altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 STORYSTORY [align=center]A blue speck shot across the night sky as Prof. Wood watched. It was followed by a pink speck. These specks danced, then began to enlarge. Dialga and Palkia began to take form as they drew closer."Blimey!" Prof. Wood exclaimed. "Never thought I'd see 'em, I did." He was fascinated by the bright outlines of Dialga and Palkia, quite visible in the night sky, trying to settle an old rivalry. It was not often they fought, but when they did, the entire universe was affected. Prof. Wood's satisfied smile faded as he felt the earth shake violently. Microscopes fell off shelves in his small laboratory in Torq Town, which was in the south-west portion of the Sanyama region. Prof. Wood left his laboratory and entered the Pokemon Center. On the bottom floor was the earthquake shelter. Earthquakes were frequent in Torq Town, so one had been built five years ago. Prof. Wood was joined by every other person in the town, of which there weren't many. Only fifty people dwelt in Torq Town, and all of them but a few lived in the apartment building. Only five didn't. These people were Prof. Wood, his wife and his three children. They lived in the house above his lab. Prof. Wood began conversing with some of the townsfolk gathered there. He also looked for Pokemon battles in the stadium that was incorporated into the earthquake shelter. You see, Prof. Wood was not only a very accomplished astronomer, but also a former Trainer. His love of battling never left him as he grew to 65 years young.[/align] ApplicationApplicationTo sign up as a trainer living in Torq Town, please fill out the following form: Name:Age: (must be above 10 and below 18)Birthday:Nickname:Sex:Pokemon: (maximum of three Pokemon, all under level 5, no legendaries)Biography: After filling that out, please fill out the following form for EACH OF your Pokemon. Nickname:Species:Sex:Level:Nature:Detailed description of how it was obtained: Once you've done that, you're rearing to go! IF YOU DO NOT FILL OUT THE APPLICATION FORM FULLY, CORRECTLY AND WITH PERFECT SPELLING AND GRAMMAR, YOU SHALL NOT BE ACCEPTED.IF YOU DO NOT FILL OUT THE APPLICATION FORM FULLY, CORRECTLY AND WITH PERFECT SPELLING AND GRAMMAR, YOU SHALL NOT BE ACCEPTED.Signups so far:[spoiler=altemon]Name: Zeke WoodAge: 14Birthday: 4th AprilNickname: ZSex: MalePokemon: BeldumBiography: Zeke, known as Z to his friends, came to Sanyama from the Sinnoh region. He was born in the Hoenn region, but moved to Sinnoh at the age of 5. He only moved to Sanyama when he was 13, last year. Zeke has a fiery personality, but deep down (although it may be VERY deep down) he has a kind heart. Zeke is the son of Prof. Wood. Zeke's Pokemon:Nickname: TwangSpecies: BeldumSex: N/ALevel: 5Nature: QuirkyDetailed description of how it was obtained: Zeke's childhood friend was Steven Stone's son, Harry Stone. Harry gave Zeke his Beldum as a leaving gift when Zeke departed for Sinnoh. [spoiler=Supreme Gamesemaster Yddisac]Name: Cathal Kaÿné YddisacAge: 17Birthday: November 23Nickname: NoneSex: MalePokemon: Ralts, EeveeBiography:Cathal Kaÿné Yddisac has had a notably catastrophic life. Struck with disaster after disaster, his hatred of life and society at large is understandable.When he was born, a lightning rod just outside the hospital exploded, blowing up the ceiling. As it turned out, the firm that built the lightning rod knew about the problem, but decided it would be cheaper to leave it alone and defend against any charges pressed upon them. Cathal's father was killed by the explosion, but the family was unable to afford a lawyer and therefore unable to take the case to court.As Cathal grew, he began to discover strange oddities impossible by others. For example, when he didn't want to be noticed, all he had to do was stand in the shadow of some object and he would be virtually invisible. This particular instance was handy, as he was one of the most popular targets for bullies in his school. Eventually, when he was nine, he determined that he could manipulate darkness. He began to use his powers extensively, hoping to increase in skill.Unfortunately, on August 19 of his sixteenth year of life, the sun was so bright, there were no shadows for him to hide in when a group of bullies ambushed him by the town well. They threw him in. Upon leaving, Cathal felt somehow disconnected from the darkness he had made such good friends with. He came to the conclusion that he had lost his powers. To