Jadewiz Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 [spoiler= Background Stuff][spoiler= BackStory] The Crimson Deulist is the deulist to beat in Garutown. The rank of the Crimson Deulist is the most prestigious honor any deulist could get. Only the best of the best may duel the current CD. It just so happens that Nexus and Kye are on their way to become the best of the best, but they each want to become the Crimson Duelist for different reasons. Who will succeed? You will have to read! [spoiler= Characters][spoiler= Main Characters][spoiler= Kye]Name: Kye MarlissGender: MaleDeck Style: Dark Guardians http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=38053Signature Card: Warrior of Virmire LV10Additude: Always up for a duel. Wants very badly to become the Crimson Deulist.Appearence: [spoiler= Nexus]Name: Nexus KiraGender: MaleDeck Style: Digital Heroes http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=39181Signature Card: Digi-Mecha DragonAdditude: Very cocky. Wants to become Crimson Deulist for the sole purpose of rubbing it in Kye's faceAppearence: [spoiler= Johnathan]Characters name:Jonathan MutoDeck Style:Fallen Angel http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthr...?tid=15432Signature Card:The Fallen GodAdditude:He dosen't talk much he,he likes dueling,and he dosen't like ignorant peopleAppearance: [spoiler= Zack]Characters name: Zack Abel Deck Style: Cloudian, but with two original cardsCloudian Nacreous: Water Aqua 1/0/0 Effect: If this card is in face up defense mode, destroy it. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, distribute "Fog Counters" equal to the amount of cards on the field and in each players hand.Cloudian Bermuda (name possibly subject to change)Water Aqua 10/3400/1000 This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by sacrificing five "Cloudian" monsters. A monster destroyed by this card as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard cannot be removed from the graveyard. Monsters with "Fog Counters" lose 400 attack and defense for each "Fog Counter" on that monster as long as this card remains face up on the field. Signature Card: Cloudian Nimbusman Attitude: He is, as his cards would suggest, a bit of a dreamer. He wants to become a crimson duelist mainly because he enjoys being noticed, and wants to make his dreams a reality... Most of the time he is laid back and enjoys relaxing, but he can become serious when the need arises. But 'the need arises' is mainly when someone is in extreme danger. Insulting his friends or himself alone would not do it. Appearance: He is about 16. His favorite outfit is a sky blue shirt with a midnight blue stripe running down the middle and jeans, but he doesn't care too much about what he wears. He has Green eyes, and light blonde hair that is short and spiky. he has the beginning of a dark colored beard, but no mustache. [spoiler= Anthro (Current Crimson Duelist)]Characters name: Anthro OmmattoDeck Style: Changes after every duel, thus why he's always carrying a backpack. its full of many rare cards.Signature Card: Victory DragonAdditude: Very calm. nearly never talks. is very confident in every deck he builds, though never shows it.Appearance: [spoiler= Less important Characters][spoiler= Kai]Characters name: Kai WintersDeck Style: Cyber DragonSignature Card: Cyber Twin DragonAdditude: Thinks he is the best, and won't let anyone get in his way.Appearance: [spoiler= Henry]Name:Henry McLuthurAge:16Appearance:Handsome,Usually wears fine clothingPersonality: Proud,Vain,SelfishDeck:Muka MukaSignature Card:Enraged Muka Muka [spoiler= David]Characters name: David HendricksAge:17Appearance: Loves the color blue, always carrys his deck, and looks somewhat like Danny Buchannon (in my fan-fic)Deck Style: Chaos (There is no thread but you can see some in my fan-fic:YuGiOh Genisis)Signature Card: King of Chaos - KhaosAdditude: Helpful towards others,loves to duel.Other: Loves to be the main part in anything. [spoiler= Crimson Deulist Chronicles][spoiler= Chapter 1][align=center]Chapter 1 Announcer: What a duel this has been! *In the Final's of a local tournament, Kye is facing Nexus. Kye is at 1000 LP, While Nexus is at 1500. Kye has a face-down card in the Magic/Trap zone.