First Splice boii

[KatnissGod]

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Chose two simple pokes to make a simple splice. Feel free to point out mistakes and/or give me a rating (out of ten preferred but twenty/five stars works) 

[(GigaDrillBreaker)]

This is a great start. My very first tip is that, when posting sprites, include some larger sizes for ease of viewing. I do 200% and 500%, personally.

 

As for the splice, I feel that the bottom wings should have been excluded. The tail should have either been removed, or placed behind the wing. I'm not too fond of the color, simply because it is so dark that everything fades together. Maybe try Golbat's color scheme?

 

Overall, though, still really good for a first attempt.

[KatnissGod]

This is a great start. My very first tip is that, when posting sprites, include some larger sizes for ease of viewing. I do 200% and 500%, personally.

 

As for the splice, I feel that the bottom wings should have been excluded. The tail should have either been removed, or placed behind the wing. I'm not too fond of the color, simply because it is so dark that everything fades together. Maybe try Golbat's color scheme?

 

Overall, though, still really good for a first attempt.

My first Idea of it was without, but I added it in anyway. Thanks for the tail feedback and the colour feedback. I should have the new version up in an hour or two

[KatnissGod]

[spoiler= Updated Splices]