YU-GI-OH The Underworld of Heaven.

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in this story 2 main chracters

 

trance : cyber dragon deck

 

Sho : GOD Cards Deck.

 

 

 

chapter one

 

The New Guy

 

 

Sho was New At School and he had no friend. his only friend was " the winged dragon of ra" Sho lived in a time were GoD cards were lame and not good. but Sho did not care he put his heart in his deck.

At school he saw this kid name Trance winning a Duel. Sho wanted to Duel and Get a firend so he came in and said " I chalange you to a Duel.

Trance Smiled and said "lets do this"

 

DUel.

Trance : i will start. Draw ! i set a card(masked dragon) and play 1 face down. i end my turn

Sho: mmm Draw ! i play D.D. Warrior Lady and attack you face down.

Trance: you activated his effect.i special sum....

Sho: no you dont by the effect of D.D. Warrior Lady both cards are send to the remve from play. and then i play 1 card face down.

Trance : Draw! i play Cyber Phoenix in attack mode. and i attack.

Sho : i play the trap card Mirror Force and so i am saved.

Sho: Draw ! i play " Dimensional Fissure" and then play "Foolish Buiral" by the effect of " Foolish Burial i send one Monster from my deck to my Graveyard but by the effect of " Dimensional Fissure" the card is send to the remove from play. so i choose "Obolisk the tormentor"

now i place 3 cards face down and end my turn

Trance: Draw! i place 1 card face down and end my turn.

Sho: Draw! i play once more "Foolish Buiral" and now i choose " Slifer The Sky Dragon". and now i will set one monster on the field( Magican of Faith) i end my turn.

Trance : Draw ! i special summon 1 of my Cyber Dragons to the field. no i play Future Fusion and i choose Cyber Twin Dragon . now i use the spell card Overload Fusion and i summon Cyber Twin Dragon to the Field. now i play Limiter Removal to make my Monster's ATK points go to 5600. i ATK .

Sho: i play the trap card return from the diffrenet dimenstion to special summon slifer and obolisk.... i use obolisks effect so i say by by to slifer and my face down to send all your monsters to the graveyard.

Trance : ah no way.

Sho : and by the effect of Limiter Removal you loose 2800 life points.

and now by god cards go back to the remove from play.

Sho: Draw! i play the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon to destory your face down. and i summon Dark Blade to the field and i attack and win the Duel.

Trance : no way how did he do that.

 

Duel end

winner : Sho.

 

in the time of the story when someone has won a duel the loose had to give the winner a any thing a card worthy of the winners best cards. Sho was a good person and didnt need the card so he just walked away. Later the day Trance had this wierd feeling in his head.

 

 

 

END !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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1) We have a name recycled from the GX anime.

2) We have the random and unexplained return of the God cards, and none of the characters seem surprised by this.

3) Overload Fusion now somehow has the power to summon LIGHT monsters.

4) Limiter Removal somehow inflicts an arbitrary amount of damage.

5) Generally badly written.

[Wyhe]

1) We have a name recycled from the GX anime.

2) We have the random and unexplained return of the God cards' date=' and none of the characters seem surprised by this.

3) Overload Fusion now somehow has the power to summon LIGHT monsters.

4) Limiter Removal somehow inflicts an arbitrary amount of damage.

5) Generally badly written.

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he's right.Although I did like the story.But it must need improvements.

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you are right i frogot about it i got confused with some other cards like powerbound. and future summon