* Nexus: My turn, and I play from my hand "Digital Heroes, Unite!" Kye: Crap... Nexus: I take it you know what it does then? Kye: Yes, Nex, you use it in every duel we have... Nexus: Well i'll still explain what it does, just in case none of these spectators know what it does. This card allows me to draw 3 cards, and if any of them is a "Digital Hero" card, I am allowed to summon the one with the lowest level! *Nexus draws and smiles* Nexus: And whad'ya know, I drew one! GO DIGITAL HERO NIAKU!! (1 Star, Atk - ??? Def - 0) Kye: Oh boy... Nexus: Get ready to lose, as this card gains 500 Attack or every "Digital Hero" in my graveyard, and as i count, i have 5! Kye: Thats 2500!! Nexus: Thats right, so Digital Hero Niaku, ATTACK! Kye: Not so fast! Nexus: What!? Kye: I Activate my trap card, Standoff! It destroys any attacking monster, and ends your battle phase Nexus: Grr... I end my turn... Kye: And I draw! *Kye smiles a little and looks up at Nexus* Kye: This was a good duel, but I have to end it. I Summon "Dark Guardian Gunner"! (4 Star, Atk - 2000 Def - 100) Nexus: No! Kye: Oh, yes! Now, Gunner, Attack him directly!Kye LP: 1000Nexus LP: 0 Announcer: And your winner, Kye! Kye: Great duel, Nex! Nexus: Yeah sure... *Nexus walks off without saying a word, while Kye is awarded a prize card* Kye: No way! *Kye is handed a "Warrior Of Virmire LV10"* Kye: This is the one i needed! I gotta put this in my deck! *Kye puts the WOVLV10 into his deck, on top of his WOVLV7. He smiles at the limited edition card, closes the deck box, and stands triumphantly on the winners podium*[/align] [spoiler= Chapter 2][align=center]Chapter 2 *Kye is walking down the street, eager to duel ater his tourney win. he stumbles into a crowd of people, and is curious as to what they are grouped around. he walks up to a random bystander.* Kye: Hey, names Kye. Citizen: Kye Marliss? Kye: Yeah, thats me. Citizen: Dude, no way! Names Henry! that win today? Pure awesomeness, can I get your autograph? Kye: Sure? *Henry hands Kye a piece of paper and a marker* Kye: So, you know why everyones all grouped up? Henry: The Crimson Duelist Anthro is over there dueling some chump named Zack. *The words Crimson Duelist catch Kye's attention. Kye quickly scribbles his name on the paper, hands it to Henry, and walks further into the center of the crowd. He makes it in time to watch the ending to the match* Anthro's LP: 8000Zack's LP: 2000 *Zack has a Face-Up Attack Position "Cloudian Bermuda" (ATK - 3400, DEF - 1000)* Anthro: ...So I use Polymerization to create "Cyber End Dragon" (ATK - 4000, DEF - 2800)! *Henry catches up to Kye in the crowd* Henry: Zack's gonna lose, big time. *Kye wont take his eyes off the duel* Anthro: ... Next I play Limiter Removal, so my Cyber End Dragon is up to 8000 attack! Now, Cyber End Dragon Attack his Cloudian Bermuda! Anthro's LP: 8000Zack's LP: 0 *The crowd quickly disperses, as Anthro throws his deck into his backpack, which is full of cards.* Henry: They say he changes his deck after every duel, so no one can strategize against him. Kye: Yeah, cool, gotta go! *Kye runs off torwards Anthro, and leaves Henry behind.* Henry: Nice meeting you! *Kye catches up to Anthro, just as he's putting on his backpack* Kye: Hey, Names Kye! Anthro: Anthro.. *The two shake hands* Kye: Dude, I saw that duel. that was freakin' insane! Anthro: No, you saw the ending to the duel, and you came up to me to say thats a great duel, and sooner or later, you wouldve segue'd into "If we ever dueled, i bet it would be a really great one." I'm sure it would be a great duel, but the answer is no. I have no deck right now, and you have to earn the right to duel me. Trust me, youll get the duel sooner or later... *Anthro swings his backpack on and starts to walk off* Anthro: ... And I'm looking forward to it... *Kye smiles a bit, knowing that Anthro must've seen him win the tourney. Kye walks off the other way, down the street to the park.