Alerters - Police/Space Military Deck (WIP)

[TheDamnChaos]

So I'm a yu-gi-oh duel links player and it's been while since I've been in a traditional Tcg/Ocg Yugioh format. So forgive me if my cards aren't suited for the link format. Im also new at writing cards in a proper yu-gi oh format.
Disclaimer- all images belong to Larry Wilson, i do not own any of them and all images have been placed in Photoshop to meet certain requirements for the card art.

The Plan - What i want to do with this deck is make some type of U.A archetype (not completely the same) where they don't switch out per say but can return to the hand for reuse ability. The basic structure of a Alerters card looks like so - Monster is summoned effect activates, then a optional effect to return to hand. Then a field spell that utilizes their return to hand effect.

Cards will eventually coded into Ygopro Percy

Any feedback is wanted so i can improve
Thank you and Enjoy

Updated - 5/28/2019
-Returned Winter's Original Effect
-Fixed Commander Lighting
-Fixed Delta Mech
Added more cards to the Alerters archetype



Alerters - Winter Recruit
Lv 4 Earth
Warrior/Effect

Effect
When this card is Summoned: Add 1 "Alerters" monster from your deck to your hand. You can return this card to you control to the Owner's hand, Then Special Summon 1 "Alerters" monster from your hand to your side of the field. You can only use the effect of "Alerters - Winter Recruit" once per turn.

Atk - 1600 Def - 1400



Alerters - Rocketeer Falcon
Lv 4 Earth
Warrior/Effect

Effect
If this card is Summoned: You can target 1 Spell/Trap Card on the field; destroy it. If your opponent activates a card or effect that targets an "Alerters" monster you control (Quick Effect): You can return this face-up card you control to the owner's hand, negate the effect, and if you do, destroy it.

Atk - 1800 Def - 1000



Alerters - Sgt. Scarlet
Lv 6 Earth
Warrior/Effect

Effect
When this card is Summoned: You can Special Summon one "Alerters" monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field (except "Aleters - Sgt. Scarlet"). You can return this card you control to the owner's hand, then Special Summon a "Alerters" monster from your hand to your side of the field, it is unaffected by card effects for the rest of this turn. You can only use each effect of "Alerters - Sgt. Scarlet" once per turn.

Atk 2500 Def 2200




Alerters - Commander Lightning
Lv 8 Earth
Warrior/Effect

Effect

When this card is Summoned: Return 1 monster you control to the owner's hand and Special Summon a monster from your deck with the same name as that monster, to your side of the field. When your opponent Specials Summons a monster from the Extra Deck(Quick Effect): You can return this card you control to the owner's hand,then destroy that monster. You can only use the effects of "Alerters -Commander Lightning" once per turn.

Atk - 2800 Def - 2500




Alerters - Delta Mech
Lv 6 Earth
Machine/XYZ/Effect

Effect


2 Level 6 monsters

Once per turn(Quick Effect): Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, For the rest of this turn monsters you control are unaffected by your opponents monster's effects for the rest of this turn. If a "Alerters" monster you control is targeted by a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls, Negate it and detach 1 Xyz Material from this card.

Atk - 3000 Def - 2900



Alerters - Heavy Mech
Lv 8 Earth
Machine/Synchro/Effect

Effect

2 "Alerters" Tuners + 1 non-Tuner "Alerters" monster
When this card is Summoned: banish 1 monster on the field. When a "Alerters" monster(s) is targeted by a card effect(Quick Effect): This card becomes the new target of the effect, If this card is sent to the GY or removed from play, Special Summon it to your side of the field. This card effect of "Alerters - Heavy Mech" can only be activated once per turn.

Atk - 3100 Def - 3000



Alerters - Dead-Man Briggs
Lv 4 Dark
Zombie/Effect

Effect
You can send this card from your hand to the GY, and if you do, Target 1 monster your opponent controls, and Banish it face-down until their next End Phase. If this card is in your GY, and there are no other "Alerters - Deadman Briggs" banished or in your GY: You can banish this card, then Special Summon 1 other banished monster.You can only use each effect of "Alerters - Deadman Briggs" once per turn.

Atk - 1000 Def - 1000



Alerters - Masked Sniper
Lv 6 Earth
Warrior/Effect

Effect
When card is Summoned: You can return as many "Alerters" monsters you control to the Owner's hand, and if you do, destroy as many cards your opponent controls equal to the number of "Alerters" monsters returned. If this card is targeted for a Attack or Card effect(Quick Effect): You can return 1 "Alerters" monster you control to the Owner's hand,If you do, negate the Attack or Card effect. This effect of "Alerters - Masked Sniper" can only be used once per turn.

