Lazer Yoshi Posted May 5, 2008 Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 There's too many naruto cards, but this was coolio. 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 two more cards 4 now, and i think this is what everyone been waiting 4!the akatsuki members! ^-^yayx! this is just itachi and kisame 4 now, but sasori and deidara will be nextEDIT: just added sasori and deidara.[spoiler=Itachi Uchiha] [spoiler=Kisame Hoshigaki] [spoiler=Sasori of the Red Sand] [spoiler=Deidara] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted May 5, 2008 Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 Dude amazing cards!!!!!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dothgar Posted May 5, 2008 Report Share Posted May 5, 2008 good, but where are gamabunta and others? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icecube Posted May 6, 2008 Report Share Posted May 6, 2008 Here comes another of my lame jokes: I'll give you a Tenten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knil "Shadow Link" Posted May 6, 2008 Report Share Posted May 6, 2008 Hey you don't have to, but here's an idea instead of making them like [Warrior/Leaf Ninja/Effect] Add an effect that when you summon the monster place one Leaf Village Token of it, this way you won't have any made-up types.Anyways I think I already left a comment, but here is another if I did GREAT JOB!!! 10/10...no 100/10...no Here ∞/10 : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 6, 2008 Report Share Posted May 6, 2008 I give it a 8/10 really good cards. My suggestions are to put Akamaru as a union monster that goes with Kiba. You could also fuse them. You should give the original japanese names of cards like in Might Guy it's actually Maito Gai. Otherwise really good. You should also make some fusion cards that could be Ninja teams like Haku and Zabuza. Oh, please use spoilers and seperate the monsters and magic cards and trap cards because it actually makes the page shorter (ask someone, ((not me)) if you don't know, how to use them and make them). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 well, im trying 2 post the cards in the order i made themwhen the set is finished, ill prolly reorganize the cards im also mostly trying to use the english names, because they make more sense 2 meas far as fusion monsters go, i dont think ill really make any...and i kept kiba and akamaru as seperate, because unlike sakon and ukon, they dont really rely on each other. right now, im kinda stuck...i dont know what 2 make next...>.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
indra Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 nice veery nice....:) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
domoking15 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 check this card out i just made it not like a playing card or anything tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 Pretty good so far. Some of the cards, in particular your Cursed Seal ninja seem incredibly hard to summon, maybe more than it's worth. I don't really know what to suggest at the moment though, I'm trying to think of something different to what I did. Also, I say this all the time but I prefer to see artwork images, it just seems more like a card to me if it's like that, but don't worry about having to chnage that, it would be too much hassle for you and I must say, you've managed to pick out some nice pics from the anime here, so really good job there. Now, I haven't looked at all the cards in detail but what I want to comment on is your types. Now, you yourself have said you don't like fake types and so far that's what I see here. True, you have also kept the normal types in as well but what I'm wondering is, does the extra type have a purpose? If not, I'd suggest you either get rid of it or give it a purpose. Of course, feel free to ignore this as I know it could take you a long time to redo all of your cards (I wouldn't do it so I can't exactly expect you to either). So yeah, if you can somehow make use of that second type you've given them then you'll score some extra points from my point of view (If you already have and I've missed it then I apologise).Also, I've noticed you made (can't remember if it was Sakon or Ukon) a union card. Now, as I'm sure you know, the Union is meant to replace the effect. If you can't do this then I'd be willing to do it for you as I've just been learning a few tricks on photoshop. That's all from me for now, if you want any more advice on any (or even all) of your cards I can review them independently and give my comments and opinion. I've made a pretty good Naruto Set myself which you can have a look at in my card archive if you wish:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=32038It hasn't had as many comments as this one, but I hope it can be of some help. Anything else just let me know, I look forward to your improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alvarosv Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 well' date=' im trying 2 post the cards in the order i made themwhen the set is finished, ill prolly reorganize the cards im also mostly trying to use the english names, because they make more sense 2 meas far as fusion monsters go, i dont think ill really make any...and i kept kiba and akamaru as seperate, because unlike sakon and ukon, they dont really rely on each other. right now, im kinda stuck...i dont know what 2 make next...>.<[/quote']The english series (no offense) is the one that changes the techniques and everything into what they want so please stich with the original names like Maito Gai. No card depends on union monsters so you can actually put Akamaru as one. If you're not doing fusions then at least put a card (for example) like Kiba & Akamaru. Effect: "You have to sacrifice a Kiba Inuzuka and Akamru in your field to summon this card". That was only part of it but you know what I mean. Some cards don't make sense like Kurenai being weaker than Lee but I guess that's ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaven 8 Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 i like them but you need fusions and spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 well, some of the cards do have uses 4 the types.and i will be making more support cards that make more use of them as 4 union replaceing effect, i do no that, but i cant do it myself. if u can 4 me, thatd be great ^-^ anyway, i might make some fusion monsters later...it just depends on who would be good fusion monstersand lee's ATK is higher than kurenai's because he relies completely on taijutsu, and kurenai uses mostly genjutsu, so thats why his ATK is so high Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 This is pretty good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted May 8, 2008 Report Share Posted May 8, 2008 check this card out i just made it not like a playing card or anything tho DO NOT POST CARDS IN OTHER PEOPLE THREADS!!!!!!!!!! neg rep for that. By the way Clariex, nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 Clariex as usual cards are awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TychusFindlay Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 GREAT CARDS i like them good ocg not over powered and i just plain like em 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 thx ^-^i think ill start working on jutsu cards soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted May 9, 2008 Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 I Likey 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2008 lolx just 1 card todayi made him earlier, but i forgot about him and i just made the akatsuki instead lolx[spoiler=Kabuto Yakushi] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starterdeckpaul Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 THEESE CARDS SUCK YOU SAID MINE SUCKED BUT LOOK AT YOURS BEFORE CRIICISING MINE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtridude Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 I love naruto almost as much as Kingdom Hearts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted May 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 hey, cool! ^-^im working on a kh set ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueFlame Posted May 10, 2008 Report Share Posted May 10, 2008 Your set is too long. I got bored after the 15th card. what i read: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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