[/align] [spoiler= Chapter 3][align=center]Chapter 3 *Kye is walking in the park, still wanting to duel, when he sees Zack, the guy who was dueling Anthro* Kye: Yo! Zack! Zack: How do you know my name? Kye: Guy in the crowd of your duel today told me. Zack: The duel? Kye: Anthro. Zack: Oh, that duel. Kye: Yeah, THAT one. Zack: Wait, Arent you Kye? Kye: Yup! Zack: You won that tourney today. Kye: Why, Yes I did! Zack: Can I see the card you won. Curious is all. Kye: I guess? *Kye opens his deck box, showing his Warrior of Virmire LV10* Zack: Ill duel you for it. Kye:*Shocked* Huh!? Zack: I Said I'll duel you for it! Kye: Hmmm... What do i get if I win? Zack: My Cloudian Bermuda? *Zack shows him the card* Kye: Deal! Zack: Great! Get ready to lose! Kye: Correction! I think you meant to say "Im getting ready to lose!" Zack: Oh, you made a funny! Get serious, its duel time! *The two shuffle their decks, put them in their duel disk, And draw 5 cards. Kye: I'll go first! I draw, and I play... *To be Continued*[/align] [spoiler=Chapter 4][align=center]Chapter 4: Zack Vs. Kye Part 1 Kye: I Draw, and I summon Warrior of Virmire LV3! Zack: Lucky draw, your not going to get another draw like that. Kye: You might be right! For now, I place a face-down card and end my turn. *Zack draws and smiles a bit* Kye: He must've gotten a really good card, or he's bluffing. I just hope its the latter! Zack: I play Cloudian - Smoke Ball! Kye: ... BWAWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! What's that thing going to do? Zack: Alot, when I play Calm Before The Storm! Kye: Whats that do? Zack: It allows me to draw 3 cards, then summon any Level 2 or lower Cloudians to the field! And as i count, i have 4 more in my hand. talk about a lucky draw! *Zack summons 2 more Cloudian - Smoke balls and 2 Cloudian - Sheep Clouds* Zack: I place a face down card and end my turn. Kye: I Draw an- Zack: I play my face down card! Wall of Revealing Light! I give 3000 of my life points, so nothing under 3000 can attack! Kye: I Need my Warrior of Virmire LV10 now! That's the only thing that could stand a chance of getting through that wall! Back to my turn now? Zack: Go right ahead! Kye: First, I Sacrifice my Warrior of Virmire LV3, for his Stronger LV5 counterpart. Go, Warrior of Virmire LV5! I Dont know what your planning, but if your going to summon a High attack monster, your going to have to wait. Go Swords of Revealing Light! And since the LV5 was a special summon, i'll also summon Dark Guardian - Cyber Spyder! End turn. Zack's LP: 5000Kye's LP: 8000 Zack: Well, Kye, you thought right. I Sacrifice my 5 Cloudians to summon Cloudian - Bermuda. Kye, you best get a good defense up, because in only 2 more turns, my Bermuda will obliterate your monsters, and because of his effect, you wont be able to bring them back from the graveyard. This is where I end my turn. Kye: I Need a miracle to beat that thing! C'mon cards, gimme something to work with! I Draw, And my Warrior of Virmire levels up, to Warrior of Virmire LV7. I Have no monsters at the moment, so go. Zack: I Draw. Get ready Kye, as this is the beginning of the end for you. I play the spell card Mystical Space Typhoon. Your Swords of Revealing Light are no longer! Go, Bermuda, Attack his Cyber Spyder! Its only a short amount of time before you lose, and you cant attack my Bermuda! Theres no way for you to win! Zack's LP: 5000Kye's LP: 6400 Kye: Im actually afraid he might be right... I Draw. Warrior Of Virmire LV7, youve stayed your welcome. Zack, get ready for my most powerful card, Warrior Of Virmire LV10! Zack: That monster cant do anything! Your just delaying the loss of your prized card! *To Be Continued in Chapter 5*[/align] [spoiler= Chapter 5][align=center]Chapter 5: Zack Vs. Kye Part 2 Kye: I've got to think of something, and fast! That Bermuda is stronger than my Warrior... Wait a second... *Kye looks at his Hand. He realizes he needs one card to defeat Bermuda and Zack, and it happens to be his face down card!