Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 8, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 I assume this is for Aqua centric FTK decks? :D Ocg corrections : Field Spell (icon)"FTK" monster / "FTK" monster(s)DIVINE GY (modern cards abbreviate this)Special Summon 1 "FTK" monster from your hand or GY, ignoring summon condtions. Ritual Monsters summoned by this effect are treated as Ritual Summoned. Feel like even with the FTK we'll probably see a wide variety of deck styles. Maybe we should put our own ideas forth and have some contests? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerer Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Hello, fine peoples! I admit, I don't fully get what the club's aim is exactly, but I am more than willing to support card making groups. I might not be the best in terms of card grammar, but I hope to be helpful in critiquing and bringing everyone up a level or two in card design! Card submission is below in written form. I've never been that good at finding pics for my cards, but I hope the card is good enough (for now)! [spoiler=FTK Phantom - The Tinkerer]FTK Phantom - The TinkererEARTH ****Archanic/Union/EffectWhen this card is Normal Summoned: you can change this card's battle position, and if you do, Special Summon 1 "FTK" monster from your hand. Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 "FTK" monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it. The equipped monster gains 200 ATK and DEF for each monster with a different type in your GY, also, if the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can destroy this card instead.1000/2000 Side note: I generally have 2 "online names" that I shift between - Tinkerer Bartholomew Melon & Tythe Redro Scora. I mostly go by Tinkerer tho and it makes a better card name anyway. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 I like it, it looks good. Tho I feel the effect of giving up a divine monster for a special summon might not be worth it. Maybe discard? I guess as long as they are functional and look cool that's all that matters tho o3o Also, welcome Tinkerer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Maybe we should also, if my grammar is anything to scoff at, i was wrong at FTK not having quotes, but monster(s) is unnecessary as that is seen as a limitation. As seen her in the new salamangreat card, http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Salamangreat_FoxerWelcome Tythe, I'm a slut for finding card images lolol do you mind if we pm and i can try and make the card for you no edits to your card just finding a nice image to go with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 8, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 You're right Aqua, my bad. I assume Aqua would make more Divine monsters to make the card viable in the first place tho. But if not, then it really is on the weaker side of things. Welcome aboard Tinkerer! Your card is totes cool~ I'll go ahead and add you in, and put your written card under your name. If you ever make a card for it with art you're happy with Ill update the list to include it. To answer your question the club doesn't have so much of a specific aim to it as it was a means to reconnect with some vet members and try to connect with folks who came after some of us left. Long ago, the original FTK stood for the right to allow fake types in custom card threads, since there were more strict guidelines against it back then. Not so important now, but its basically a club for card creators who wanna have a little fun and deviate from the norm, and share ideas with one another. Our cards will likely focus heavier on cards with fake types thannot, but there's no rule saying real types can't be used. Besides, if Komoney can make up Psychic, Wyrm, and Cyberse then why can't we have ours, yknow? Anywho, Ill add it in soon as I'm free. Nice to meet you~ よくそ! いらしゃいません~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Might as well join this one. [spoiler=I really suck at coming up with custom Types and stuff; apologies] Also in case Discord goes stupid / can't view it, the written form. FTK Phantom - SakuraLink 4 | WIND | Warrior | Link | Effect2800W E SW SE2+ monsters, including a "FTK Phantom" monster① Your opponent cannot target or destroy other "FTK Phantom" monsters you control with cards or effects. ② Once per turn, if your opponent Summons a monster (Quick Effect): You can Tribute 1 monster this card points to; negate that Summon. ③ If this card destroys an opponent's monster: You can banish 1 card your opponent controls or in their GY, face-down. (IDK, if I did give this a Fake Type, Leaf Ninja or some other thing wouldn't really be workable.) Also yeah, I really got no problems with Fake Types and Attributes, though just as a sidenote, whatever stuff you end up making with Fake Types and stuff will have to go into Casual (since Advanced still adheres to Konami design and all). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerer Posted November 8, 2018 Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Thanks @@Aqua Girl for finding a pic for my card! Ta-da! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 8, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2018 Thanks guys! Ill get your card added in, both of you - soon as I can. Apoligies for the delay, my hands are slightly tied at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 9, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2018 Phew - a good half hour or so of editing and I finally added your cards in. Also added Aqua's field spell to our general support and included lore for each card as written in each card image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted November 10, 2018 Report Share Posted November 10, 2018 I have read the original post, but I am still not fully sure about this club's intentions. But I wanted to have some fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted November 10, 2018 Report Share Posted November 10, 2018 @@The Nyx AvatarKailyn's response to Tinkerer is pretty helpful too, as it cleared up a lot for me. If this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 Ritual Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. If this card is Special Summoned: You can add 1 "FTK Phantom" Ritual Monster from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "FTK Phantom - Dova" once per turn. Destroy this card if you do not control 3 or more monsters with different Types. Once per turn: You can Tribute other monsters from your hand or field, then Ritual Summon 1 Ritual Monster from your hand whose Level exactly equals the total Levels of those monsters.In case you haven't gathered, I really like Ritual Monsters :P Anyway, I am somewhat experienced in card design along with card grammar, so happy to help in any way I can while I get to know y'all. I've never been a big guy for custom Types, or even for DIVINE, but it is nice to let loose occasionally. Nice to see the return of so many members, especially as I'm a rather new one myself!Anyway, this card is to try and make the Rituals that appeared already rather more consistent, and to tie into the massive Type theme that's already being built up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqua Girl Posted November 10, 2018 Report Share Posted November 10, 2018 Welcome both of you love the synchro and ofc I'm hype about supporting my rituals! