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Well, that didn't go to plan.

 

I've decided to keep those Easter eggs until June. So much for April Fools...

 

The boss after the Demon Hybrid is about to go into materialisation...

 

This one copies the weapons of every character we have seen thus far. Have fun with that, coming soon...

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[spoiler=Artemis Ravenhart]
 
Image of Appearance: N/a
 
Quote: "I don't think you know what it means to survive, kid."
 
Name: Artemis Francheska Ravenhart
 
Age: 23
 
Gender: Female
 
Race: Human
 
Appearance: She typically wears a black leather coat and clothing to conceal herself in nighttime warfare, though she wears it in the daytime as well, along with black combat boots. Her skin tone is white/Caucasian. She has black hair that reaches to her shoulders, violet eyes, and a small scar on her lip. She is somewhat skinny, though she has stronger muscles in her legs and arms. She weighs around 137lb and stands 5' 8"(172.72cm). She also wears a small pack around her waist that holds her ammunition.
 
Personality: Artemis typically keeps to herself but will talk if needed. She is not shy but more introvert with her emotions and doesn't care much for sharing them.When she does talk, she has good manners and speaks formally. She also is kind and does not criticize, though she will let someone know if she spots a mistake, normally medium-scale, to the person who made it. When at the base, she typically stays in her barracks, sitting and thinking, and can go days without eating. She thinks about the past and tends to blame herself for how her mother died. However, she is completely different during missions, being more enthusiastic and talkative, before returning to base and her same ways.
 
Biography: Artemis Ravenhart was born in New York City, New York on October the Fifteenth, 2052. to Krystal Ravenhart and Drake Ravenhart. Krystal worked part-time at a restaurant while her father, Drake, worked as a lawyer. On April the ninth, 2056, though, her father was shot by a criminal who escaped from prison, after Drake lost the court debate pertaining to a murder the man was suspected of, as he was his defense attorney. After the loss of her husband, Krystal moved to London in hopes of being able to raise Artemis better. However, on December the twelfth, 2070, her mother died from Hypothermia, as she stayed out in the snow too long trying to get food for her and her daughter, as Artemis had broken her leg after sliding on ice while riding her bike home from work.
After her mother's death, Artemis joined the military and served as an infantryman for a year. Two years later, she was promoted to Lieutenant First Class. Her keen eye and marksmanship gave her the role of a sniper. She also excels at martial arts. Now, in the war, she will serve as a marksman to protect the Emperor from a distance, taking out any troops trying to cross to him. She is not political and does not wish to suggest any ideas for the empire.
 
Underwater Fighter? No.
 
Combat Information
 
Weapons: 7rnd Anzio 20mm Anti-Tank Sniper with a 29in. Fluted Suppressor and an 8-24x zoom scope with a built-in rangefinder, Glock 18 with a 20rnd clip, Karambit knife
Weapon background: Her sniper rifle was picked up from an enemy sniper during an operation, which was approved for her use. Her other gear is standard issue.

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20mm Sniper Rifle, Suppressed

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The karambit knife is a combat knife with a curved blade, black hilt and blade
 
Base Abilities: 20/17 Eyesight
 
Fighting Style: Martial Arts, Marksmanship
 
Magic: N/a
 
Inventory: Dog tags, Backpack (5 clips of .50 rounds and 3 clips of 9mm rounds, claymores, binoculars, etc.), a photo of a young Artemis and her mom and dad
 
Miscellaneous Information
 
Theme Tune: Halo: Reach "Engaged"
 
First Appearance: From Victory to Oblivion: A Real Life War


[spoiler=Agatha Mellson]


Personal Information
 
Appearance Image: N/a
 
"Better watch your back, you don't want to know what could be behind you."
 
Name: Agatha Baye Mellson
 
Age: 3,682
 
Gender: Female
 
Race: Vampire
 
Appearance: She stands around 5' 10" and weighs around 109lb. She has hazel and hair, red eyes, and appears to be Caucasian/white. Her she wears light medieval armor, composed of a leather chest plate.Her under armor consists of a gray T-shirt and jeans, along with tennis shoes. She uses light makeup and her hair goes to her mid-back. She wears these both in combat and casually. Her appearance makes her look around 25. She appears to be human to the eyes, but other senses tell otherwise as she sometimes smells of blood or sounds swifter than she appears. There are no accessories excluding her sheath.
 
Personality: She is a cheerful young girl to most people who know her, but she hides the fact that she's a vampire from just about everyone. Whenever she makes a kill, she does not regret it as she goes after killers, pedophiles, and other harsh criminals as she does not pity them when she takes their life. However, she is more interested in keeping her younger sister alive than herself. She brings some blood home from her victims to her sister so she won't have to kill as she is a gentle girl.
 
Biography: She was born over a millennium ago to two vampires of unknown names. After two centuries, she moved away to Britain as she wanted to explore. She became fond of the city and decided to stay there. One day, her younger sister, Jennifer, moved in with her. Barely a century old, this young-ling vampire wouldn't harm a fly. As a result, Agatha decided to bring blood to her as well. Since vampires like her could go days without blood, she typically stalked her victims before killing them and draining them. She went to work as a call-center woman as well.
   One day, when she got home, her sister came up to her with a post of an advertisement to join the military. At first denying it, she went on with her life. After a while, however, she decided to join as she was getting restless of her life. Before she left to join, she taught her sister how to kill and drain, using a mugger for practice. Once she became proficient at it, she left to join. When she joined, she revealed herself to be a vampire and went to combat. She became friends with her platoon and moved out. She will join the left flank. She has no suggestions for the empire. 
 
Is Your Character an Underwater Fighter? No
 
Combat Information
 
Weapons: Stainless Steel Rapier with a golden hilt

 

Weapon Appearance: opplanet-cold-steel-ribbed-shell-swept-h

                                    A steel blade with a golden hilt and a long, thin blade.

Weapon Background: The rapier has belonged to her family for years. When she left, they gifted it to her to carry on.
 
Base Abilities: Enhanced Speed
 
Fighting Style: Uses her speed to hit, flank, and hit again.
 
Magic: Blood Magic, Invisibility

Magic Information: Blood magic is the ability to control blood. This means complete control, allowing the user to increase or decrease blood flow, harden blood, expand blood cells, etc.
 
Inventory: Nothing
 
Miscellaneous Information
 
Theme Tune: N/a
 
First Appearance: From Victory to Oblivion: A Real Life War

 

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Both apps are unfinished, so I'll give you a chance to touch those up.

 

For Artemis, Appearance needs more detail. How about the build, height, weight? Broaden your detail to about 4 lines read vertically on mobile or on a typical PC/laptop. Same for personality. I'll be honest, the personality seems to be a bit... Flat. Because you're new though, I'll give you a chance to broaden that too. Take inspirations from other apps to help you make yours better. Biography requires TWO paragraphs. Remember that the RP takes place in 2075, don't get the maths wrong.

 

For Ajax, he's miles off.

 

As for First Appearance, it's this franchise because both characters do not exist in any other RP right now. Please fix that. Recent Appearance do not matter.

 

Remember that 4 lines = 1 paragraph for Appearance Description, Personality and Biography.

 

Fix those up and then let me know once you're done so I can judge.

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