make up for it, he decided to tame beings that couldn't lose their powers — Pokémon. As his town had no Pokémon lab, he had to steal two Pokéballs from the town store (his family was still very poor). His stealth was still impressive, and he carried out the heist with no interruptions. He was incredulous when he was able to catch two Pokémon without laying a finger on them: they practically walked into the ball. Now, his bonds with Ralts and Eevee are as strong as his quondam bond with darkness.Cathal is distrusting and pessimistic. Though he wants the best for everyone, he doesn't think that anyone except his Pokémon want the best for him. His lifetime experiences have told him that there are very few people in the world that aren't corrupt. ~POKéMON~ Nickname: AleïaSpecies: RaltsSex: FemaleLevel: 5Nature: ModestDetailed description of how it was obtained:Aleïa wasn't an ordinary Ralts during her life in the forest. Her powers far exceeded those of her kin, and occasionally even surprised her. However, such power was difficult to control, and when she caused an accident with an uncontrolled psychic burst, she was exiled from her group. Unhappy, she stalked away through the forest, seeking one of the "trainers" she had heard myths of. She was so intent on finding one that she didn't know she had found one until she walked straight into a PokéBall. She simply allowed herself to be captured, desperate to find someone to call a friend. Now, she seeks revenge on the wild Pokémon that were so unappreciative of her unique gifts, and to help as many Pokémon into the hands of good trainers such as her own as possible. Nickname: ZetsumeiSpecies: EeveeSex: MaleLevel: 4Nature: TimidDetailed description of how it was obtained:The forest is not a good place for such a weak Pokémon as an Eevee to grow up. Unfortunately, Zetsumei had no choice. Abandoned by his parents soon after birth, Zetsumei had to live life in constant fear of attack by the various predatorial Pokémon that inhabited the woods, such as Scythers and Beedrills. Eventually, he found a relatively safe hole where he could make a home for himself. Unfortunately, there was no good food nearby, so Zetsumei had to seek it. He quickly found an excellent berry bush near a clan of Ralts. Zetsumei entertained himself by watching the Ralts train, noting how one so exceeded the others in power. One day, while eating and watching (noting the absence of the superpowered Ralts), he found a huge red-and-white berry. When he tried to eat it, though, he was sucked inside. Quickly finding himself captured, he met up with the powerful Ralts — Aleïa — again. The trio quickly bonded into a group of good friends. [spoiler=Brodioh]Name:Jaden PalenamAge:17Birthday:September 13thNickname:j-stormGender:malePokemon:Ralts,GibleBiography:He used to live in Hoenn near Steven Stone's house but moved to Sanyama for a new adventure.He had some good friends and one of them gave him his Gible as a gift. Jaden's Pokemon:Nickname: PsySpecies:RaltsSex:FemaleLevel:5Nature:BoldHow it was obtained:Jaden was in the middle of a storm and he found a Ralts being knocked around by the winds.he rescued the Ralts and she decided to go on a journey with Jaden. Nickname:N/ASpecies:GibleSex:MaleLevel:4Nature:NaiveHow it was obtained:As he left Hoenn for Sanyama his best friend Sammy gave him a Gible as a gift. [spoiler=XxXYamiRulzXxX]Name: Leon StoneAge: 16Birthday: January 1stNickname: SilverGender: MalePokemon: Cyndaquil, Chikorita, and HorseaBiography: He is Steven Stone’s cousin and he moved to Troq Town to start a new life. Leon’s Pokemon:Nickname: BlazeSpecies: CyndaquilSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: BoldHow it was obtained: Blaze was given to Leon by his older brother Kevin. They’ve been partners ever since. Nickname: ChichiSpecies: ChikoritaSex: FemaleLevel: 5Nature: HastyHow it was obtained: Leon found Chichi outside of his house during a blizzard one night. He then took her in and made her his. Nickname: LunaSpecies: HorseaSex: FemaleLevel: 4Nature: ShyHow it was obtained: Leon rescued Horsea from a group of Seaking on a night of a full moon. [spoiler=FF7revelution]Name: LanceAge: 18Birthday: 5/23/1990Nickname:NoneSex:MalePokemon: Drantini, Bagon, and GibleBiography: Wants to be the new Gym Leader for the Dragon Gym Nickname:NoneSpecies: DratiniSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Calm and CoolDetailed description of how it was obtained: Caught right after he got his first pokemon