[Retry] Pokemon: Where it All Began! [OOC/Accepting/PG13]

[scooterulez]

Oh, it is back where I originally posted it. Didn't really want to bother with making a duplicate app

[xlArisenRoselx]

Oh... Whoops, my fault, sorry.

[scooterulez]

So, in place of Kyumi, I would like to know everyone's commitment so far, especially those who have started apps. It has been a while since the pending interests of everyone and nothing really has been moving along. And the people who have sparked interest are D/D/D D.D. Dragon Sage of D. and JellisOP, and those with WIP apps are Wind Rider and TheKing070701. I would love to get this RP rolling along.

[Northern Sage]

I got distracted with another idea, may have to pull out, sorry.

[The Frost King]

I'm done with my app and it's ready for review.

 

I'm noting my interest and I'm happy to see this RP back up again. I actually have an idea for a traveling trial captain character so I'll probably post my app here soon.

[spoiler=A Traveling Entertainer]Name: Jason Hills
Age:21
Gender: Male
Race:Human
[spoiler=Appearance]

Standing at 6 feet tall, Jason is a rather slim guy and likes to keep it that way. That’s because his show sometimes involves him doing flips. So being as light as possible is always a good idea. When it comes to clothing, Jason likes to wear a simple grey suit with the jacket unbuttoned and a fedora to top it off. His brown hair is left unattended most of the time, unless he’s going to some special event. As for his eye color, it’s a nice shade of light brown.

 

 

[spoiler=Personality]Jason is a friendly guy who just wants to make people happy. That’s his main goal in life to be honest. After all, it’s better to be happy than sad. So whenever he sees somebody who is sad or depressed, he’ll try to cheer them up. If he ever sees someone being picked on or in trouble, he’ll try to help that person as best as he can. Some people may ask why Jason does entertaining for a living. Well he does it for the fun of it. Even if he sometimes gets money, it doesn’t matter to him. Bringing smiles to people’s faces is payment enough. When it comes to his pokemon, they have a strong bond formed by months of trust and friendship. Their bond is so strong that Jason sometimes doesn’t even have to say anything for his pokemon to know what to do.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Bio]Ever since he was a child, Jason had wanted to become an entertainer. He wanted to put smiles on people’s faces, just like magicians and clowns would do. But he didn’t know where to start. That was until something happened in town. A wild Zorua was terrorizing people around town, using illusions to make it look like other pokemon. While the Zorua was scaring people half-to-death, Jason thought up an idea to start his life as an entertainer. But he needed to catch the Zorua first. So he went looking for it, using food as an attempt to lure it out.

 

He quickly found it as it tried to scare him by pretending to be a Pangoro. But Jason wasn’t fooled and offered the food to it. The Zorua was hesitant at first, but then quickly came over to eat the food. As it ate, Jason talked to it and offered it a place to stay as long as it stopped its pranks on the town. The Zorua was more than happy to accept Jason’s offer and went home with him. Over the years, him and the Zorua became great friends. He even gave it the nickname Zori .Zori did play little pranks ever now and then, it wasn’t something that Jason and his parents couldn’t handle. And besides, Jason was happy. He had the perfect thing to start his entertaining career. Using Zorua’s illusions, Jason was able to pull of his own kind of “magic” tricks. He quickly became a favorite in town as people were always amazed to see his little show.

 

When he was 18, Jason left home and went anywhere and everywhere he could think of to do his entertainment show. Along the way he befriended pokemon, met other entertainers, and even learned some new tricks. By the time he was 20, Jason had a show that almost everyone knew about and basically everyone loved to see. People noticed Jason’s strong bond with his pokemon and it wasn’t long before he was offered the position of Trial Captain. He graciously accepted the title, as long as he could keep doing his show.

 

Now he’s on the way to Kyoso town for two reasons. To do his show and to check out the important convention that was supposed to be happening there.

 

 

[spoiler=Team]Main Typing: Dark

Team: Zoroark ♀ (Nickname:Zori)/ Item: Quick Claw

Absol ♂/Item: Absolite

Sableye ♂

Honchcrow♀/ Item: Leftovers

Umbreon♂

Liepard♀

 

 

[spoiler=Misc]Trial Captain
Theme song:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvQLXpNwfc0

 

 

 

EDIT: Done with my app.

