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Yu-Gi-Oh! Crimson Deulist Chronicles (Chapter 6 is up, feedback appreciated)

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Love the fan-fic, but (suggestion) put more in the chapters instead of having us hang around waiting for the new chapter.

 

P.S

If you want I'm also looking for people in my Fan-Fic so stop on by and look in once and a while! I also have a shop that I'm hiring at! Shop: Samm328's Shop

Fan-Fic: Yu-Gi-Oh Genisis

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Hoh boy, Bermuda and Warrior of Virmire LV10 up for grabs?

 

I wonder if the person who wins will even find a use for the card they win LOL.

 

I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

 

Actually, i just wonder whats going to happen...

 

Cliffhanger! its as frustrating as the cliffhanger ending in "Six Sacred Stones!"

 

Aahh well, patience is a virtue and all that jazz.

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Hoh boy' date=' Bermuda and Warrior of Virmire LV10 up for grabs?

 

I wonder if the person who wins will even find a use for the card they win LOL.

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Heh, i just realized that...

 

do you realize how akward thatd be?

 

"And i play Warrior of Virmire LV10!"

"You cant."

"Oh yeah, i run a cloudian deck. Mrrr :("

 

 

I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

Ill answer that! No.

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I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

Ill answer that! No.

ok... so its a DEFINITE apocalyptic future!

I can smell an apocalypse froma mile away! smells like cheesy puffs.

 

oops, i screwed up the quoting, i was going to sig it...

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I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

Ill answer that! No.

ok... so its a DEFINITE apocalyptic future!

Hahahahano.

 

I refuse to explain how Trading cards with clouds on them will blow up the world. Cards dont have the power of MORTOS DE SOULSTEALER (5 points to the person who knows what thats from.)

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I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

Ill answer that! No.

ok... so its a DEFINITE apocalyptic future!

Hahahahano.

 

I refuse to explain how Trading cards with clouds on them will blow up the world. Cards dont have the power of MORTOS DE SOULSTEALER (5 points to the person who knows what thats from.)

 

No idea who that is, but... how about mass producing them, adding plastic explosive on it, mass produce it around the world, then, you can threaten

to kill people who are playing. And a certain card can be the key to unlocking all the US missiles, so many possibilities...

 

A certain trading card being the key to using US missiles... that gives me an idea for a story of my own.

 

Bolt Escargot anyone?

 

Edit: hey, i just noticed something, i have two stars now, YAY!

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I think ill post CH4 tomarrow. so you guys can think of the possibilities. Uhuuuh...

 

for now, i need sleep, or else ill play catch with my eyes and thumbtacks.

 

If anyone would like to subscribe (info on front page), just post and send me 1 point.

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I wonder if it will turn out that the 'Crimson Duelist' has something to do with a possible apocalyptic future...

Ill answer that! No.

ok... so its a DEFINITE apocalyptic future!

Hahahahano.

 

I refuse to explain how Trading cards with clouds on them will blow up the world. Cards dont have the power of MORTOS DE SOULSTEALER (5 points to the person who knows what thats from.)

I'm going to guess Invader Zim.

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Just so people know. Red text means the character is saying it to himself.

 

[align=center]Chapter 4: Zack Vs. Kye Part 1

 

Kye: I Draw, and I summon Warrior of Virmire LV3!

 

Zack: Lucky draw, your not going to get another draw like that.

 

Kye: You might be right! For now, I place a face-down card and end my turn.

 

*Zack draws and smiles a bit*

 

Kye: He must've gotten a really good card, or he's bluffing. I just hope its the latter!

 

Zack: I play Cloudian - Smoke Ball!

 

Kye: ... BWAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! What's that thing going to do?

 

Zack: Alot, when I play Calm Before The Storm!

 

Kye: Whats that do?

 

Zack: It allows me to draw 3 cards, then summon any Level 2 or lower Cloudians to the field! And as i count, i have 4 more in my hand. talk about a lucky draw!

 

*Zack summons 2 more Cloudian - Smoke balls and 2 Cloudian - Sheep Clouds*

 

Zack: I place a face down card and end my turn.

 

Kye: I Draw an-

 

Zack: I play my face down card! Wall of Revealing Light! I give 3000 of my life points, so nothing under 3000 can attack!

 

Kye: I Need my Warrior of Virmire LV10 now! That's the only thing that could stand a chance of getting through that wall! Back to my turn now?

 

Zack: Go right ahead!

 

Kye: First, I Sacrifice my Warrior of Virmire LV3, for his Stronger LV5 counterpart. Go, Warrior of Virmire LV5! I Dont know what your planning, but if your going to summon a High attack monster, your going to have to wait. Go Swords of Revealing Light! And since the LV5 was a special summon, i'll also summon Dark Guardian - Cyber Spyder! End turn.

 

Zack's LP: 5000

Kye's LP: 8000

 

Zack: Well, Kye, you thought right. I Sacrifice my 5 Cloudians to summon Cloudian - Bermuda. Kye, you best get a good defense up, because in only 2 more turns, my Bermuda will obliterate your monsters, and because of his effect, you wont be able to bring them back from the graveyard. This is where I end my turn.

 

Kye: I Need a miracle to beat that thing! C'mon cards, gimme something to work with! I Draw, And my Warrior of Virmire levels up, to Warrior of Virmire LV7. I Have no monsters at the moment, so go.

 

Zack: I Draw. Get ready Kye, as this is the beginning of the end for you. I play the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon. Your Swords of Revealing Light are no longer! Go, Bermuda, Attack his Cyber Spyder! Its only a short amount of time before you lose, and you cant attack my Bermuda! Theres no way for you to win!

 

Zack's LP: 5000

Kye's LP: 6400

 

Kye: Im actually afraid he might be right... I Draw. Warrior Of Virmire LV7, youve stayed your welcome. Zack, get ready for my most powerful card, Warrior Of Virmire LV10!

 

Zack: That monster cant do anything! Your just delaying the loss of your prized card!

 

*To Be Continued in Chapter 5*

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