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Yu-Gi-Oh! Crimson Deulist Chronicles (Chapter 6 is up, feedback appreciated)

Jadewiz

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So addicted. When u post again?

 

BTW:

My character

 

Name: Marco Flame

 

Deck: Raging Destruction

[spoiler=The Deck. Combos included]

Monsters

3X Ultimate Baseball Kid

1X Solar Flare Dragon

1X Blazing Inpachi

2X Inferno

1X Molten Zombie

1X Blazing Hiita

1X Hiita the Fire Charmer

1X Blast Magician

1X Launcher Spider

1X Gaia Soul The combustable collective

1X Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch

2X Great Angus

1X Woodborg Inpachi

1X Little Chimera

3X UFO turtle

1X Fox fire

1X Raging Flame Sprite

1X Lava Golem (< in limited =D)

1X Infernal Flame Emperor

 

Spells

1X Heavy Storm

1X Chain Strike

1X The Reliable Guardian

2X Premature Burial

1X Change of Heart

2X Creature Swap

1X Lightning Vortex

1X MST

1X Molten Destruction

1X Ookazi

1X Fairy Meteor Crush

1X Mage power

1X Rush Recklessly

1X Tribute to the doomed

1X Dark Room of Nightmare

 

Traps

1X Backfire

3X Dust Tornado

1X Spiritual Fire Art - Kurenai

1X Jar of Greed

1X Trap Hole

1X Chthonian Blast

1X Divine Wrath

1X DNA transplant

1X Zero Gravity

 

COMBOS!

 

DNA transplant to FIRE. Use Hiita Charmer's effect/Use Blazing Hiita's effect when i COH a monster.

 

Gaia Soul, Main Phase 2, B4 it is destroyed, Spiritual Fire art it.

 

Special Summon a Lava Golem to opponents field, then Flip a Hiita the fire charmer. Take Lava golem.

 

 

Age: 12

 

Bio: An Spirit of Fire. Has an Evil side which happens when he feels like it. He will do anything to Help others when he is is good mode.. Dedicated Dueller.

 

Appearance: 2niwc21.jpg

 

Accpet him, PLZ?

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Jadewiz

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[align=center] Chapter 6: Tears Dont Fall

 

 

*Nexus is walking down the street, dissapointed that he lost at the tournement. He walks for quite a bit until Kai Winters stops him.*

 

Kai: Hey, You're that Nexus fella, aren't you!

 

Nexus: Yeah, I happen to be "That Nexus Fella", Whats it to ya?

 

Kai: Well, I saw that Duel at the tourney today, and I must say, you are one mediocre duelist!

 

Nexus: What?!

 

Kai: I mean, wow, even I could've seen that "Standoff" coming from a mile away, How would you not catch that!

 

*Nexus grabs Kai by the neck of his shirt and holds up a fist*

 

Nexus: YOU WANNA KEEP TALKING!?

 

*Kai seperates himself from Nexus, and brushes his shoulders off*

 

Kai: Actually, no. I dont want to keep talking. I wish to duel you.

 

Nexus: What? No, I dont feel like dueling right now...

 

Kai: Oh, Well thats too bad. I'm going to have to walk around and find a new Opponent, Worthy of the Crimson Teardrop thats weighing down my pocket...

 

*Nexus' eyes open wide, and look straight at Kai*

 

Nexus: Get your game face on, Get ready to Duel!

 

Kai: Took you long enough!

 

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Nexus: I draw, And I play Digital Hero - Byte! Next, I play Digital Heroes, Unite!, Allowing me to draw 3 cards, and summon any "Digital Hero" Monster with a level of 4 or lower from my hand, so I summon Digital Hero - Kamen! I'll end my turn. How's that for a first turn.

 

Kai: Dont get too cocky, your not the only one with a good first turn. Since you have monsters on your side of the field and I dont, I Special Summon Cyber Dragon! Also, since that was a Special Summon, I can Normal Summon Armed Dragon Lv3

 

Nexus: My turn yet?

 

Kai: Nope! Next I play the Spell card Level Up!, Sacrificing my Level 3 Armed Dragon for Armed Dragon Lv5! Now, Cyber Dragon, Attack his Digital Hero - Kamen, and Armed Dragon, Attack his Digital Hero - Byte!

 

*Both Dragons shoot huge laser beams from their mouths, both aimed at a different Digital Hero. When the smoke is cleared, Nexus is on the ground from the impact of the blasts, with no monsters on the field. Nexus gets up and brushes himself off.*

 

Kai's LP: 8000

Nexus' LP: 6900

 

*To be Continued*[/align]

 

Kai has a duel! Hoorah!

 

The next couple of chapters will be action packed, promise.

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Wyhe Newbie

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Im not giving up' date=' Im just grounded for the time being. so there wont be new chapters for a while.

 

Off-topic: I got Batman: Gotham Night yesterday. One word: Awesome.

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ok,but don't forget about this...I have until I saw the thread again.

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Hehe. I remember when this first came out... How come you haven't made a chapter 7? Me and my pals wanna read it. We've been fans since the start and were itching fo more!!! Yes I do recall how I started my first Fan-Fic after reading this. You inspired me Jadewiz and I wish you the best of luck on your journey. 10/10 for a Fan-Fic and 200000000/1 for an inspiration!!!

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