up. Nayru is the Wisdom goddess, and Farore is the Courage goddess. Also I'm not sure if you're trying to follow Ocarina of time, but I'm pretty sure you are. The 3rd key isn't guarded by Hylians of the river and lake, but the Zoras. If you do mean that the 3rd key though is being guarded by Hylians, than it's only 3 tribes, since Hylians are Hyrulians. Hyrulians isn't a species like the other three, its a nationality. Sorry for getting technical and all, just wanted to point that out. Artistic wise its an ok comic. Lack of word bubbles would be the only issue I can point out. It isn't hard to do them, that is if you're using paint. Just use the oval tool. If you go to the oval tool, you'll get three choices. Choose the middle choice. Than if you make black you're first color choice, and white your secondary color, you can make decent word bubbles. Interested in seeing more. I'm guessing you'll be putting pokemon into the place of the usual characters. Wonder who will be who. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 The Hylians are the people of lake Hylia, as the Hyrulian are of Castle Town. That & every pice of info comes from either my memory from when I was a zelda fan, or from online zelda wikapedias, sites, & other stuff, so most of my stuff is right on target. The only thing that is off is I can't find a good Pokémon for Navi, so she won't be in the story, which sucks. And, yes, I am going on the story line of the #1 Zelda Game (And was #1 Game of all time untill Super Mario Galixy) ever, Ocarina of Time, with a twist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted May 12, 2008 Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 use white text. it can hardly be seen >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew 101 Posted May 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2008 I've already said that is not the oficial color of the text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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