[scooterulez]

I'm noting my interest and I'm happy to see this RP back up again. I actually have an idea for a traveling trial captain character so I'll probably post my app here soon.

 

[spoiler=A Traveling Entertainer]Name: Jason Hills

Age:21

Gender: Male

Race:Human

[spoiler=Appearance]

Standing at 6 feet tall, Jason is a rather slim guy and likes to keep it that way. That’s because his show sometimes involves him doing flips. So being as light as possible is always a good idea. When it comes to clothing, Jason likes to wear a simple grey suit with the jacket unbuttoned and a fedora to top it off. His brown hair is left unattended most of the time, unless he’s going to some special event. As for his eye color, it’s a nice shade of light brown.

 

 

[spoiler=Personality]Jason is a friendly guy who just wants to make people happy. That’s his main goal in life to be honest. After all, it’s better to be happy than sad. So whenever he sees somebody who is sad or depressed, he’ll try to cheer them up. If he ever sees someone being picked on or in trouble, he’ll try to help that person as best as he can. Some people may ask why Jason does entertaining for a living. Well he does it for the fun of it. Even if he sometimes gets money, it doesn’t matter to him. Bringing smiles to people’s faces is payment enough. When it comes to his pokemon, they have a strong bond formed by months of trust and friendship. Their bond is so strong that Jason sometimes doesn’t even have to say anything for his pokemon to know what to do.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Bio]Ever since he was a child, Jason had wanted to become an entertainer. He wanted to put smiles on people’s faces, just like magicians and clowns would do. But he didn’t know where to start. That was until something happened in town. A wild Zorua was terrorizing people around town, using illusions to make it look like other pokemon. While the Zorua was scaring people half-to-death, Jason thought up an idea to start his life as an entertainer. But he needed to catch the Zorua first. So he went looking for it, using food as an attempt to lure it out.

 

He quickly found it as it tried to scare him by pretending to be a Pangoro. But Jason wasn’t fooled and offered the food to it. The Zorua was hesitant at first, but then quickly came over to eat the food. As it ate, Jason talked to it and offered it a place to stay as long as it stopped its pranks on the town. The Zorua was more than happy to accept Jason’s offer and went home with him. Over the years, him and the Zorua became great friends. He even gave it the nickname Zori .Zori did play little pranks ever now and then, it wasn’t something that Jason and his parents couldn’t handle. And besides, Jason was happy. He had the perfect thing to start his entertaining career. Using Zorua’s illusions, Jason was able to pull of his own kind of “magic” tricks. He quickly became a favorite in town as people were always amazed to see his little show.

 

When he was 18, Jason left home and went anywhere and everywhere he could think of to do his entertainment show. Along the way he befriended pokemon, met other entertainers, and even learned some new tricks. By the time he was 20, Jason had a show that almost everyone knew about and basically everyone loved to see. People noticed Jason’s strong bond with his pokemon and it wasn’t long before he was offered the position of Trial Captain. He graciously accepted the title, as long as he could keep doing his show.

 

Now he’s on the way to Kyoso town for two reasons. To do his show and to check out the important convention that was supposed to be happening there.

 

 

[spoiler=Team]Main Typing: Dark

Team: Zoroark ♀ (Nickname:Zori)/ Item: Quick Claw

Absol ♂/Item: Absolite

Sableye ♂

Honchcrow♀/ Item: Leftovers

Umbreon♂

Liepard♀

 

 

[spoiler=Misc]Trial Captain

Theme song:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nvQLXpNwfc0

 

 

 

EDIT: Done with my app.

 

Everything looks good. First time reading through I was confused by the personality, but I think it was worded differently then what I thought it actually said, but it looks fine. Everything else, the Appearance, Bio, Team, and such are all good to go.

[)e//!s0P]

This is my done App

[spoiler=Maya Lucida]

https://imgur.com/mdxHxf3

Really? Thought you could trick me?

