[Written/Rework] Amber The Alternative Magician Girl

[Peter Rose]

Name: Amber The Alternative Magician Girl

Level: 6

Attribute: Dark

Type: Monster/Effect/Spellcaster

ATK/DEF: 2400/2000

You cannot control other "Magician Girl" Monsters except "Amber The Alternative Magician Girl". Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by revealing 1 "Dark Magician" or 1 Spell/Trap card that Specifically lists the "Dark Magician" in its text. You can target 1 monster on the field, its original ATK and DEF are reduced by 700 and if either ATK or DEF become 0, as a result, Banish it. If a "Dark Magician" you control battles an opponent's Monster (Quick Effect) you can Banish this card from your GY, double its ATK and DEF until the End Phase. You can only use each effect of "Amber The Alternative Magician Girl" once per turn.

 

So Amber to me is case of "I'm really strong so you better not have another Magician Girl around you". Sort of like a overly insecure girlfriend. This cards design is not ment to work with other Magician Girls. But if you guys have advice on how to better execute that, let me know. The story behind Amber is she betrayed her master the "Dark Magician Girl" in favor of a more Powerful master the "Dark Magician".

[Tinkerer]

This one has a nice balance to it.  Easy to summon to offset the bricky nature of Dark Magician, a simple quick effect that can potentially snipe your opponent's plays, and a solid though not broken GY effect that gives Dark Magician the one type of protection it lacks from Eternal Soul.  The card seems good as-is.  Nice job!