Chaos Impact™ Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 This is my new fan fic yugioh sacred soul! Tune in every friday to see the new epsiode which i will post at 8:00 pm. I will start looking for characters after the next three episodes so don't waste your time. Oh well lets get started.It's D time![spoiler=Main Character "Click to View"]Name: Elliot BrownAge: 13Deck: Six Samurai DeckBio: Elliot, is a quite boy but who keeps his head down in class but lets that go out then window as soon he gets into a duel. He spends most of his spare time dueling and buying cards to improve his deck. He has made over a hundred decks in his life but settled with a six sumurai deck when he was eleven. His parents are the richest family in thier area, often he has been seen spending over £20 on boosters. His catch phrase when he starts a duel is "It's D Time!" [spoiler=Setting "Click to View"]The setting is earth but a little into the future. The year 2013. No new reverloution invention has changed the way humans have lived. [spoiler=Episode Guide "Click to View"]Episode One----------- Snake In The Grass---------- 09-05-08--------Post 8 / Page 1Episode Two----------- Shinning Destruction----------- 15-05-08-------Post 22 / Page 2Epsiode Three---------- Mega Monarch Showdown-Part One---------- 22-05-08Episode Four-----------Mega Monarch Showdown-Part Two----------29-05-08Episode Five--------------A Frosty Reception-------------------06-06-08Episode Six-----------------Magma Eruption Blast----------------13-06-08Episode Seven-----------------Thunder Impact-------------------20-06-08Episode Eight------------------Clam Before The Storm-------------27-06-08 [spoiler=Small Part Characters "Click to View"]Jack YoungAge: 13Deck: Venom DeckBio: Elliots main enemy at school. One of the only people in the school who can duel at the same standard as Elliot. Known for stealing cards from other duelists, he was recenlty banned from the local championship for stealing. [spoiler=Decks "Click to View"][spoiler=Elliot's Deck "Click to View"]Samurai Soul42 CardsMonsters x24S.S Zanji x3 S.S Irou x3S.S Yaichi x2S.S Kamon x2S.S Yariza x2S.S Nisashi x3Maruading Captian x1Grandmaster of the Six Samurai x2Great Shogun Shien x2Enishi, Shien's Chancellor x1Chamberlain of the six samuari x1Shien's footsoldier x1Spitit Of the Six Samurai x1Spells x9Legendary Ebon Steed x2Shiens Castle Of Mist x2Cunning Of The Six Samurai x1Six Samurai United x2Traps x9Breakthrough! x3Return Of The Six Samurai x1Swift Samuria Storm x2Backs To The Wall x1Swiftstrike Armour x2 Well hope you enjoyed reading and don't forget to tune in every Friday at 8:00pm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Awesome, can't wait till the first chapter, it's just like a tv show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 thanks i tried to do that.But i have one question which layout should i choose?i usally do a play sort of layout but i think i should try something new any surggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Cool I can't wait to see the episodes and I like how the main character uses a Six Samuria Deck :D but yes it is just like a TV Show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 thanks i tried to do that.But i have one question which layout should i choose?i usally do a play sort of layout but i think i should try something new any surggestions? Do you mean Lay it out like..... well this way? Person 1: Hello!!!!Person 2: Hi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 yeah thanks again, (before you attack me for posting loads on my thread, i am trying to reply to everyones posts) I noticed that not any fan fic characters have S.S decks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Can't wait for the new ep. Goodluck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Episode One- Snake In The GrassThe school bell rang, and a boy rushed out of the school at lightning speed. He ran about 400 meters until he reached a small corner shop with flashing lights saying “Duel Monsters Boosters Sold Here”. The boy entered and ran straight to a small line of boosters at the top there was a row of shinny brand new packs “Gladiators Assault on them. The boy sweating lightly sweating pulled a twenty pound note and collected as many packs as he could carry. He then pushed his way through some adults until he got to the counter, the shop keeper smiled and said,“Hi Elliot, how many have you got there then?”“Fourteen” Elliot replied.He handed over the note to the shopkeeper, who carefully checked the note, as he was doing this he turned to Elliot,“You can never be too careful these days” He joked.