Ultimate Ryan Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Beginning (Part 1)] It was a normal day in New York City, Ryan was walking home from school with his two of his friends Elliott and Alvin. They were all going to go back to Alvin’s place and play video games. They arrived at their destination, and went inside. They chucked their backpacks on the table and wandered into the living room. Alvin popped in Super Smash Bros. Brawl and they started playing. About 3 hours later they finally took a break to have a snack. After everyone finished their snack Elliott and Ryan were leaving when they heard a crashing sound and saw a small meteor fragment laying on the floor. Ryan and Elliott screamed, “Whoa!” Alvin looked frightened. They all waved by and and went their separate ways, Elliott to the left, Ryan to the right and Alvin back into his house. Elliott looked around to make sure no one was watching him and he then teleported away. Elliott’s friends did not know about Elliotts power, he can control the dimensions, teleport from place to place. He had gotten his marvelous power while in Venezuela he had a disease, that others had had, yet most died from, but Elliott made a quick recovery. Only one person knew about his power, his dad who was a scientist. His dad has seen it before, an unknown power that appears in a life/death situation. Ryan looked back in search for Elliott to ask him a question, yet he wasn’t there. Ryan was suspicious, he had noticed this for a while. Elliott is there, and then he isn’t. Ryan wanted an explanation. [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Beginning (Part 2)] Ryan and Alvin were walking back, Elliott couldn’t make it. “I think Elliott teleport! Like a super power!” Ryan announced. “Yeah and I can go the speed of light!” Alvin added sarcastically. “I will prove it to you!” Ryan Yelled, “We will go to your place tomorrow and as we leave watch Elliott through your window!” “Fine I will,” Alvin said. The next day they all headed to Alvin’s. They played videogames, had a snack, and left. Ryan signaled to Alvin before he left to remind him of the mission, and Alvin signaled back. They separated, Alvin went into his house and Elliott and Ryan went to there routes home. Alvin watched Elliott closely. Elliott turned to make sure no one was watching, then he stopped. Alvin rushed out and over to Elliott who was about to teleport, Alvin was taken with Elliott. Alvin lost his breath for a second, and he felt that breathable air was becoming scarce, he didn’t think he could hold out much longer. Alvin plopped onto Elliott’s driveway, awaiting Elliott’s appearance. About three minutes later Elliott poofed onto the driveway. Alvin asked Elliott about what had happened. While Elliott was explaining to Alvin, someone was watching them, “So they have powers as well.” “I need to go!” Alvin said in a hurry. Alvin started running. ZIP! Alvin was in his front yard in mere mille-seconds. Alvin, “Whoah!” “Do I have a power like Elliott?” A mysterious voice said, “Yes you are like your friend, and I can help you tune your powers.” “Who are you?” Alvin asked. “My name is Morgan.” [spoiler=Chapter 1: The beginning (Part 3)] “I accept” Alvin stated. “Good,” Morgan replied, “We must start training.” Alvin, “Do you have a power?” “Well” Morgan started, “I was on a trip to NASA, my friend Matt and I went to see a meteor they had found in the ocean. When we got there, we ran in to see it. I touched it, and a freezing sensation covered my body, I was frozen for what seemed like hours. After the freezing sensation was over, I could use or control fire and combustion! It felt kinda like I sucked the element out of the meteor or something like that, like it was my destiny.” “Wow!” Alvin exclaimed. ‘We must start training,” Morgan demanded. Alvin and Morgan trained for hours a day, and Ryan and Elliott started getting a little suspicious because Alvin kept using the same excuses over and over again. “Guys I gotta clean out the garage!” Alvin said. “Fine but we can play tomorrow right?” Elliott asked. “Maybe.” Alvin said. Once Elliott and Ryan were out of sight Alvin started running, and he stopped when he saw Morgan. They started training. “You are getting better!” Morgan said to Alvin, “But not good enough!” “It is so hard!” Alvin replied. “What can your powers do” Morgan asked, “Have you found any tricks out yet?” “Yes! I can run to form small tornadoes! Then with my hand I can propel toward a direction of my choosing!” Alvin said. “Good, huh he will be a good addition to our team, hahaha!” Morgan whispered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted April 24, 2008 Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 Lack of description and paragraphing. Grammar is quite decent. It was short, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted April 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2008 ther is more to chapter 1 that is all i wrote so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted April 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 sorry for double post but some more of chapter 1 is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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