(Repost) Stuffimols! [AGM]

xlArisenRoselx · October 2, 2017

Baby Stuffimol Cerberus https://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Baby+Stuffimol+Cerberus&cardtype=Fusion&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=6&rarity=Ultra+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F854447%2F865510635.jpg&circulation=&set1=BABW&set2=00023&inset=on&type=Beast&carddescription=3+%22Stuffimol%22+monsters%0D%0AOnce+per+turn%2C+if+you+control+a+%22Stuffimol%22+monster+you+can+target+3+cards+your+opponent+controls%2C+return+those+targets+to+their+owner%27s+deck.+When+this+card+is+destroyed%2C+you+can+send+up+to+3+%22Stuffimol%22+cards+to+your+Deck+from+your+GY.&atk=3000&def=2200&creator=Kazuki+Takhashi&year=2017&serial=44917779

3 "Stuffimol" monsters

Once per turn, if you control a "Stuffimol" monster you can target 3 cards your opponent controls, return those targets to their owner's deck. When this card is destroyed, you can send up to 3 "Stuffimol" cards to your Deck from your GY.

So there is the start of my sister's archetype "Stuffimol". If anyone would like to help make it a bit better fell free to send me card suggestions or maybe critique some of these cards. I would like to make this an official archetype someday, or maybe if not, I will settle for AGM worthy.

EDIT:I've made some spells and traps for them now. Here they are:

Stuffimol Return
Quick-Play Spell
When this card is activated, target 1 card in your Graveyard and 1 card in your opponent's hand, shuffle them into their owner's Deck.

Stuffimol Search
Quick-Play Spell
When this card is activated, you can search your Deck for up to 2 "Stuffimol" Monsters, show them to your opponent, and if you do, your opponent selects 1 of the 2 cards. The selected card gets Special Summoned while the other card is sent to the Graveyard.

Stuffimol Protection
Quick-Play Spell
Activate when your opponent declares an attack. Target random 1 card in your opponent's hand, and 1 "Stuffimol" card in you Deck, send the first target tto your opponent's Deck, and send the other target to your hand. Also, negate the attack.

Stuffimol Playtime
Continuous Trap
Whenever your opponent Summons a monster, you can Special Summon 1 level 3 monster from your Graveyard. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, send all cards in your opponent's hand to his/her Deck, and if you do, he/she draws the same amount of cards.

Stuffimol Charm
Counter Trap
When your opponent declares an attack, you can send 1 card from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard, then if it's a monster, Special Summon it. If not, you can target 1 card in your Graveyard other than that card, shuffle it into the Deck. Also negate the attack.

Stuffimol Power Up
Trap Card
When this card is activated, target 1 "Stuffimol" monster you control, it gains 1000 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can target up to 2 card your opponent controls, send those targets to his/her Deck.

Now, for the AGM, ignore the Links, we won't add those. If you aren't in the AGM, but you want to review these, I suggest adding the Links, as they are part of the archetype.

Flash Flyer - Sakura · October 3, 2017

Since the pictures you used for some of the cards are no longer there, you might want to type out their stats manually. (Will be a lot easier for you to update instead of having to redo the cards every time).

I will grade the Link monsters since unlike most of the AGM, I'm open to them (or rather, I have to know how they work because of my job as CC mod).

That, and will just be a very brief review of each.

Bear: Recycling stuff from the GY is fine; negating the attack and the searching effect raises concerns. Negating attacks is fine, but unless you're fighting a bigger boss, there's no reason for you to negate your own attack. Also going to bring up Heraldic Beast Leo, who has a similar statline but only searches 1 card and is hard OPT. This one isn't, and ATK is too high for a Level 3 without restriction. (I mean, I did write the prompt more/less, but yeah, lower ATK to 1500/1600 and lower the search capacities)
Bunny: This one is fine.
Dolphin: You can just say "add 1 "Stuffimol Dolphin" from your Deck to your hand" and that's sufficient wording. Uh, I need to check if I did specify Synchro Summoning (though to be fair, you are free to break the prompt a bit if needed). Nothing wrong with it.
Fox: This one is fine, though if there's one lesson Konami learned from Stratos (insert yelling at KoA to let him off banleash), put some kind of limitation on its summoning. Preferably a hard OPT or just prevent it from searching itself, though the former is better since I think Stratos is a case of the latter and it's still on the list (HEROs overly large notwithstanding)
Hamster: Same comment about searching as I said for Fox, and right now, it's filling a double search role that you probably should avoid. I mean, double searching helps the Deck get its key cards out, but yeah. Rest of the effects are fine.
Hummingbird: I'm a bit iffy about the "discard 1, search 2 Archetype member" effect, considering again, it's just adding way more search power on top of the amount of searching they can already do. Rest of it is okay.
Puppy: Is fine.
Seal: You don't target cards in the Deck; you just activate them. Major concern is its splashability into other Decks and free activation of anything you want (assuming you can meet the costs). I would probably change it to just trigger Archetypal Spells, but it's your choice. Either that, or require that you discard a "Stuffimol" card.
Snake: Protection effects are nice, so yeah.
Turtle: Again, you don't target from the Deck; just Special Summon the monster. But that being said, you need to put a hard OPT on the summon effect or restrict it from summoning another copy of itself. Yeah, you cannot ED for that turn, but still setup fodder. (I'll admit that it does help to get key stuff out first)

