Kuroda Kaito Posted August 17, 2018 Report Share Posted August 17, 2018 Got my first win XD Anyway, Cnc please. I feel like I still have a lot to practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted August 17, 2018 Report Share Posted August 17, 2018 Eyyy, I remember that render :D Good stuff. Love the idea of the lighting coming from the cigarette (cigar, cigarillo, whatever she smokes) and the glow between the fingers is a nice detail. Also the smudge adds a very nice flow. My only gripe is the empty space on the top, which could've been cropped down to where the smudge ends. That would've placed the lighting on one of the thirds for better composition. Congrats on your win! Looking forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted August 18, 2018 Author Report Share Posted August 18, 2018 Eyyy, I remember that render :D Good stuff. Love the idea of the lighting coming from the cigarette (cigar, cigarillo, whatever she smokes) and the glow between the fingers is a nice detail. Also the smudge adds a very nice flow. My only gripe is the empty space on the top, which could've been cropped down to where the smudge ends. That would've placed the lighting on one of the thirds for better composition. Congrats on your win! Looking forward to more.Haha thank you so much !!!Well during the process of making the piece, I thought leaving the empty space there sort of works though. But I see what you mean there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 18, 2018 Report Share Posted August 18, 2018 I love the colors and low contrast of this. I think doing something with the empty space wouldve been cool, or yet, a major flex would be adding even more empty space vertically or to the right of the focal, which I think could also work. The dimensions you have it at now make everything rather center, kinda what Thar is alluding to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted August 19, 2018 Report Share Posted August 19, 2018 Congrats! The fractals and lighting works really well here. Keep working on your smudging. The details could be more defined. Also, I'm not sure if you're already doing this but make sure you smudge with a hard round brush with 90+ strength/opacity to ensure full control over the details you create. Lastly the bg shadows being red and the shape of the person's head is slightly bothering me. The bg needs to be a cool hue to be consistent and blend better with the focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted August 21, 2018 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2018 I love the colors and low contrast of this. I think doing something with the empty space wouldve been cool, or yet, a major flex would be adding even more empty space vertically or to the right of the focal, which I think could also work. The dimensions you have it at now make everything rather center, kinda what Thar is alluding toAhh I see what you mean there. Noted !!! Thanks a lot for the criticism !!! :3 Congrats! The fractals and lighting works really well here. Keep working on your smudging. The details could be more defined. Also, I'm not sure if you're already doing this but make sure you smudge with a hard round brush with 90+ strength/opacity to ensure full control over the details you create. Lastly the bg shadows being red and the shape of the person's head is slightly bothering me. The bg needs to be a cool hue to be consistent and blend better with the focal.Fully noted !!! Thanks again <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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