Kuroda Kaito Posted August 1, 2018 Report Share Posted August 1, 2018 I got an idea of how I want this piece to be, but somehow along the way it turned out to be a bit different than I thought it would. But I loved how it turned out. Cnc please Also, I feel that if I remove the logo, it would be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted August 2, 2018 Report Share Posted August 2, 2018 Composition is nice, but feels unfinished and needs work on execution. Focus on working on your blending and lighting. Having the brightest light source in the back doesn't really make sense because according to the render, there should be a light coming from in front of it. Also remember when elements are in the distance and blurred, you tend to lose contrast and saturation. Otherwise, the blurring starts to feel artificial. Lastly, I'm not really sure the red effect in the bottom right goes with the rest of the tag. Overall, the piece has potential but keep working on your fundamentals and execution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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