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 11, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 @@The Nyx Avatar Kailyn's response to Tinkerer is pretty helpful too, as it cleared up a lot for me. If this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 Ritual Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. If this card is Special Summoned: You can add 1 "FTK Phantom" Ritual Monster from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "FTK Phantom - Dova" once per turn. Destroy this card if you do not control 3 or more monsters with different Types. Once per turn: You can Tribute other monsters from your hand or field, then Ritual Summon 1 Ritual Monster from your hand whose Level exactly equals the total Levels of those monsters. In case you haven't gathered, I really like Ritual Monsters :P Anyway, I am somewhat experienced in card design along with card grammar, so happy to help in any way I can while I get to know y'all. I've never been a big guy for custom Types, or even for DIVINE, but it is nice to let loose occasionally. Nice to see the return of so many members, especially as I'm a rather new one myself! Anyway, this card is to try and make the Rituals that appeared already rather more consistent, and to tie into the massive Type theme that's already being built up. I have read the original post, but I am still not fully sure about this club's intentions. But I wanted to have some fun. Hey guys! Thanks for applying in~ Yeah it's basically just a card creation club focused around having fun with the aspect of card making - That whole sort. I can amend the primary post to include my response above if it helps. I'm happy to see some new faces around here too <3 I'm pretty well versed in Card Grammar and creation, and can also provide help with cards as needed~ Welcome aboard~ Hope you enjoy your stay :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 11, 2018 Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 I used to be good at card grammar, then I stopped making them for half a decade and now I'm like "uhhhhhh" so I just look at other cards for tips and examples. Kinda scared to even post this cuz it looks like it could have a lot of problems xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 11, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 Looks pretty solid to me, DL. And yeah don't worry too much about it being too OP as is. Equip spells in the current game are effectively worthless if they don't do a novel's worth of stuff including having a floating effect when it dies. Its because monsters have a life expectancy of 0 turn phases - unless a card is already difficult to remove, most monsters die instantly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 11, 2018 Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 Oh. So I guess in the worst scenario it'd mostly be used for a 1-draw with a possible recycle lol I guess not too bad :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted November 11, 2018 Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 Well, since we have yet to have a Tuner Monster, despite two Synchro monsters currently in the set: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted November 11, 2018 Report Share Posted November 11, 2018 Oh dang, that's pretty useful for either synchro summons or Exceeds~ and I guess Link monsters as well unless I'm mistaken, which is super possible o3o' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vavel_Elreigner Posted November 12, 2018 Report Share Posted November 12, 2018 Man I feel like ive missed a lot in the last day or so, Really sorry i've been busy but I'd like to say hello to the newest members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vavel_Elreigner Posted November 12, 2018 Report Share Posted November 12, 2018 I made two more cards, one is more focused on general archetype assistance while the second one is more focused on the Ace monster I created for my app. Please give constructive criticism if you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 13, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 I like the thematics you guys have! With this support we may want to consider making more GY floater effects, not unlike the Phantom Knights.Good archetypal support there Vavel :D The Trap is solid, but not broken. Though its not like we're comparing to IRL cards but I feel some real cards would outpace it. The spell would be good with aforementioned GY support.Arcana - I love the Tuner, very versatile for Synchro or Xyz plays. :D If you guys don't mind posting lore on your cards it could make adding them to the main post a bit easier. Please? <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vavel_Elreigner Posted November 13, 2018 Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 Posting lore? Sorry I'm not really up to speed on what you mean. Thank you for the compliment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kailyn Leona Kyosuke Posted November 13, 2018 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 Lore refers to the card text. Makes an easier time when its copy paste, not retype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vavel_Elreigner Posted November 13, 2018 Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 I'll make sure to do that from now on, I won't be able to make an edit until I get home though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted November 13, 2018 Report Share Posted November 13, 2018 I made two more cards, one is more focused on general archetype assistance while the second one is more focused on the Ace monster I created for my app. Please give constructive criticism if you can. The Continuous Spell Card looks fine. The Trap Card however, I feel is too strong. I think it should Summon only one of those (Vavel or the Level 7); not both. And have a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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