pokeform-chapter 3 now posted

[starly]

[spoiler=chapter 1]

one day there was a boy called larry and he wanted to be the world's best pokemon trainer.When he was outside playing with his pokemon starly.His mum yelled"hunny can you go to render town and get a package from proffesser david's lab."larry shouted"okay."So he set off and rode to render town.Render town was not far away from pokeform so he rode on his bike and got to proffesser david's lab.

larry said"is anyone here."

a tall ladie came and said"do you need any help oh yeh you must be larry from pokeform here is the package."

larry said"thanks."

He thought what will be in the package he hopped on his bike and rode back home.When he gave the package back to his mum he decided to go back to render town and start his journey and starting off at the collueseum.So he went back to render town and the proffesser said"you need to go to the collseum beginners class."

larry said"okay."

So he went to the collseum looking all over the place until he found a sign that said pokemon collseum.He said"can i go to the beginners class please."

the man" said "okay it is right and go up."

larry said"thanks."

So he went right and then went up and found a girl with a pokemon that he had never seen before.

larry said"erm excuse me what is that pokemon."

the girl said"everybody asks this it is burmy coverd in sand."

then the tv anounced who where going up against.

sophie-larry

hannah-ash

chelsea-jack

larry said"all right i'm against sophie."

the girl said"i am sophie."

 

To Be Continued

look out for chapter 2.........

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 2]

larry said"so i will start the battle."

the refree said"okay this is a battle bewteen larry from pokeform and sophie from the great canyon this will be a 1 on 1 battle now begin.

larry said" i choose you starly."

sophie said"i choose you burmy."

larry shouted "starly steel wing."

Starly's steel wing pushed burmy right back hit the floor so hard that it coud not move.

sophie yelled"GET UP BURMY NOW AND USE SAND STORM NOW!"

Burmy got straight up and used sandstorm it made starly turn a little but it wasen't a effected.

larry roared"starly steel wing 4 times."

starly used steel wing 4 times and burmy was dizzy and unable to battle.

the refree said"burmy is unable to battle larry from pokeform wins.

after the match they watched the other guys face somebody and then larry tryed to talk to sophie.

larry said"did you like that battle?"

sophie said"go away!"

larry said" okay."

So larry went away and got out of the collueseum he walked and walked and walked until he reached water city forest.It was a bit creepy but he handled it.When he saw quarts lakefront he saw a squirtle.

larry said"are call a squirtle starly use steel wing."

it did the squirtle alot of damage and it turned unable to battle and larry threw a pokeball and in a quick as a flash it stopped wobbling.

He walked for a while and saw 2 guys and it was team dungeon and they got starly.

will larry save his starly or will he get brain controlled find out in chapter 3?

 

to be continued.

look out for chapter 3........

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 3]

larry said"i choose you starly and squirtle."

the 2 grunts said"i choose you zubat and i choose you wurmple."

larry said"steel wing 2 times."

the 2 grunts said"dodge it."

larry said"squirtle hydro pump and starly 4 steel wings."

the 2 grunts said"argh we blasting off again."

larry said"we did it."

When they were walking squirtle and starly said"starly

squirt star squirtle.

larry said" what does that meen."

Larry rode on his bike back to render city and saw the collseum again and went into the miduem group.

here are the people who they vs.

larry-ash

rebbecka-sophie

mark-lark

larry said"all right we are against ash and he won the whole of the pokemon region he is a pokemon master!"

ash said"yeh you look a strong trainer well i am and the pokemon battle with sophie well she entered th medium group."

larry said"she was a bit bossy of losing."

ash said"yeh when i won against her she said go away."

larry said"she said that to to me."

sophie said"are you talking about me?"

larry and ash said"NO!"

sophie said"good."

larry said"god she's gobby."

ash said"yeh"

the pokemon agreed aswell and it was time for ash and larry to pokemon battle.

the ref said"begin."

 

to be continued

look for chapter 4...............

 

chapter 4 is really coming tomorrow

 

[Hioco]

A lot of spelling mistakes

 

But the storyline is ok

 

Overall 6/10

[starly]

i am doing chapter 2 in a minute

[elamental hero's]

cool

[starly]

chapter 3 will be posted

[elamental hero's]

chapter 3 is well awesome

[starly]

here comes chapter 4 in a hour

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