Skuldur Posted May 13, 2008 Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 awesome chap man keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2008 Thanks everyone and in about 3 eps the story behind Jin's abilities shall be revealed and it even involes Jaden and Yugi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 I'm getting excited over the plot now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proffesser Yugi Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Very nice chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhoon brightness Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Whoa, thats awesome, I love it, great decription>:-) XD- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Thanks everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 brlliant dude nice editing with the pictures. and brilliant idea and story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 14, 2008 Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 Eh, ish. If Jin can beat Obelisk, he's the ruler of the monster world. That's my main peeve. That, and there's too much expo where it's unnecessary, and not enough where it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 BTW,I love the unique style I see in your fanfics with those pictures.When will the next chapter be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GordieKat Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 "This duel disk was the award Jesse Anderson recieved for defeating Yugi Motou." NOT POSSIBLE! YUGI COULD NEVER LOSE TO JESSE! SHAME ON YOU!:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Please be Quite.Yugi was a cheating idiot, he won by breaking rules and using banned cards !Yugi would have won if he didn't get disqualified. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spartanricky Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 actually gordiekat in the last episode of yugioh gx (ep. 180) jaden beats yugi motoubut before when jesse comes to gx he beats jaden so it is possible that jesse beats th king of games.and death reborn in the show there are no banned cards. i dont like how they changed rules when they made the card game though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 actually gordiekat in the last episode of yugioh gx (ep. 180) jaden beats yugi motoubut before when jesse comes to gx he beats jaden so it is possible that jesse beats th king of games.and death reborn in the show there are no banned cards. i dont like how they changed rules when they made the card game though.Thats what I mean they use cards like POG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 Sorry for the double post but I'm ending this.Somebody said to me :1.The Grammar sucks.2.The images are stupid3.The chapters are too short (Dude 1100 words is long for me !)4.And the fact that he rips Obelisk makes him almighty.I take this guys advice but he is a damn n00b to think Obelisk is a good card.So I will be ending this and creating a new one without visual effects to make it look cool, just plain old writting long and boring chapters that people say they like and then get bored of it. Cuz I don't really want to read some 13 year old kids 8000 word chapter.Well Umbra lock please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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