* Kye: Hold up one second Zack! I'm not delaying a thing! I'm going to destroy your Bermuda and the rest of your life point's in one turn! Zack: Try it! Your Warrior cant get past my Wall! It's only 3000 Attack! Kye: Not when I play my Face-down! Go, "MegaMorph"! Zack: Hah! All you did is reduce your Warriors attack to 1500! Kye: Dont be so sure, Zack! Next I play my own "Wall of Revealing Light", And I pay 4000 of my own Life Points! Bringing me down to 2400 Life Points raises my Warrior's attack to 6000! Zack: Even so, with that amount of attack, you cant take out my Bermuda AND my Life Points! Kye: Maybe not right now, but I'll be able to after I play "DNA Surgery", Making my Warrior of Virmire a Machine-Type monster. I'll then play "Limiter Removal", which doubles the Attack of any Machine-Types on the field, Bringing my Warrior up to 16000! Zack: No... Kye: Now go, Warrior of Virmire, Obliterate his Life Points and end this duel! *The Warrior does as he is commanded, and races forward. The Wall suddenly breaks and crashes down. The Cloudian is destroyed into mist and flies in different directions. Then, with one giant slash, the duel is over. Zack falls to his knees. He has lost.* Zack's LP: 0Kye's LP: 2400 *Kye walks over to Zack, still on his knees in shock* Kye: You OK? Zack: Yeah... I'm alright. *Zack stands up slowly and smiles and Kye* Zack: That was probably the best duel I've ever had. Here, you deserve this. *Zack holds up his Cloudian Bermuda to Kye. Kye puts his hand over the card, and pushes it back down* Kye: Keep it. Zack: Huh? Kye: Keep it, I can tell you have a strong connection with that card, i'd never take away something like that. Besides, what am I gonna do with that in a Dark Guardian deck? Zack: ...Well, I dont wanna let you go empty handed... I got it! Here, take this. *Zack takes Kye's hand and places a plastic red teardrop button in his hand* Kye: Whats this? Zack: A Crimson Teardrop. When you get 3 of these, you get to duel Anthro. Kye: *Shocked* ANTHRO!? Zack: Yup, THE Anthro. Kye: Thanks! *The two shake hands* Zack: Well, What are you waiting for? Go get two more! Kye: I'll get on that! *Kye runs off, Eager to get the last two Crimson Teardrops,while Zack walks the oppisite way, Smiling at the duel that they had just had*[/align] [spoiler= Chapter 6][align=center] Chapter 6: Tears Dont Fall *Nexus is walking down the street, dissapointed that he lost at the tournement. He walks for quite a bit until Kai Winters stops him.* Kai: Hey, You're that Nexus fella, aren't you! Nexus: Yeah, I happen to be "That Nexus Fella", Whats it to ya? Kai: Well, I saw that Duel at the tourney today, and I must say, you are one mediocre duelist! Nexus: What?! Kai: I mean, wow, even I could've seen that "Standoff" coming from a mile away, How would you not catch that! *Nexus grabs Kai by the neck of his shirt and holds up a fist* Nexus: YOU WANNA KEEP TALKING!? *Kai seperates himself from Nexus, and brushes his shoulders off* Kai: Actually, no. I dont want to keep talking. I wish to duel you. Nexus: What? No, I dont feel like dueling right now... Kai: Oh, Well thats too bad. I'm going to have to walk around and find a new Opponent, Worthy of the Crimson Teardrop thats weighing down my pocket... *Nexus' eyes open wide, and look straight at Kai* Nexus: Get your game face on, Get ready to Duel! Kai: Took you long enough! <> Nexus: I draw, And I play Digital Hero - Byte! Next, I play Digital Heroes, Unite!, Allowing me to draw 3 cards, and summon any "Digital Hero" Monster with a level of 4 or lower from my hand, so I summon Digital Hero - Kamen! I'll end my turn. How's that for a first turn. Kai: Dont get too cocky, your not the only one with a good first turn. Since you have monsters on your side of the field and I dont, I Special Summon Cyber Dragon! Also, since that was a Special Summon, I can Normal Summon Armed Dragon Lv3 Nexus: My turn yet? Kai: Nope! Next I play the Spell card Level Up!, Sacrificing my Level 3 Armed Dragon for Armed Dragon Lv5! Now, Cyber Dragon, Attack his Digital Hero - Kamen, and Armed Dragon, Attack his Digital Hero - Byte! *Both Dragons shoot huge laser beams from their mouths, both aimed at a different Digital Hero. When the smoke is cleared, Nexus is on the ground from the impact of the blasts, with no monsters on the field. Nexus gets up and brushes himself off.