Nickname:Species: BagonSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Sometimes gets mad for no reasonDetailed description of how it was obtained: Was first pokemon that was given to him by his father. Nickname:NoneSpecies: GibleSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Calm and CoolDetailed description of how it was obtained: Was given to him bye his brother who left on his journey a long time ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brodioh Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Name:Jaden PalenamAge:17Birthday:September 13thNickname:j-stormGender:malePokemon:Ralts,GibleBiography:He used to live in Hoenn near Steven Stone's house but moved to Sanyama for a new adventure.He had some good friends and one of them gave him his Gible as a gift. Jaden's Pokemon:Nickname:PsySpecies:RaltsSex:FemaleLevel:5Nature:BoldHow it was obtained:Jaden was in the middle of a storm and he found a Ralts being knocked around by the winds.he rescued the Ralts and she decided to go on a journey with Jaden. Nickname:N/ASpecies:GibleSex:MaleLevel:4Nature:NaiveHow it was obtained:As he left Hoenn for Sanyama his best friend Sammy gave him a Gible as a gift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Denied. This is going to be an intelligent, high quality RP. You do, however, have a chance to fix your application by using correct spelling and grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brodioh Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 what do you mean and what did i spell wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Looking over it again, you didn't actually spell anything wrong, but you could do with using your key once in a while. As it says in red, underlined, bold and italic text at the top, IF YOU DO NOT FILL OUT THE APPLICATION FORM FULLY, CORRECTLY AND WITH PERFECT SPELLING AND GRAMMAR, YOU SHALL NOT BE ACCEPTED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Something like this? Name: Cathal Kaÿné YddisacAge: 17Birthday: November 23Nickname: NoneSex: MalePokemon: Ralts, EeveeBiography:Cathal Kaÿné Yddisac has had a notably catastrophic life. Struck with disaster after disaster, his hatred of life and society at large is understandable.When he was born, a lightning rod just outside the hospital exploded, blowing up the ceiling. As it turned out, the firm that built the lightning rod knew about the problem, but decided it would be cheaper to leave it alone and defend against any charges pressed upon them. Cathal's father was killed by the explosion, but the family was unable to afford a lawyer and therefore unable to take the case to court.As Cathal grew, he began to discover strange oddities impossible by others. For example, when he didn't want to be noticed, all he had to do was stand in the shadow of some object and he would be virtually invisible. This particular instance was handy, as he was one of the most popular targets for bullies in his school. Eventually, when he was nine, he determined that he could manipulate darkness. He began to use his powers extensively, hoping to increase in skill.Unfortunately, on August 19 of his sixteenth year of life, the sun was so bright, there were no shadows for him to hide in when a group of bullies ambushed him by the town well. They threw him in. Upon leaving, Cathal felt somehow disconnected from the darkness he had made such good friends with. He came to the conclusion that he had lost his powers. To make up for it, he decided to tame beings that couldn't lose their powers — Pokémon. As his town had no Pokémon lab, he had to steal two Pokéballs from the town store (his family was still very poor). His stealth was still impressive, and he carried out the heist with no interruptions. He was incredulous when he was able to catch two Pokémon without laying a finger on them: they practically walked into the ball. Now, his bonds with Ralts and Eevee are as strong as his quondam bond with darkness.Cathal is distrusting and pessimistic. Though he wants the best for everyone, he doesn't think that anyone except his Pokémon want the best for him. His lifetime experiences have told him that there are very few people in the world that aren't corrupt. ~POKéMON~ Nickname: AleïaSpecies: RaltsSex: FemaleLevel: 5Nature: ModestDetailed description of how it was obtained:Aleïa wasn't an ordinary Ralts during her life in the forest. Her powers far exceeded those of her kin, and occasionally even surprised her. However, such power was difficult to control, and