New Hytundra + Frostpunk Archetype

[Dogga]

Hello,

 

This is my first ever post on this website, so then first off, Greetings. I don't really know how these things wok, so let me just show you what I have been working on.

 

I have been spending almost about a week on this new Archetype I have created. I am wanting to post it online just to see what peoples reaction would be towards my idea. If you can give me any feedback on them that would be awesome. Thank you, as I wish to improve these cards into a proper working and balance archetype.

 

The archetype is a deck based around 2 different named cards, Hytundra and Frostpunk. Both names have effects basing around columns. Hytundra have effects affecting all cards in the same or not in the same column as the card, depending on which monster. Frostpunk have effects depending on whether there are other monsters in the same column or not, as the monster itself. Hytundra also have an additional effect system of Hytundra Head counters. These counters act as actual "Heads" of the monster, as hytundra, if you havent found it out, is the play on words of Hydra and Tundra, increasing strength. Hydra being the greek mythical creature that grows 2 heads after it loses 1, and tundra, the cold winter biome.

 

Please let me know what you think, these below are cards i have "Finalized", there are others in the works currently. If reading the card is becoming difficult I will have a link to a doc about all the monsters and cards I have been creating for the archetype, including the ones shown here. Thank you once again, and please let me know what you think. (Disclaimer, I am not the original artist of all the cards you see)

 

 

 

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Thank you once more, and let me know what you think. I am always open for suggestions and critizism.

 

Talk to you all later

[Dova]

Hey! Welcome to YCM. Happy to give my critique on your cards, but just two things; firstly, the images aren't showing up. I don't know if you've hosted them on imgur or somewhere else, but remember to use the [img=] tag when linking images!

Secondly, just for the ease of people who read, who probably don't want to go another link after this, perhaps post the text underneath the images? Not the stats or similar things, as they're pretty easy to read, but if the effects are cramped, its just helpful.

 

Will give my thoughts once they're fixed up!

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

https://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/374515-new-archetype-hytundra-frostpunk/

 

You already posted this one, so...idk why you reposted it in this form. But yeah.

 

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@@Dova, try the original one.