“Come on, you know that isn’t a fake, my parents gave it to me” Elliot replied jogging on the spot,“Can I go now?” “Yes” The shopkeeper replied smiling.Elliot left the shop and ran to the park bench just across from the shop. He sat down and quickly ripped the packs open, skimming through the card until the fifth card saying,“Yes, yes, yes, No!” Groaning every time he didn’t get the card he wanted.A lot of groans later he got down to his last pack, he closed his eyes a whispered to the pack under his breath,“Come on please, please be the one, please”He opened the pack very slowly and slowly looked through card until he saw the glint of a card. It shinned in the sun; he turned it towards him able to see the card. “Oh my god! I’ve got it; I’ve got Enishi, Shien's Chancellor!”He got his deck out of his school trouser pocket, he added the new card onto the top of the deck, and he held it up high and said,“I’ve completed the Six Samurai deck!”He smelt his under arm, it was horrible. He decided to go home to shower, he ran along a narrow ally until he saw a boy about his age emerge from the shadows. He blocked his path, on his arm there was a loaded duel disk.“Hello, Elliot.” He said.“Jack, I bet you’ve guess what I’ve just got, I got Enishi, Shie-“I know I watched you from the bushes, but I haven’t come for that card, I’ve come for all the others you got.” He snapped,“I saw you get awesome cards and you just tossed them aside! All for one stupid card!” He continued.“If you think you going to get those cards you’ve got another thing coming!” Elliot replied.“Alright then, I’ll duel you for them” He said “Right!” Elliot replied already getting his duel disk out of his bag,“It’s D Time!” Elliot said.“Prepare to lose” Said Jack hissing. DUEL Elliot- 4000 Jack- 4000 “Feel the pain of my Venom deck! Jack shouted.I’ll tell you when it feel it” Joked Elliot.I’ll Start , and I summon marauding captain! Said Elliot“This monsters effect lets me summon one four star warrior monster from my hand and I choose Six Samurai Zanji! Now I set two card and end my turn. Elliot said proudly.“That’s a good move, but I’ll do better first I activate a spell Snake rain! Jack shouted.“This lets me send four reptile monsters from my deck, then I set one card and summon my reptile monster Gagagigo! I then attack with it at your marauding captan!Then I end my turn.” He continued.“Right, now I activate my spell the A. Forces. Then I summon my irou! I then use my Zanji to attack your monster and since A forces increases all my warriors attack by 200 points, so now I attack your Gagagigo and destroy it! Now irou attack, so now you only have 2000 points left. Now I activate the field spell Shien's Castle of Mist!” Elliot shouted.“Good move” replied jack, “but I activate the trap, Damage = reaptile and I now end my turn. Jack stood there smiling.“That was short this should be easy then, I summon Six Samurai – Nisashi now I attack with my zanji.” shouted Elliot.“NOOOOOOOOOO” Shouted Jack“Yes my A. forces increases my zanji’s attack to 2000 so that it wipes your life points before you trap activates.” Said Elliot Proudly. END DUEL Elliot- 4000 Jack- 0000 Jack fall to the ground leaves his duel disk and deck and runs away.“Hey wait you forgot your stuff!” Elliot shouts But jacks already gone.Thanks For Tuning In! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Episode one is out!Sorry for it being late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 wow cool it looks awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 thanks, was it good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 14, 2008 check out the new banner in my sig! It's in the second spoiler.Credit goes to chronos crowler! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 the duel's way too short,at least make the main duel of the episode last longer,with both players fighting to their limits here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Incredible effort on this whole thing! My only comment would be agreeing with Lord Wyhe, in saying that you should make the duel a bit longer. Otherwise, great job! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 yeah sorry about that. Will do that i the next epsiodes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Spelling and Grammar could have been much better. The characters feel somewhat meh, and the duel could have been much better. I can't comment on the plot, since it hasn't been revealed yet. Rating: 35%. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 cant waitis there only four episodes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 no i only posted up the episodes that are out this month.P.S The new air time is now 9:00pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 sorry for the double post but i can't post the next epsiode until tommorow next week will be back to normal i have to go and see my new baby cousin bye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 sorry for the double post but i can't post the next epsiode until tommorow next week will be back to normal i have to go and see my new baby cousin bye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 A way to improve this is by putting the real cards in some place and a link to a website that has a picture of it. That would be much easier for some people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted May 17, 2008 Report Share Posted May 17, 2008 Needs better grammar. I like the overall idea of it being a TV show however. And you NEED to make the duels more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Episode 2: Shinning DestructionElliot stood outside gate waiting; his bag was incredibly heavy his left shoulder was hurting so much because he had two duel disks, plus his school books. He kept turning his head wincing every time he did it. Then he saw him Jack he looked at him, they made eye contact for about five seconds then jack looked away. Elliot ran over to him and said holding his arm so he didn’t walk away,“I have your duel disk, you ran away after I beat you yesterday”Jack looked at him; stunned even some of the people around him stopped their talks and turned to see what was going on.“Shut up Elliot I let you win, and besides you…..you stole it!” Jack shouted his face red with embarrassment.“No I didn’t you lost then ran away I even have your deck” Elliot said calmly.Some of the people around them started to whisper some even started to laugh, one even shouted“You lost to Lonerboy!”Elliot didn’t like that knick name just because he kept quiet and didn’t do much didn’t make him weird. Jack turned to Elliot his fist clenched about to hit him just has he pulled out his arm Elliot bent over a got jack’s duel disk out of his bag and handed it to him.“Thanks,” mumbled jack still angry with the people whispering around him, he grabbed the duel disk and walked away.Everyone walked away still talking about the conversation Elliot and Jack just had. The school day went normally until mid way through mid lesson a van with a loud speaker on top started to blurt out an announcement,“Attention all duellist the famous Duellist Seto Kaiba’s Deck will be on tour this year and the first stop is your local duel arena tonight!”Everyone throughout the day continued to talk about Kaiba’s deck coming to their local area.The day passed and Elliot finished school and went to queue at the arena lots of people were their, he managed to get in the room was packed lots of replica decks were on for sale and many people were even dressed up as Kaiba duelling. The night went well the announcer came up to the podium and announced“Ladies and gentlemen I’m proudly about to show one of the founders of duelling deck. The Deck of Seto Kaiba!”The room suddenly went black and some people even screamed. There was a sound of glass smashing then the lights came back on. The Deck had disappeared and the glass casing that the deck was in was smashed. Women were screaming, men were running about, and the doors and windows crashed open. The CIA came running in and rounded up all the people. Elliot stood on the outside then he saw it, a shadow just outside the door looking in, Elliot focused on the person on one hand his fist was bleeding and in the other hand the deck, Kaiba’s Deck!“Look over there! He’s got, that guys got the deck!” Elliot shouted pointing at the guy.Everyone turned around in unison, some of the agents started to run, but they were much to slow, Elliot pushed passed them a run after the thief he. He was wearing a cloak and after about a hundred meters he tripped over into an alley. Elliot jogged over to him and reached out to take the deck but the guy pushed him away and got up. He moved his cloak, there was an empty duel disk, and he looked up, and said“If you want this deck back you’ll have to due me first for it,” he said smirking,“But hang on, you haven’t got a deck, so you can’t duel me!” Elliot stood their seeing if there was any chance he could grab it right out of the guy’s hands. The thief broke his train of thought and said very calmly,“Oh, but I do have a deck and its right here,” He held up the deck and loaded it into his duel disk.