Thomas★Zero Posted September 3, 2018 Report Share Posted September 3, 2018 So Dragobeast is a series of Level 4 Beast Monsters that also act as Dragons while on the field and in the grave where they focus on setting up your field to Xyz Summon their ace Monster Arc Sword Dragon which can change from its Rank 4 base form into a Rank 8 form. [spoiler=Monsters] While on the field and in your GY, this card is also treated as a Dragon monster. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned while you control another "Dragobeast" monster except "Dragobeast - Draw Gazelle": draw 1 card. You can only activate this effect of "Dragobeast - Draw Gazelle" once per turn. While on the field and in your GY, this card is also treated as a Dragon monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase: you can Normal Summon 1 "Dragobeast" monster, in addition to your Normal Summon/Set. While on the field and in your GY, this card is also treated as a Dragon monster. While you control only "Dragobeast" monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. You can only Special Summon "Dragobeast - Counter Cat" this way once per turn. During either player's Damage Step, when a "Dragobeast" monster you control is attacking or being attacked: You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard; that monster gains 1500 ATK until the end of this turn. While on the field and in your GY, this card is also treated as a Dragon monster. Increase the ATK of all "Dragobeast" monsters you control by 500. "Dragobeast" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. While on the field and in your GY, this card is also treated as a Dragon monster. This card can attack your opponent directly. At the end of the Damage Step, if this card attacked or was attacked: You can change this card to Defense Position, then, if you control another "Dragobeast" monster except "Dragobeast - Hit Mouse" increase your LP by 500.[spoiler=Extra Deck] 2 Level 4 "Dragobeast" monsters Must be Xyz Summoned. This cards maximum number of attacks it can make on monsters during each of your battle Phases is equal to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card +1. During your Battle Phase (Quick Effect), you can Xyz Summon 1 Rank 8 "Arc Sword Dragon" Xyz Monster from your Extra Deck using this card as a Xyz Material (Xyz Materials attached to this card also become Xyz Materials on the summoned monster.) If this card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. 5 Level 8 FIRE Dragon Monsters (This card is always treated as a "Dragobeast Deity" card.) Must be Xyz Summoned to the Extra Monster Zone. This cards maximum number of attacks it can make on monsters during each of your battle Phases is equal to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card +1. When this card attacks a defence position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. 5 Level 8 WIND Dragon monsters (This card is always treated as a "Dragobeast Deity" card.) Must be Xyz Summoned to the Extra Monster Zone. Your opponent cannot target monsters you control for attacks except this card. When this card attacks or is attacked, increase your LP equal to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card x 500. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. 5 Level 8 EARTH Dragon monsters (This card is always treated as a "Dragobeast Deity" card.) Must be Xyz Summoned to the Extra Monster Zone. When this card attacks or is attacked, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card x 500. When this card attacks a defence position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead.[spoiler=Spells & Traps] Add 1 "Dragobeast" monster from your deck to your hand. (Quick Effect): you can attach this card from your GY to a "Dragobeast Deity" Xyz monster you control. You can only activate each effect of "Shrine of the Dragobeast Deity" once per turn. Xyz Summon 1 Rank 8 "Arc Sword Dragon" Xyz monster from your Extra Deck by using 1 "Arc Sword Dragon" monster you control with a different name as a Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that card also become Xyz Materials on the summoned monster.) You can only activate "Dragobeast Deity Mode Change" once per turn. Activate this caed by targeting 1 "Arc Sword Dragon" Xyz monster you control. Destroy cards on your opponents side of the field up to the number Xyz Materials attached to the targeted monster, then, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x 500. During the turn you activated this card, the targeted monster cannot attack this turn. You can only activate 1 "Sword Rave of the Dragobeast Deity" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 3, 2018 Report Share Posted September 3, 2018 I've already told you this beforehand on status bar, but you must post the card's effects underneath your stuff as stated in rule 11, even if it is readable. You have 24 hours to add them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted September 3, 2018 Report Share Posted September 3, 2018 Visually these look good. Love the art since it looks very fitting. My main concern is that you can deal (2500 x 3) + (3000 x 3) 16,500 damage with an open field using an easy to summon rank 4 ("Dragobeast Deity Arc-sword dragon", the "base form") as the only prerequisite. Counter Cat makes this even more of an issue since with it you can make it either (4000 x 3) + (3000 x 3) or (2500 x 3) + (5500 x 3) using counter cat on one of the arc sword dragons. I'd highly recommend making the extra attacks only target monsters. Look at http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chimeratech_Overdragon as an example of how this is done, though that's based on number of fusion materials but its close enough. Shrine is presumably missing a "you can" in the quick effect, which is confusing. IDK if this is newer OCG but it sounds like a mandatory effect somehow. Mode Change seems a bit redundant unless you want to deal even more damage with the strategy that I already outlined. If you change the extra attack effect as I suggested, feel free to add a GY effect to Mode Change If you do make the changes to the extra attack effect, I'd might want to try these out with your permission and credit to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas★Zero Posted September 4, 2018 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2018 Visually these look good. Love the art since it looks very fitting. My main concern is that you can deal (2500 x 3) + (3000 x 3) 16,500 damage with an open field using an easy to summon rank 4 ("Dragobeast Deity Arc-sword dragon", the "base form") as the only prerequisite. Counter Cat makes this even more of an issue since with it you can make it either (4000 x 3) + (3000 x 3) or (2500 x 3) + (5500 x 3) using counter cat on one of the arc sword dragons. I'd highly recommend making the extra attacks only target monsters. Look at http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chimeratech_Overdragon as an example of how this is done, though that's based on number of fusion materials but its close enough. Shrine is presumably missing a "you can" in the quick effect, which is confusing. IDK if this is newer OCG but it sounds like a mandatory effect somehow. Mode Change seems a bit redundant unless you want to deal even more damage with the strategy that I already outlined. If you change the extra attack effect as I suggested, feel free to add a GY effect to Mode Change If you do make the changes to the extra attack effect, I'd might want to try these out with your permission and credit to you. I have fixed this cards now where the multi attacking effects is only on Monsters and Shrine has the you can part on it, in addition I have added 2 new Dragobeast cards in the form of Draw Gazelle and "Spike Mode". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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