* Kai's LP: 8000Nexus' LP: 6900 *To be Continued*[/align] [spoiler= Subscribe!]If you actually, for some strange reason, like this fan-fic, you can pay a fee of 1 point, and ill PM you everytime a new Chapter is up. Subscription, pretty much Subscribers:1. Azerat2. Flame Hero3. Komui24.5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riceeman Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Characters name: Kai WintersDeck Style: Cyber DragonSignature Card: Cyber Twin DragonAdditude: Thinks he is the best, and won't let anyone get in his way.Appearance: Disclaimer: Image made by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Characters name:Jonathan MutoDeck Style:Fallen Angel http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=15432Signature Card:The Fallen GodAdditude:He dosen't talk much he,he likes dueling,and he dosen't like ignorant peopleAppearance: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Thank you guys for signing up! also, when you sign up, please state wether you would mind being a Minor Characters. the characters i think have the most potential will be main characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted April 27, 2008 Report Share Posted April 27, 2008 Characters name: David HendricksAge:17Appearance: Loves the color blue, always carrys his deck, and looks somewhat like Danny Buchannon (in my fan-fic)Deck Style: Chaos (There is no thread but you can see some in my fan-fic:YuGiOh Genisis)Signature Card: King of Chaos - KhaosAdditude: Helpful towards others,loves to duel.Other: Loves to be the main part in anything.Don't care about what poisition he's in as long as it doesn't end him right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 28, 2008 Report Share Posted April 28, 2008 Name:Henry McLuthurAge:16Appearance:Handsome,Usually wears fine clothingPersonality:Proud,Vain,SelfishDeck:Muka MukaSignature Card:Enraged Muka Muka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 28, 2008 Report Share Posted April 28, 2008 Always like to add characters to stories, I think i'll try. Characters name: Zack Abel Deck Style: Cloudian, but with two original cardsCloudian Nacreous: Water Aqua 1/0/0 Effect: If this card is in face up defense mode, destroy it. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, distribute "Fog Counters" equal to the amount of cards on the field and in each players hand.Cloudian Bermuda (name possibly subject to change)Water Aqua 10/3400/1000 This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by sacrificing five "Cloudian" monsters. A monster destroyed by this card as a result of battle and sent to the graveyard cannot be removed from the graveyard. Monsters with "Fog Counters" lose 400 attack and defense for each "Fog Counter" on that monster as long as this card remains face up on the field. Signature Card: Cloudian Nimbusman Attitude: He is, as his cards would suggest, a bit of a dreamer. He wants to become a crimson duelist mainly because he enjoys being noticed, and wants to make his dreams a reality... Most of the time he is laid back and enjoys relaxing, but he can become serious when the need arises. But 'the need arises' is mainly when someone is in extreme danger. Insulting his friends or himself alone would not do it. Appearance: He is about 16. His favorite outfit is a sky blue shirt with a midnight blue stripe running down the middle and jeans, but he doesn't care too much about what he wears. He has Green eyes, and light blonde hair that is short and spiky. he has the beginning of a dark colored beard, but no mustache. I don't mind being a minor character, and good luck with your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2008 I Think one more character and ill have all i need. Thank you guys for making characters! You have no idea how much it helped! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted April 28, 2008 Report Share Posted April 28, 2008 Sorry now the deck is posted in my fan-fic! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixmastermax Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 Character Name- Tai EndanDeck Style- MachineSignature Card- Rare MetalmorphPersonality-Scatter brained, gives people nickname's, very fun, loud, and carefree. His deck was just made on a whim. He is an expert on dueling and has fun making decks.Appearance- He is 15. Tall orange hair and eyes. He wears a large green trench coat and green undershirt, his pants are green cameo, and has a green dueldisk-Deck- Just a random deck I made so I'm not going to make a thread so here it is.X1 Red/Green/Yellow Gadgetx1 Premature Burial X1 Ancient Gear Gadjiltron ChimeraX1 Riryoku X1 7 