“So are you ready to duel one of the best and rarest decks ever made!” He continued.“Right so if I win I get the deck but, if I lose what happens?” Elliot wondered,“I get your deck and keep Kaiba’s!” The thief shouted laughing,“Prepare to lose to the power of the white dragons!” he shouted being hysterically“It’s D-Time!” Cried out Elliot...“I’ll start” Said the thief “and I summon the monster Luster dragon!” Then I set two cards face down and end my turn.”“Right I summon Irou in attack mode then activate the field spell Shien’s castle of mist, then I activate the spell banner of courage!” Said Elliot then he continued,“I then set one card face down and end my turn” “O.k. now I summon the monster lord of D, now attack your monster and destroy it! Said Rasek“Not so fast my field spell activates” Elliot said, “and it’s effect…“But my lord of D effect activates all spells that effect dragon monsters are negated so ha!” Rasek Laughed as he said it.Elliot’s monster is destroyed along with luster dragon which leaves Rasek to attack his life points directly.“Ahhhhhhhhhh!” said Elliot in pain[align=center]Rasek-4000Elliot- 2800 [/align]He continued “now I activate the trap Swiftsrike armour”“What will that do now? I end my turn” said Rasek“Now I draw and activate my traps effect when I draw a six samurai I can special summon it to the field and I just drew Zanji, now I normal summon Nishasi! Now go, my monsters attack. Zanji attacks your luster dragon. Plus since my Banner of courage rises my monster’s attack points by 200 now go! Elliot shouted.Rasek is hurled backwards after his monster is destroyed,“Doesn’t even hurt” He said with gritted teeth.“If that didn’t maybe this will! Go Nishasi attack twice and make him feel some real pain!” Elliot jeered back his reply.[align=center]Rasek-300Elliot-3900[/align]“Now I have almost destroyed you and in my next turn you’re finished, I set one card and end my turn” He said happy with how he had almost finished the duel in one turn.“Right I have do this right now or I’m finished” Rasek thought, “I draw and I activate the spell pot o greed which lets me draw two cards from my deck then I activate my face down trap “call of the haunted” now it lets me summon my lord of D to the field in able to activate this spell flute of summoning dragon! Now I summon some of the rarest monsters in this deck, two blue eyes white dragons! Now I summon a rare metal dragon in attack position and switch to my battle phrase and will end this dual and get to decks when I started the day with none! Rasek laughed “no go get me his deck, my blue eyes!”“Stop!” Said Elliot “I activate the spell thundering roar so you miss your battle phrase”“You’re lucky and I end my turn” Said Rasek.“Right now I draw and special summon the card Irou thanks to my trap then I normal summon the monster kamon and now I set another card and end my turn. Said Elliot building up his strategy.“I draw and activate the spell Polymerization! And I fuse my two dragons and one in my hand to form Blue eyes ultimate dragon now go attack his Zanji “said Rasek“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Elliot hit the flour after the attack.[align=center]Rasek-300Elliot- 300[/align]“I end my turn.” said Rasek.“I now remove two six samurai monsters to special summon Enishi, Shien’s Chancellor! And I activate its effect I can destroy one monster on the field and I choose your ultimate dragon! Now go my Enishi attack his rare metal dragon and win his duel!” Said Elliot proudly.“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” said Rasek[align=center]Rasek-0000Elliot-300[/align]He fell to the floor suddenly a loud cheer came from behind Elliot the whole lot of people in the stadium where behind them they must have watched the duel from the start. Rasek was picked up by the security and the deck was taken off him. He was bustled away until he started to fall to the ground. Elliot bent down and asked him“By the way why did you do it?”Rasek winced then his body started to vaporize into dust first went his hand then his arm but just before he did disappear totally he said.“It was just practice” he said before his head joined his body as a lump of sand on the ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 by the wy sorry for being so late with the next episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 right currently working on episode 3, 4 and 5 and plus the episode quide is now updated for new episodes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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