my first funfic.

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as in title this is my first fanfic so dont be harsh.......

 

 

Atem last Duel.

 

 

 

This story takes place in ancient Egypt after the return of atem. Atem was weak and tierd after the duel he had just done with yugi moto a boy that he has been inside him for half of his life teaching him how to duel and win duels. but becuase Atem had a job to do as the Pharaoh he had no time to reast. while coming in the kighdom with cheers of his return Atem has noticed a wierd look in his people eyes, he saw a red dotes in thier eyes. At first he thoght that he is seeing things beacuse he is tierd but when he came close to one of his people he understood that something here is not right. Atem ran to his bedroom and fell a sleep. in the next morning he woke up in the middle of the city with people walking and not noticing thier king lying on the ground. Atem when to the temple to prey to the gods when he saw thier Bakura. Atem jumped on his feet and told Bakura to get out of the temple. Backura as known doesn't like to be orderd so he called out his "Diabound" like in the last time they have dueled in Egypt. this time Atem new the way to kill "Diabound" but little did Atem new also Bakura new what happend in thier last duel. Diabound crashed the walls and went out side. Atem ran after him until Bakura stoped runing and pulled out of his bag two Duel disks from battle city tornament. At first Atem was shocked but in little time he had come on his feet and started the duel. both Bakura and Atem had a great starting hand. but Bakure had the upper hand. he played 2 cards face down and ended his turn. Atem that never saw such a silly turn did the same and played 2 face down cards. Bukura played one of his face down cards he played "destiny board". Atem rememberd that card from the semi finals in battle city. and knew what he is standing against. now it was Bakura's turn. he played one doll pice in face up attack mode 0 ATK and Ended his turn. Atem summoned skilled dark magican. and attacked. Bakura has now 2100 life points and ended his turn. Bakura started smiling. and drawed a card. he played one face down card ca played reload and ended his turn. Atem attacked the face down card. the face down card was Magican Of Fate. Bakure took back reload. Atem ended his turn. Bakure removed from play doll pice and magican of fate to summon. Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning. and then he played reload. skilled dark magican had 2 spell counters on him, atem played the fast spell card. Mystical Space Typhoon on

destiny board. skille dark magican had now 3 spell counters he special summoned dark magican and played his second face down " Blast with chain" and increased its ATK points by 500 to make it equal with black luster. As Atem is happy that he got to save his life points. Bakura playes pot of greed and draw 2 card from his deck. The he plays 1 card face down and Sets a monster. Atem draws a card and plays to face down trap cards and attacks Bakura's face down monster and sends it to the graveyard the face down card was " the right hand of exodia". Bakura is getting mad so he draw card with alot of power and put i great smile on his face as he played Card card destruction and send to the graveyard all 4 pices of exodia. Atem choked to see such a wierd move becuase he never saw the duel of kiaba VS his father. and Bakura yelled " i summon from my have EXODIA NECROS" the shout was so loud that the people of Atem's kighdom came to see the duel and were amazed and shocked from the duel disk that were in play. When Exodia Necros was summoned all the sky were dark. Bakura ender his turn.

Atem attacked with dark magican Exodia but no use by its effect i can not be destroyed by battle. ataem ended his turn. Bakura draws and exodia's ATK points are increased by 500.and ends his turn in a big smile from ear to ear wating for his win. the millennium puzzle has shined and from inside he heard yugi's voice talking to him and whispering" the heart of the card" Atem use put all his soul in that one last darw. and the card he has draw was " oblosik the tormentor"

Bakura got a hunch that Atem has draw a god card so he told Atem that he can not summon one and even if he does he can not destroy exodia. atem played monster reborn and call of the hunted to specuial summon skilled dark magican and karibo and offerd all 3 cards to summon obolisk. as Bakura still had a smile on his face making happy tunes with his voice. Atem olso had a smile on his face and the Bakura stoped smiling and got angry that the millennium ring shined. Atem played the card that he never has played before and was in his deck from duel kighdom with maxmilion. he played soul release and removed from play all 5 pices of exodia and attacked exodia and won the duel..... Atem fell on the ground and died.

and that is the story of the last duel of Atem. the duel that took his life away,