CompletedX1 Enemy Controller X1 ReinforcementsX1 Tribute to the Doomed X1 Ancient Gear SoldierX1 Negate Attack X1 Ancient Gear CastleX1 Mechanicalchaser X1 Threatening RoarX1 Ancient Gear Workshop X1 Ancient Gear FistX1 Heavy Storm X1 Stone Statue of AztecsX1 Lightning Vortex X1 Mechanical HoundX1 Ultimate Offering X1 Roll OutX1 Covering Fire X1 Launcher SpiderX1 Banner of Courage X1 Boot-Up Soldier-Dread DynamoX1 Ancient Gear Beast X1 Mystical Space TyphoonX1 Axe of Despair X1 Truckroid X1 ConscriptionX1 Ancient Gear Tank X1 Pot of AvariceX2 Sakuretsu Armor X2 Ancient Gear KnightX2 Giant Rat X2 Steamroid X2GyroidX2 Heavy Mech Support Platform X2 JetroidX3 Machine King Prototype X2 Rare MetalmorphX1 Limiter Removal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 [align=center]Chapter 1 Announcer: What a duel this has been! *In the Final's of a local tournament, Kye is facing Nexus. Kye is at 1000 LP, While Nexus is at 1500. Kye has a face-down card in the Magic/Trap zone.* Nexus: My turn, and I play from my hand "Digital Heroes, Unite!" Kye: Crap... Nexus: I take it you know what it does then? Kye: Yes, Nex, you use it in every duel we have... Nexus: Well i'll still explain what it does, just in case none of these spectators know what it does. This card allows me to draw 3 cards, and if any of them is a "Digital Hero" card, I am allowed to summon the one with the lowest level! *Nexus draws and smiles* Nexus: And whad'ya know, I drew one! GO DIGITAL HERO NIAKU!! (1 Star, Atk - ??? Def - 0) Kye: Oh boy... Nexus: Get ready to lose, as this card gains 500 Attack or every "Digital Hero" in my graveyard, and as i count, i have 5! Kye: Thats 2500!! Nexus: Thats right, so Digital Hero Niaku, ATTACK! Kye: Not so fast! Nexus: What!? Kye: I Activate my trap card, Standoff! It destroys any attacking monster, and ends your battle phase Nexus: Grr... I end my turn... Kye: And I draw! *Kye smiles a little and looks up at Nexus* Kye: This was a good duel, but I have to end it. I Summon "Dark Guardian Gunner"! (4 Star, Atk - 2000 Def - 100) Nexus: No! Kye: Oh, yes! Now, Gunner, Attack him directly!Kye LP: 1000Nexus LP: 0 Announcer: And your winner, Kye! Kye: Great duel, Nex! Nexus: Yeah sure... *Nexus walks off without saying a word, while Kye is awarded a prize card* Kye: No way! *Kye is handed a "Warrior Of Virmire LV10"* Kye: This is the one i needed! I gotta put this in my deck! *Kye puts the WOVLV10 into his deck, on top of his WOVLV7. He smiles at the limited edition card, closes the deck box, and stands triumphantly on the winners podium*[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 this is great just keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 thanks, i'll try and keep up the quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 [align=center]Episode 2 *Kye is walking down the street, eager to duel ater his tourney win. he stumbles into a crowd of people, and is curious as to what they are grouped around. he walks up to a random bystander.* Kye: Hey, names Kye. Citizen: Kye Marliss? Kye: Yeah, thats me. Citizen: Dude, no way! Names Henry! that win today? Pure awesomeness, can I get your autograph? Kye: Sure? *Henry hands Kye a piece of paper and a marker* Kye: So, you know why everyones all grouped up? Henry: The Crimson Duelist Anthro is over there dueling some chump named Zack. *The words Crimson Duelist catch Kye's attention. Kye quickly scribbles his name on the paper, hands it to Henry, and walks further into the center of the crowd. He makes it in time to watch the ending to the match* Anthro's LP: 8000Zack's LP: 2000 *Zack has a Face Up Attack Position Cloudian Bermuda (ATK - 3400, DEF - 1000)* Anthro: ...So I use Polymerization to create Cyber-end Dragon! *Henry catches up to Kye in the crowd* Henry: Zack's gonna lose, big time. *Kye wont take his eyes off the duel* Anthro: ... Next I play Limiter Removal, so my Cyber-end Dragon is up to 8000 attack! Now, Cyber-end Dragon Attack his Cloudian Bermuda! Anthro's LP: 8000Zack's LP: 0 *The crowd quickly disperses, as Anthro throws his deck into his backpack, which is full of cards.* Henry: They say he changes his deck after every duel, so no one can strategize against him. Kye: Yeah, cool, gotta go! *Kye runs off torwards Anthro, and leaves Henry behind.