Atk - 2450 Def- 1200



Alerters - Infiltrator
Lv 2 Light
Machine/Tuner/Effect

Effect
When this card is Summoned: Special Summon a "Alerters - Infiltrator" from your deck to your side of the field. When this card is used to Summon a Synchro monster or a Xyz monster with "Alerters" in it's name, Return this card and any other card that was involved with the summoning of that mosnter to the bottom of your deck.

Atk - 500 Def- 500



Alerters City
Field Spell

Effect

All "Alerters" monsters on the field gain 1000 ATK. When a "Alerters" card(s) (except "Alerters City") is sent to the GY: You can pay 500 Life Points each for every card sent to the GY, if you do, Shuffle them all into the Owner's deck and then draw 1 card.You can only activate the effect of "Alerters City" once per turn.



Alerters Teleportation Zone
Continuous Spell Card

Effect
Once per turn: you can return 1 "Alerters" monster you control to your deck; to Special Summon a "Alerters" monster that has the same Level as the one selected. When this Spell card is targeted by an card effect: You can return 1 monster you control to the Owner's hand and, then negate the effect, if you do, destroy it.

And More to Come

[Dokutah]

Falcon: it doesn't need the target wording because it already respond to 1 particular card on the chain order. Other than that its quite fine

Winter: you need to changed this because it can form self loop since the search effect can add another copy of itself and the "return>special summon" effect is soft-once per turn that reset the limitiation if its removed from the field, So you can: summon the 1st copy to search the 2nd copy> return 1st to summon 2nd copy for a search> return 2nd summon 1st >...... Make the summon effect hard once per turn should be fine

Scarlet: nice revival effect that can be triggered for free with winter. the return effect is fine

[Horu]

Falcon: it doesn't need the target wording because it already respond to 1 particular card on the chain order. Other than that its quite fine

 

Winter: you need to changed this because it can form self loop since the search effect can add another copy of itself and the "return>special summon" effect is soft-once per turn that reset the limitiation if its removed from the field, So you can: summon the 1st copy> return it to summon 2nd copy for a search> return 2nd summon 1st >...... Make the summon effect hard once per turn should be fine

 

Scarlet: nice revival effect that can be triggered for free with winter the return effect is fine

The issue with Winter is that using it's effect in a loop could result in the opponent saying that you're cheating and just summoning the same copy over and over.

[TheDamnChaos]

thanks for the feedback i will make changes as soon as i can

Just recently for scarlet though i changed some her text because i wanted to save that effect for another card 

same for winter recruit.

 

Post will be updated soon.

[Dokutah]

The issue with Winter is that using it's effect in a loop could result in the opponent saying that you're cheating and just summoning the same copy over and over.

but its not cheating

 

the initial search effect already a public knowledge, your opponent knows there's 2 Winter

 

its not cheating but the infinite loop is not justifiable either

[Horu]

but its not cheating

 

the initial search effect already a public knowledge, your opponent knows there's 2 Winter

 

its not cheating but the infinite loop is not justifiable either

I do agree with this but if Winter were in a tournament setting, what would honestly stop your opponent from saying you're just shuffling and searching out the same copy over and over in a loop?

[TheDamnChaos]

updated

[Dokutah]

Ok the changes are quite extreme with exception for falcon

 

Winter: i do ask for changes but kinda iffy for the how drastic it is. The old ones is fine with addtion on HOPT on each effect. The new ones here search 2 cards in kinda clucky manner that sacrifice field building which depending on other card pool is not really a desirable

 

Scarlet: her new return effect is kinda fine.

 

Commander: summon effect is kinda clucky. Effects ia not strong enough to warrant a once per duel clause. If that clause is because you afraid of on the limitation bypass like i mention on Winter old effets its much more efficient to makes all card's strong effect be have HOPT. Again, OPD (once per duel) is reserve for a stupidly strong effect. Return effect is too specific and way to easy to played around. It should be fine for it to destroy any card with HOPT

 

Delta: to be honest i don't even know how you gonna actively summon this without non-archetype support for now. You play way too safe when design the summon effects. Its effects is comparable to Dingrisu. But Dingrisu has other value plays via removal. This don't. Protection effect is counterproductive since it protects from removal only to be self-removing. Also i don't know if its intentional but given the current wording since the protection effect also affected it self. Then the Xyz will shuffled back to ED leaving the field of 0 advantages.

[TheDamnChaos]

thx for the feedback i'll make some more changes and i can  agree on the Alerters Winter Recruit, im going to change it back to its old effect with a HOPT

 

I'll also remove the (once per duel) Effect and other needed changes

[TheDamnChaos]

Updated