Chosen Archetype

[Hiendershvek]

here's a small archetype I decided to make. I originally had these posted in the jokes and overpowered cards section with much more broken effects, but I dumbed them down and here's what I got. Tell me what you think, also which one is your favourite?
 

[Liar]

TLDR ~

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

here's a small archetype I decided to make. I originally had these posted in the jokes and overpowered cards section with much more broken effects, but I dumbed them down and here's what I got. Tell me what you think, also which one is your favourite?

 

 

Make sure you provide the effects underneath so members can easily see stuff.

 

TLDR ~

 

Just because you're a new member does not give you a reason to break the Advanced Clause and spam, which this is.

 

I'm leaving this as a verbal reminder for you not to do this again outside Miscellaneous.

[Hiendershvek]

Make sure you provide the effects underneath so members can easily see stuff.

 

 

Just because you're a new member does not give you a reason to break the Advanced Clause and spam, which this is.

 

I'm leaving this as a verbal reminder for you not to do this again outside Miscellaneous.

Yeah sorry that was my bad. I'll fix this post as soon as possible, also I'll make sure I do it from here on out.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

It's alright; nothing that's going to warrant you getting punished. More of a courtesy for members who either cannot see off the card because of visual problems or the images don't show up due to Imgur getting banned. 

[Dokutah]

this will be a partial review. And we starting this part with the Rituals. Generally speaking, the line up goal is to turbo 1 ritual to another using multitude of search and draw effects kinda like Troymare. I find this to be overpowered at first but then i find out that the the whole ritual process is hinge over to specific tributes, spells, and rituals to go off so i guess i can be less judgemental about it. Moreso the lack of immunity means your plays suspictable to removal of any kind making it more of Glass-Cannon Strategy. The 4K/4K stat is still scary though

 

I find it weird that you give the Worshiper the Ultimaya/Utopic Future no Level/Rank treatment. Probably just cosmectic appeal. The rest wording is a bit off IMO, so here the unprofessional clean up:

 

(This card Level is always treated as 12) This card cannot be Summon/Set. You can Discard this card: add 1 "Chosen","Blessing", or "Worshipper" card from your Deck to your hand. And if you do, "Worshipper" card added by this effect cannot be discarded for activation, Summon, or effect of your Card. This effect of (this card name) can only be used once per turn. If this card is Tributed for Ritual Summon: add 1 Ritual Monster or Ritual Spell card from your deck to your hand

 

The discard effect is quite understandable. Im going a bit nitpick that the archetype name is way to generic so it will add all cards with "Chosen","Blessing", or "Worshipper" outside the archetype that can potentially being to much. Speaking of to much, the last effects worries me since its a generic search that couple as absolutely perfect tribute fodder for any ritual under the sun except Necroz. Which leagues better than Manju.

 

Ritual Spell is fine for recover things albeit the delay

 

And now for the Chosen: The summon effect is very Troymare-ish without the discard parrt. Which again worries me at first until the fact it require specific way doing it. Also unlike Troymare that can reap the near-infinite value of Grinder and Gofu this being ritual exhaust your hand advantage more especially with the bricks of mis-matching rituals. I guess there is the Discard>Draw effect goes.

 

Julik: 1200+ Burn on Summon is quite painful. Nice finisher especially in pinch

 

Zorif: probably the weakest. Since its not actively shaving off LP nor reducing opponent advantage. For its credit the stat reduction is humungous.

 

Val: im really disagree with this one. Control Switching effect should never this easy moreso permanent.

 

Drasiris: one time Ignister. Powerful but not really as overbearing as Val does

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Don't mini-mod. Jolly, especially as I've already told both of them the problems that need addressing. 

[Dokutah]

Sorry sakura.

[Hiendershvek]

this will be a partial review. And we starting this part with the Rituals. Generally speaking, the line up goal is to turbo 1 ritual to another using multitude of search and draw effects kinda like Troymare. I find this to be overpowered at first but then i find out that the the whole ritual process is hinge over to specific tributes, spells, and rituals to go off so i guess i can be less judgemental about it. Moreso the lack of immunity means your plays suspictable to removal of any kind making it more of Glass-Cannon Strategy. The 4K/4K stat is still scary though

 

I find it weird that you give the Worshiper the Ultimaya/Utopic Future no Level/Rank treatment. Probably just cosmectic appeal. The rest wording is a bit off IMO, so here the unprofessional clean up:

 

(This card Level is always treated as 12) This card cannot be Summon/Set. You can Discard this card: add 1 "Chosen","Blessing", or "Worshipper" card from your Deck to your hand. And if you do, "Worshipper" card added by this effect cannot be discarded for activation, Summon, or effect of your Card. This effect of (this card name) can only be used once per turn. If this card is Tributed for Ritual Summon: add 1 Ritual Monster or Ritual Spell card from your deck to your hand

 

The discard effect is quite understandable. Im going a bit nitpick that the archetype name is way to generic so it will add all cards with "Chosen","Blessing", or "Worshipper" outside the archetype that can potentially being to much. Speaking of to much, the last effects worries me since its a generic search that couple as absolutely perfect tribute fodder for any ritual under the sun except Necroz. Which leagues better than Manju.

 

Ritual Spell is fine for recover things albeit the delay

 

And now for the Chosen: The summon effect is very Troymare-ish without the discard parrt. Which again worries me at first until the fact it require specific way doing it. Also unlike Troymare that can reap the near-infinite value of Grinder and Gofu this being ritual exhaust your hand advantage more especially with the bricks of mis-matching rituals. I guess there is the Discard>Draw effect goes.

 

Julik: 1200+ Burn on Summon is quite painful. Nice finisher especially in pinch

 

Zorif: probably the weakest. Since its not actively shaving off LP nor reducing opponent advantage. For its credit the stat reduction is humungous.

 

Val: im really disagree with this one. Control Switching effect should never this easy moreso permanent.

 

Drasiris: one time Ignister. Powerful but not really as overbearing as Val does

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it. I'm not a professional at wording cards, after all this is just the casual section, but regardless I still appreciate the help. I can see what you're saying, I thought that giving them strong effects would help balance out the fact that they have to be summoned with their specific worshiper. Also I should probably change the worshiper's to "If this card is Tributed for the Ritual Summon of a "Chosen" Ritual monster: add 1 Ritual monster or Ritual Spell Card from your Deck to your hand." Anyways thank you for your thoughts.