when she caused an accident with an uncontrolled psychic burst, she was exiled from her group. Unhappy, she stalked away through the forest, seeking one of the "trainers" she had heard myths of. She was so intent on finding one that she didn't know she had found one until she walked straight into a PokéBall. She simply allowed herself to be captured, desperate to find someone to call a friend. Now, she seeks revenge on the wild Pokémon that were so unappreciative of her unique gifts, and to help as many Pokémon into the hands of good trainers such as her own as possible. Nickname: ZetsumeiSpecies: EeveeSex: MaleLevel: 4Nature: TimidDetailed description of how it was obtained:The forest is not a good place for such a weak Pokémon as an Eevee to grow up. Unfortunately, Zetsumei had no choice. Abandoned by his parents soon after birth, Zetsumei had to live life in constant fear of attack by the various predatorial Pokémon that inhabited the woods, such as Scythers and Beedrills. Eventually, he found a relatively safe hole where he could make a home for himself. Unfortunately, there was no good food nearby, so Zetsumei had to seek it. He quickly found an excellent berry bush near a clan of Ralts. Zetsumei entertained himself by watching the Ralts train, noting how one so exceeded the others in power. One day, while eating and watching (noting the absence of the superpowered Ralts), he found a huge red-and-white berry. When he tried to eat it, though, he was sucked inside. Quickly finding himself captured, he met up with the powerful Ralts — Aleïa — again. The trio quickly bonded into a group of good friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Excellently done, Yddisac. You have been accepted. The RP thread will be up later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brodioh Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 i fixed it and when when will you start the rp? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 That's better, Brodioh. You also must use correct spelling, grammar and capital letters in the RP thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brodioh Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 ok thx for letting me in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
::Triumph:: Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Name: Leon StoneAge: 16Birthday: January 1stNickname: SilverGender: MalePokemon: Cyndaquil, Chikorita, and HorseaBiography: He is Steven Stone’s cousin and he moved to Troq Town to start a new life. Leon’s Pokemon:Nickname: BlazeSpecies: CyndaquilSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: BoldHow it was obtained: Blaze was given to Leon by his older brother Kevin. They’ve been partners ever since. Nickname: ChichiSpecies: ChikoritaSex: FemaleLevel: 5Nature: HastyHow it was obtained: Leon found Chichi outside of his house during a blizzard one night. He then took her in and made her his. Nickname: LunaSpecies: HorseaSex: FemaleLevel: 4Nature: ShyHow it was obtained: Leon rescued Horsea from a group of Seaking on a night of a full moon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Accepted. The RP thread is now up, and you may begin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
::Triumph:: Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 cool thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Name: LanceAge: 18Birthday: 5/23/1990Nickname:NoneSex:MalePokemon: Drantini, Bagon, and GibleBiography: Wants to be the new Gym Leader for the Dragon Gym Nickname:NoneSpecies: DragonSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Calm and CoolDetailed description of how it was obtained: Caught right after he got his first pokemon Nickname:NoneSpecies: DragonSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Sometimes gets mad for no reasonDetailed description of how it was obtained: Was first pokemon that was given to him by his father. Nickname:NoneSpecies: DragonSex:MaleLevel:5Nature:Calm and CoolDetailed description of how it was obtained: Was given to him bye his brother who left on his journey a long time ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Name: JAge: 13Birthday: Nov - 13 - 1994Nickname: KidSex: MalePokemon: Cyndaquil, Lavitar, RioluBiography: J lived In the Johto region when he was 9 years old. When he was about 11 he got his first pokemon from professor Elm. He then traveled to make places and set sailed to Torq town. On the ship he later met a man that gave J a Riolu. After filling that out, please