* Henry: Nice meeting you! *Kye catches up to Anthro, just as he's putting on his backpack* Kye: Hey, Names Kye! Anthro: Anthro.. *The two shake hands* Kye: Dude, I saw that duel. that was freakin' insane! Anthro: No, you saw the ending to the duel, and you came up to me to say thats a great duel, and sooner or later, you wouldve segue'd into "If we ever dueled, i bet it would be a really great one." I'm sure it would be a great duel, but the answer is no. I have no deck right now, and you have to earn the right to duel me. Trust me, youll get the duel sooner or later... *Anthro swings his backpack on and starts to walk off* Anthro: ... And I'm looking forward to it... *Kye smiles a bit, knowing that Anthro must've seen him win the tourney. Kye walks off the other way, down the street to the park.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Rose Phoenix® Posted April 29, 2008 Report Share Posted April 29, 2008 I guess its not bad, good try, hope you do another one!!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Damn, my character lost... then again, i couldn't expect him to beat the champion! *Henry has a Face Up Attack Position Cloudian Bermuda (ATK - 3400, DEF - 1000)* you mean Zack, right? Anyway, great chapter, hope your next one is even better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riceeman Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Awww man, why does my character have to be a less important one :( *does puppy eyes* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Aelsthla-Mental, I fixed that messup. good eyes! and riceeman, EVERYBODY cant be a main character. I made the ones that sound like theyd make for the best storylines and duels, and plus, itd be weird having a Kye (pronounced like Eye with a K in front of it) and a Kai (Im guessing its the same). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riceeman Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 I suppose...Anyway, good chapters. Keep it up. Could you just at least put Kai in a duel at some point? Pleeeease? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Dont worry, youl be in a lengthy duel somewhere down the road, as will everyone else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted April 30, 2008 Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 Dude thats messed up everyone else got in but not me why not? I'm not going to try 'puppy dog eyes' but thats surely messed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted April 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2008 you are in it, i forgot to put your char in though, sorry! your bio is in there now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkForce™ Posted May 1, 2008 Report Share Posted May 1, 2008 Thank you so much ummm...... I am sorry I got mad! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Just so the (few) fans of this Fan Fic know, new episode will be up tomarrow. (heh, lame excuse to bump the topic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadewiz Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 [align=center]Chapter 3 *Kye is walking in the park, still wanting to duel, when he sees Zack, the guy who was dueling Anthro* Kye: Yo! Zack! Zack: How do you know my name? Kye: Guy in the crowd of your duel today told me. Zack: The duel? Kye: Anthro. Zack: Oh, that duel. Kye: Yeah, THAT one. Zack: Wait, Arent you Kye? Kye: Yup! Zack: You won that tourney today. Kye: Why, Yes I did! Zack: Can I see the card you won. Curious is all. Kye: I guess? *Kye opens his deck box, showing his Warrior of Virmire LV10* Zack: Ill duel you for it. Kye:*Shocked* Huh!? Zack: I Said I'll duel you for it! Kye: Hmmm... What do i get if I win? Zack: My Cloudian Bermuda? *Zack shows him the card* Kye: Deal! Zack: Great! Get ready to lose! Kye: Correction! I think you meant to say "Im getting ready to lose!" Zack: Oh, you made a funny! Get serious, its duel time! *The two shuffle their decks, put them in their duel disk, And draw 5 cards. Kye: I'll go first! I draw, and I play... *To be Continued*[/align] (Oh, dont you just hate me!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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