Personal Info

 

Name: Maya Lucida

 

Age: 16

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Human

 

[spoiler=Appearance]: Maya has green hair, amber eyes, and fair skin. She has a red scarf that is fairly long, with many camouflage print shirts, mainly worn with blue jeans, with knees ripped by wear and tear. She wears brown boots, and other than that, she wears floral themed earrings.

 

 

[spoiler=Personality]Maya is a smart, cunning individual. She is slow to trust and cool under pressure. She prefers to be in the wilderness areas, and has affinity for grass types. She cares for the forest and it’s wildlife. She finds herself to be a deep thinker, sometimes to the point of being oblivious to the surrounding world. She is terrified of Psychic Type Pokemon, to the point of Paranoia at times.

 

 

[spoiler=Bio] Maya was born in the woods, and that’s where she lives. Her father is a lumberjack that travels often, while her mother tends to berry trees and other plants. Maya loved her quaint house in the woods, and had a happy childhood. She even befriended a Treecko by age 8, naming him Bulbester, becoming her Partner. However, the happiness lasted only for so long.

One day in the woods at the age of 12, while out helping her mother pick berries, Maya encountered a Hypno gathering some berries. Maya tried to approach the wild Pokemon, but the Hypno, scared, made her fall asleep, and subjected her to horrible nightmares. She wouldn’t have lived if Bulbester hadn't gone to get help, but, from the trauma, she gained a strong feeling of distrust of psychic type pokemon,for fear of what they could do, and a distrust of new people and pokemon, for fear of not knowing what they can do or what their intentions are.

 

 

[spoiler=Team]

Starter: Treecko 

Legend: Darkrai.

 

Team members

Bulbester (Treecko)

Ability: Unburden

Attacks

Pound

Absorb

Leer

Quick Attack

 

 

 

 

Edit: Added some quirks, also fleshed out the bio a bit more.

[scooterulez]

This is my done App

[spoiler=Maya Lucida]

https://imgur.com/mdxHxf3

Really? Thought you could trick me?

Personal Info

 

Name: Maya Lucida

 

Age: 16

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Human

 

[spoiler=Appearance]: Maya has green hair, amber eyes, and fair skin. She has a red scarf that is fairly long, with many camouflage print shirts, mainly worn with blue jeans, with knees ripped by wear and tear. She wears brown boots, and other than that, she wears floral themed earrings.

 

 

[spoiler=Personality]Maya is a smart, cunning individual. She is slow to trust and cool under pressure. She prefers to be in the wilderness areas, and has affinity for grass types. She cares for the forest and it’s wildlife.

 

 

[spoiler=Bio] Maya was born in the woods, and that’s where she lives. Her father is a lumberjack that travels often, while her mother tends to berry trees and other plants. Maya loved her quaint house in the woods, and had a happy childhood. However, that changed very quickly.

One day in the woods, while out helping her mother pick berries, Maya encountered a Hypno gathering some berries. Maya tried to approach the wild Pokemon, but the Hypno, scared, made her fall asleep, and subjected her to horrible nightmares. She wouldn’t have lived if Treecko, but from the trauma, she obtained a strong feeling of distrust of psychic type pokemon, along with a disability to be slow to trust of new people and pokemon

 

[spoiler=Team]

Starter: Treecko 

Legend: Darkrai.

 

Team members

Treeko

Ability: Unburden

Attacks

Pound

Absorb

Leer

Quick Attack

 

 

 

 

The Appearance is fine, though I was hoping to see more of the little profile pic you posted, nevertheless, it's fine. I feel that there is very little in Personality, she doesn't feel very animated and more should be added (maybe add some more quirks) The bio is worded in a way that there are some grammatical errors that didn't sound right (mostly near the end). Also, maybe add some context dealing with her traumatic event, like how old she was and how long she has been with he Treeko up to the convention since then.

[)e//!s0P]

The Appearance is fine, though I was hoping to see more of the little profile pic you posted, nevertheless, it's fine. I feel that there is very little in Personality, she doesn't feel very animated and more should be added (maybe add some more quirks) The bio is worded in a way that there are some grammatical errors that didn't sound right (mostly near the end). Also, maybe add some context dealing with her traumatic event, like how old she was and how long she has been with he Treeko up to the convention since then.

Will do, thanks