fill out the following form for EACH OF your Pokemon. Nickname: MetalSpecies: RioluSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: Shy (Since he doesn’t know J that much)Detailed description of how it was obtained: When J was sailing to Torq town he met a man in a blue suit. He sat down next to him and started to chat. When J arrived to Torq town, the man gave J a Riolu as a gift. Nickname: FlameSpecies: CyndaquilSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: Never gives up and cares about J a lot.Detailed description of how it was obtained: When J turned 11 he went to Elm’s lab. He choose a Cyndaquil. Nickname: TySpecies: LavitarSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: Strong and doesn’t really listen to J.Detailed description of how it was obtained: While J and Cyndaquil were training J saw a mysterious pokemon on a mountain. He climb the mountain and saw Lavitar and catched it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Name: Johnathan Age: 14 Birthday: November 8 Nickname: Fighter Sex: Male Pokemon: Gastly Biography: Johnathan has always had a kind heart towards pokemon. He could actually care less about people, even himself! But he will always help out Pokemon in trouble, even if they're not his. He loves ghost pokemon because it makes him think of his parents who died when he was 6. He hopes one day, that he'll be able to find their spirits somewhere. He once lived in the Kanto Region, but when his parents died, he moved in with some friends (pokemon, not people because they think of him as a misfit) Johnathan's Pokemon: Gastly Nickname: n/a Species: Gastly Sex: Male Level: 5 Nature: Brave Detailed description of how it was obtained: He was one day walking through the Lavander Town Pokemon Tower (this is where he lived with his parents before they died) when he saw a sad Gastly. He wondered why and saw it was in a lot of pain because it was on the verge of KO. He quickly got it, took it the Pokemon Center nearby and they became best friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Pennar Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Name: RyanAge: 16Birthday: December 13Nickname: N/ASex: MalePokemon: GlameowBiography:the son of one of the most powerful trainers, his great-great-grandfather ran across a very powerful pokemon called Arceus, Arceus then gave his great-great-grandfather an extremly powerful flute, it has been handed down for generations, and it is known that he is the true person for this flute, and for that, the flute cannot break or leave him, this flute has the power to summon a random pokemon into battle, Heal all pokemon that listens, and is required to meet Arceus again, he wanted Arceus as one of his pokemon, so His father bought him a Master ball, he is also a very good flute player Nickname: N/ASpecies: GlameowSex: MaleLevel: 5Nature: Very protective of its ownerDetailed description of how it was obtained: His mother gave it to him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
altemon Posted May 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Birthday cannot be "undisclosed." Other than that, OK. Just choose a birthday, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 altemon can i join if soName:Brady Kitari Age:11 (must be above 10 and below 18 )Birthday:10/02/97Nickname:KiSex:MalePokemon: Ditto (maximum of three Pokemon, all under level 5, no legendaries)Biography:Brady lives with his father who is a reporter he moved from region to region town to town,but now his father passed away leaving him his ditto.Ki loves his ditto more than anything he and his mom stopped and setteled in Torq town. Nickname:CystalSpecies: DittoSex:FemaleLevel:5Nature:JoyfulDetailed description of how it was obtained: On his eleventh birthday his dad gave it to him. Ki loved his ditto and would show it off to his freinds wherever he was,but after his birthday his dad died of cancer and crystal is all he has left to remember him.so can i join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Improve grammar, or altemon will kick you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 how is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted May 3, 2008 Report Share Posted May 3, 2008 Capitalization, spelling... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supershade Posted May 4, 2008 Report Share Posted May 4, 2008 what did i spell wrong?i want to fix it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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