Perfomapal Magician of Odd-Eyes

[Luaín]

Perfomapal Magician of Odd-Eyes
DARK [bottom. Bottom left, Left] Wyrm/ Link/ Effect ATK 1500-LINK 3

2+ “Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monsters

If this card is Link Summoned: You can return all Pendulum Card(s) you control to the hand, and if you do, reveal 2 "Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” Pendulum Monsters with different names from your Deck, your opponent  randomly chooses 1 for you to either place in your Pendulum Zone or Special Summon it, and you shuffle the rest back into your Deck.You can conduct 1 Pendulum Summon of a "Performal", “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monster(s) during your Main Phase this turn, in addition to your Pendulum Summon but take 1000 damage for each monster Pendulum summoned. (You can only gain this effect once per duel.)

So... I don't see this being that op... Except for PENDULUM MAGICIAN! i just hate that deck... My poor Ignister isn't coming back ;-; whatever. So let's explain the effects:
(1) This effect is supposed to search the best perfomapal (Guitaturtle) or... Odd-Eyes Arc Pendulum Dragon, and obviously magicians...You can special summon it if you want to XYZ summon so obviously this is based on Draco Face-off.
(2) Zefraath, the reason why I put this effect is because well... you pendulum summon to summon this guy, then you can pendulum summon again... but four thousand is actually I think it's too much.

Combo: Because i want to.

5 cards in hand: 1 Perfomapal Guitaturtle,1 Perfomapal Lizardraw, 1 Wavering eyes, 1 Pendulumucho (if you want to pendulum summon again, if not, any pendulum monster will work) and a magician perfomapal or odd-eyes pendulum monster.

Active Guitaturtle, activate Lizardraw (Draw 1 card), active Lizardraw effect (Draw another one), active the other pendulum monster, active wavering eyes, search a scale 4 or higher (depending on the other pendulum monster level) Active the scale, Pendulum summon with those monsters you link summon this then active its effect return pendulumucho and the other scale, try the effect with two level higher or a level 4 you know... Bagooska exist And yeah, you can pendulum summon again, but are you paying 4000LP? Looks like you would, after all, you used 5 cards to do this. I did this whole combo thing because I wanted to...

Little edit: just realise that this combo cannot be done.

[CybZer0]

I'm not a OCG expert, but I did cross reference the wiki and current psct cards and I think your OCG is good. I wouldn't have word it differently.

 

I think the card is a bit lackluster for 2 reasons.

•The summoning requirements should be made more lenient to 3 pendulum monsters that way it can be flexible in other pendulum decks and any non-performapal/magician/odd-eyes pendulum monsters.

•The trigger effect should also be made more lenient to allow the player to choose any 2 pendulum monsters. Additionally, I would personally remove the cost to return all pendulum cards to the hand because any card you returned from the field is going to go back to the field again, if you decide to use those cards again.

 

I like the 4k cost for a second pendulum summon, wouldn't change that, but what's your opinion on this: having a second pendulum summon and taking 1k for each monster summoned?

 

Overall, I like the card, your OCG is on point, the second pendulum summon is risky but good, and lastly the first effect and it's summoning requirements need to be a bit lenient for the player and rewarding.

[Eshai]

Official OCG with some minor adjustments

 

Odd-Eyes Performpal Magician (name is a bit less of a mouthful)

DARK - S, SW, W - Wyrm/Link/Effect - 1500 ATK/LINK-3

2+ “Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monsters (2+ rather than 3 so if eventually a Link monster comes around you can use it.)

If this card is Link Summoned: You can return all Pendulum Card(s) you control to the hand, and if you do, reveal 2 "Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” Pendulum Monsters with different names from your Deck, your opponent chooses 1 for you to either place in your Pendulum Zone or Special Summon it, and you shuffle the rest back into your Deck. You can pay 4000 LP, and if you do, you can conduct 1 Pendulum Summon of a "Performal", “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monster(s) during your Main Phase this turn, in addition to your Pendulum Summon. (You can only gain this effect once per duel.)

 

I took the OCG from Pantheism of the Monarchs and Zefraath if you were wondering. As for the capitalization, colons, commas, and semicolons, I suggest looking at Zaziuma’s post on Official Card Grammar to get better at that part (I certainly wasn’t that good a couple months ago).

 

As for review purposes, I might make you the LP pay 1000 for each monster you Summon with the Pendulum Summon similar to how Soul Charge works, rather than a straight up 4000 (since that’s a bit unwieldly). (and then realized that the guy before me said the same thing)

[Luaín]

I'm not a OCG expert, but I did cross reference the wiki and current psct cards and I think your OCG is good. I wouldn't have word it differently.

 

I think the card is a bit lackluster for 2 reasons.

•The summoning requirements should be made more lenient to 3 pendulum monsters that way it can be flexible in other pendulum decks and any non-performapal/magician/odd-eyes pendulum monsters.

•The trigger effect should also be made more lenient to allow the player to choose any 2 pendulum monsters. Additionally, I would personally remove the cost to return all pendulum cards to the hand because any card you returned from the field is going to go back to the field again, if you decide to use those cards again.

 

I like the 4k cost for a second pendulum summon, wouldn't change that, but what's your opinion on this: having a second pendulum summon and taking 1k for each monster summoned?

 

Overall, I like the card, your OCG is on point, the second pendulum summon is risky but good, and lastly the first effect and it's summoning requirements need to be a bit lenient for the player and rewarding.

 

Well, let's see.

Summoning condition: Well, the idea is to make a performapal link monster but Yuya's deck use Per, Magi, and Odd. So yeah, also if i write "Pendulum monsters"  you will not be able to use the non-pendulum odd-eyes/perfomapals.

Trigger effect: Well... Maybe you're right, but Link materials

Extra pendulum cost: Well, that's actually a good idea. I will change it. Also... Is that Tassadar in your profile picture?

 

 

Official OCG with some minor adjustments

 

Odd-Eyes Performpal Magician (name is a bit less of a mouthful)

DARK - S, SW, W - Wyrm/Link/Effect - 1500 ATK/LINK-3

2+ “Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monsters (2+ rather than 3 so if eventually a Link monster comes around you can use it.)

If this card is Link Summoned: You can return all Pendulum Card(s) you control to the hand, and if you do, reveal 2 "Performapal”, “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” Pendulum Monsters with different names from your Deck, your opponent chooses 1 for you to either place in your Pendulum Zone or Special Summon it, and you shuffle the rest back into your Deck. You can pay 4000 LP, and if you do, you can conduct 1 Pendulum Summon of a "Performal", “Magician”, and/or “Odd-Eyes” monster(s) during your Main Phase this turn, in addition to your Pendulum Summon. (You can only gain this effect once per duel.)

 

I took the OCG from Pantheism of the Monarchs and Zefraath if you were wondering. As for the capitalization, colons, commas, and semicolons, I suggest looking at Zaziuma’s post on Official Card Grammar to get better at that part (I certainly wasn’t that good a couple months ago).

 

As for review purposes, I might make you the LP pay 1000 for each monster you Summon with the Pendulum Summon similar to how Soul Charge works, rather than a straight up 4000 (since that’s a bit unwieldly). (and then realized that the guy before me said the same thing)

 

S, SW, and W mean south, and west, right? And I like that format.

Thanks for the OCG correction, but... Pantheism is not the same as Draco face-off, draco face-off is RAMDOMLY while pantheism is not. The idea with that effect is reveal 2 monsters that you need (one you need in PS and one you need on the MZ) so you can win with any variable. 

Zaziuma Get it.