S/T

Playing Ground: Helps with summoning speed, but iffy of it bouncing 2 cards away every time one of your 'mons gets destroyed. It's disruption, but yeah. You could probably get away with the effect as-is, but just don't want this to get out of hand like similar cards have in the actual game.
Return: Needs to be Archetype-specific, otherwise any Deck can just tech this as a disruption card to take out the opponent's hand.
Search: This one is okay; luck-based so you just have to hope the opponent doesn't send the card you want to the GY. (But in that sense, a few of them do have GY return effects, so...) That, and Return helps, I guess.
Protection: Concept is interesting, but it's essentially a +3 for you (opponent loses a hand card, you get to search whatever you want and the attack gets negated). Given the activation timing, this should really be a Trap Card.
Playtime: Again, needs to be Archetype-specific or have other restrictions; otherwise, BAs and other Level 3 spam Decks can/will abuse the heck out of this. But yeah, at least you can recover dead stuff in the GY; least stuff that Search discarded or whatever. Restrict its range to just "Stuffimols" and/or add an OPT.
Charm: Either way, you benefit from this (free monster or recycle stuff in the GY while negating an attack). That being said, proper PSCT says to put the attack negation first, then have you excavate stuff.
Power-Up: Uh yeah, this thing buffs by 1000 ATK and then shuffles the opponent's board at the same time; remember, once the card is used, it will go to the GY, which triggers. I suppose you can try changing it to be destroyed instead (punish the opponent for sniping, or Twin Twisters it yourself and pull it off.)

Extra

Stuffimol Dragon: There's a very good reason why Fiber Jar got banned a long time ago, and that's because it literally soft reset the game. This is basically doing that, except leaving you with a 26/21 'mon. Effect needs to be reworked so it's not a stronger Fiber Jar.
Elf: This one is far tamer than Dragon, but outside direct attacking capacities with Power-Up, not seeing a reason to use this.
Unicorn: I made this one, so leaving blank. [FYI to other users, I granted permission for this to be used and was the first card designed; I left the rest of the design to Kyumi; well the Archetype itself.]
Hippogriff: ATK is a bit too high for a 2-mat Rank 3 even with specific mats. 2100-2200 is fine, but then you would have to cut down the DEF a bit. As-is, you're bordering on Rank 4-5 stats. Also be careful about this giving access to ANY card in your Deck instantly, especially considering the spam capacity.
Cerberus: I have to give this a definitive no, because it's a strictly better Castel because it can use itself to trigger the bounce 3 effect and no hard OPT on it. Yeah, it is a Fusion monster, but you just need 3 Stuffimols and that's it. (Warrants taking up the EMZ now, yes, but you need to tone this effect down or restrict it to the number of other Stuffimols you got). Other effect is fine.

VRAINS format

Phoenix: Where are you targeting the cards from? (This needs to be specified). Rest of the effects are okay.
Ghost: I'll let the slightly higher ATK for a Link-2 off, but yeah, this may be a bit much given conventions. I mean, we'll probably break it later anyway, but...this is essentially giving you ladder access to Link-3+ and such.

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In general, you really need to tone down some of the cards so they don't end up on the banlist if Konami ever printed these. Dragon/Cerberus DEFINITELY need nerfing and the searchers toning down. Just defer to the comments I wrote for them individually.

xlArisenRoselx · October 3, 2017

Thx Sakura for the feedback. Although, Cerberus was my newest addition. I saw all of the other AGM members making Legacy support, and I made Cerberus as my Legacy Support card. I will nerf cards as per your reccomendations later

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