AlienPrinceOTK Posted August 22, 2020 Report Share Posted August 22, 2020 Hey guys, I've taken up your feedback and here's the updated version of this card. Card Effect: 3 Level 4 monsters Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; activate one of these effects. ● This turn, this card can make a second attack on an opponent's monster during each Battle Phase, also if it battles a monster, it gains 1000 ATK during the Damage Step. At the end of the Battle Phase: Change this card to Defense Position. ● Inflict 800 damage to your opponent, also until the end of your opponent's turn, if an opponent's monster declares an attack: Change this card to Attack Position; Change the attack target to this card, and this card cannot be destroyed by the result of that battle. - What do you think of its playability? Is the wording 100% correct? Does it fit the archetype—I admit I haven't played Gagaga? Any sort of suggestions and feedback are welcome. I'm thinking of ordering printed copies of this card, and others, via a website. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted August 22, 2020 Report Share Posted August 22, 2020 Ok, Mr. @AlienPrinceOTK, I see "Girl" in a card, I approve. Then I see Lighting in a card, I double approve xD Anywho, your card grammar is not so bad, but let's try to refine it a bit n.n Quote 3 Level 4 monsters Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can detach 1 material from this card; activate one of the following effects. ● This turn, this card can make up to two attacks on monsters during each Battle Phase, also if it battles a monster, it gains 1000 ATK during the Damage Step only. If this effect was activated, at the end of the Battle Phase: Change this card to Defense Position. ● Inflict 800 damage to your opponent, also, until the end of your opponent's turn, if an opponent's monster declares an attack, change this card to Attack Position, and if you do, change the attack target to this card, also this card cannot be destroyed during that battle. The effect in itself is simple, I guess, but it works, I have no objections. The problem is, this card requires 3 materials, and it's ATK / DEF is really low. Consider Evilswarm Ouroboros, which has 2750 ATK / 1950 DEF, and I feel it's weak for today's standards (there are 2 material Rank 4 Xyz with 3000 / 2500, altough they're not generic. All in all, since this card's effects aren't that strong, I suggest raising this card's ATK around 2800. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlienPrinceOTK Posted August 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2020 50 minutes ago, Rayfield Lumina said: Ok, Mr. @AlienPrinceOTK, I see "Girl" in a card, I approve. Then I see Lighting in a card, I double approve xD Anywho, your card grammar is not so bad, but let's try to refine it a bit n.n The effect in itself is simple, I guess, but it works, I have no objections. The problem is, this card requires 3 materials, and it's ATK / DEF is really low. Consider Evilswarm Ouroboros, which has 2750 ATK / 1950 DEF, and I feel it's weak for today's standards (there are 2 material Rank 4 Xyz with 3000 / 2500, altough they're not generic. All in all, since this card's effects aren't that strong, I suggest raising this card's ATK around 2800. Cheers! The ATK gain is permanent. Thanks for the word edits, and I appreciate your insight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted August 22, 2020 Report Share Posted August 22, 2020 2 minutes ago, AlienPrinceOTK said: The ATK gain is permanent. Thanks for the word edits, and I appreciate your insight. You're welcome n.n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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