Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 20, 2018 Report Share Posted July 20, 2018 V2: [spoiler=old] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted July 20, 2018 Report Share Posted July 20, 2018 Seasonal, I can dig it. I think the triangles work well here, they aren't too overbearing and don't destroy the flow much. The left-hand side is incredibly busy and is taking away my focus from the main part of the piece, perhaps some better shading would help, currently, it's too bright. As I'm sure you are aware the lighting doesn't have any logic to it (at least where it's coming from) but that's your style so I'm not going to shoot it too much. A busy piece, a lot is going on and I think it could do with some cleaning but overall I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 20, 2018 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2018 Thanks. Made some updates to shades which I think helps the lighting and makes the compo more focused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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