Yami Kiniko Posted March 14, 2020 Report Share Posted March 14, 2020 The Arc-Angels are DARK / Fairy monsters. Arc-Angel of Eyes Level 4 / DARK Fairy / Flip FLIP: Destroy 1 Monster and Spell / Trap on each players side of the field 1200 / 1650 I tried to base a Arc-Angel on Morphing Jar Arc-Angel of Cruel Passion Level 4 / DARK Fairy / Effect While this card is on the field: All "Arc-Angel" cards except "Arc-Angel of Cruel Passion" cannot be targeted for card effects 1500 / 950 What? Most Archetypes have one. Arc-Angel of Dark Magic Level 5 / DARK Fairy / Effect (This card is always treated as a Spellcaster Type) If "Dark Magician Girl" is on the field: This card gains 500 ATK and DEF (This card is always treated as a "Dark Magician") 1700 / 1875 I didn't know what i was doing Anarch Arc-Angel of Punishment Level 5 / DARK Fairy / Gemini This card is always treated as a normal monster, except in the battle phase. When this card is a effect monster: All monsters destroyed by this card are banished. 2000 / 1690 Part of the Anarch Arc-Angel sub-archetype. Anarch Arc-Angel of The Dragons Level 5 / DARK Fairy / Effect (This card is always treated as a Dragon Type) This card gains 300 ATK for every Dragon type monster banished Once per turn: Banish 1 Dragon type monster (From your Hand, Field or GY) 1825 / 2000 Anyone can collaborate with me to expand the Archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dokutah Posted March 15, 2020 Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 What you need is NOT collaboration Especially if that "collaboration" is random people making cards based on your cards thats not properly reviewed. When that happen you dont learn to make better cards and the collaborators will make even worse cards Sometimes, genuine care can be harsh Now, on the the actual archetype. This is barely an archetype, the cards is just random effect that dont work together for a certain goal. At minimum, Archetype must have either same gimmick effect (example: almost all Lightsworn monster have effect that dumping cards in the player deck to GY or combo when it sent from deck to GY) OR its a various toolbox effect held together (more like combo together) by interacting with other card by mentioning its group name in that effect (example: salamangreat at first glance having "random" effect, but in reality all those effect connected and combo with each other salamangreat) Sadly i dont see it here. Eyes is Worse Ryko Cruel Passion is too weak for what its intended to do You even admit that you dont really know what you doing with Dark Magic. But ill be blunt and say you dont really have direction on all the cards either Punishment is worse DMOC that dont really deserve its Gemini tag since thats not how gemini works The dragon one is equally random as Dark Magic. Your card so far is fairy without indication of possible dragon member. Also its a worse version of Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon. Which is already a bad irl card In Short: you need critique and direction not cheerleaders via other "collaborator" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami Kiniko Posted March 15, 2020 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 3 hours ago, Dr. Jolly Glot the III said: What you need is NOT collaboration Especially if that "collaboration" is random people making cards based on your cards thats not properly reviewed. When that happen you dont learn to make better cards and the collaborators will make even worse cards Sometimes, genuine care can be harsh Now, on the the actual archetype. This is barely an archetype, the cards is just random effect that dont work together for a certain goal. At minimum, Archetype must have either same gimmick effect (example: almost all Lightsworn monster have effect that dumping cards in the player deck to GY or combo when it sent from deck to GY) OR its a various toolbox effect held together (more like combo together) by interacting with other card by mentioning its group name in that effect (example: salamangreat at first glance having "random" effect, but in reality all those effect connected and combo with each other salamangreat) Sadly i dont see it here. Eyes is Worse Ryko Cruel Passion is too weak for what its intended to do You even admit that you dont really know what you doing with Dark Magic. But ill be blunt and say you dont really have direction on all the cards either Punishment is worse DMOC that dont really deserve its Gemini tag since thats not how gemini works The dragon one is equally random as Dark Magic. Your card so far is fairy without indication of possible dragon member. Also its a worse version of Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon. Which is already a bad irl card In Short: you need critique and direction not cheerleaders via other "collaborator" First things First, Imma say all the words inside my head I'm not good at any card creation so oooooo I need a lot help ooooooo I will forget this archetype and start a new one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HQCardmaker Posted March 15, 2020 Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 Jester Relinquished - Arc-Angel of Backseat Mimicry Level 3/Dark Fairy Place this card in the Spell/Trap Card Zone or whatever Zone replaces that when Summoning. Treat that as part of the Monster Zone on your side/collective slots of the field instead while this is face up. You can select the effect of one face-up "Arc-Angel" Monster on the field;you can apply that effect to this card by paying 500 LP. If an effect tries to make a Monster have higher ATK or DEF than this card (where before it was lower), negate that effect and both you and your opponent draw 1 card and show them and if either is an "Arc-Angel" Monster, the ATK of this Monster increases by 400. ATK 800/ DEF 800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted March 15, 2020 Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 Collaboration 1. The action of working with someone to produce or create something. By definition, offering criticism and direction is collaboration. You are working with somebody to create something. While you are not directly responsible for the creation, you played a small role in it. Kiniko's concept of Archangels is a good one but pretty much already exists in the form of Archlords. Also, why make them DARK Fairy monsters? Generally any angel based card created is fairy by default. Also, Kiniko, if you ever wanna collaborate on a project, just message me and shoot some ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami Kiniko Posted March 15, 2020 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 2 hours ago, HQCardmaker said: Jester Relinquished - Arc-Angel of Backseat Mimicry Level 3/Dark Fairy Place this card in the Spell/Trap Card Zone or whatever Zone replaces that when Summoning. Treat that as part of the Monster Zone on your side/collective slots of the field instead while this is face up. You can select the effect of one face-up "Arc-Angel" Monster on the field;you can apply that effect to this card by paying 500 LP. If an effect tries to make a Monster have higher ATK or DEF than this card (where before it was lower), negate that effect and both you and your opponent draw 1 card and show them and if either is an "Arc-Angel" Monster, the ATK of this Monster increases by 400. ATK 800/ DEF 800 You forgot to say it was a Effect monster. Fairy should be Fairy / Effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HQCardmaker Posted March 15, 2020 Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 Okay. 2 minutes ago, Yami Kiniko said: You forgot to say it was a Effect monster. Fairy should be Fairy / Effect I agree to the change. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami Kiniko Posted March 15, 2020 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2020 1 minute ago, HQCardmaker said: Okay. I agree to the change. Sorry. I also made a new archetype. Check it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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