Tormented Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 alternate versions because I couldn't decide like this one a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(GigaDrillBreaker) Posted March 21, 2017 Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 I feel the one with the smile makeup could have it muted just a tad bit, and the eyeshadow lightened a touch on her right eye (left side of tag), just so it looks a little bit less airbrushed on. The smile should also extend a little bit further on her left cheek (right side of the tag). Since her face is at an angle, forced perspective should be slightly more apparent. I feel like "puddin" should be moved just a hair to the right on the third tag, since the line of the P kinda drowns in her top. Maybe increase contrast on it ever so slightly to help it pop? Love the 6th one, always been a fan of that kind of filter. Any of that make sense? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 21, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2017 the joker smile was something that was a spur of the moment, kinda thing-didn't spend overly long making it work and was relatively happy on how it came out and I don't usually explore much with text because it's hard to work correctly but yeah I see what you are saying, it was originally fine but I had to use a different font for the ' as the one I used for actual text didn't have one for it. thanks brother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted March 22, 2017 Report Share Posted March 22, 2017 I adore the last two, a lot. I'm not familiar or experienced with GFX so I'll do my best to put my thoughts into words. The "shading" on the first one, the sort of blue tint, really drowns it for me. It feels like it sort of lost color. The one with Joker paint is interesting, but I have to agree with (). It's a tiny bit . . . busy? I think that's the way to put it. Like it works, but its almost too much for me. Other than that, these are dope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(GigaDrillBreaker) Posted March 22, 2017 Report Share Posted March 22, 2017 I adore the last two, a lot. I'm not familiar or experienced with GFX so I'll do my best to put my thoughts into words. The "shading" on the first one, the sort of blue tint, really drowns it for me. It feels like it sort of lost color. The one with Joker paint is interesting, but I have to agree with (). It's a tiny bit . . . busy? I think that's the way to put it. Like it works, but its almost too much for me. Other than that, these are dope.Color filter is the term you want Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted March 23, 2017 Report Share Posted March 23, 2017 okay so if the first one had no text, and the gmap of the second one (without less luminosity), this piece would be dope as hell. although the major issue with this is the render istelf. not much movement, doesnt allow for good flow, etc. you did good with what you have tho fam EDIT: honestly you could even keep the text, it works nicely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 23, 2017 Report Share Posted March 23, 2017 I would like to see the one at the bottom right of the 6-tag block, and the one below said block, with the Joker make-up.To me, the pink shades/filters look better than the blue~green-ish ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 23, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2017 okay so if the first one had no text, and the gmap of the second one (without less luminosity), this piece would be dope as hell. although the major issue with this is the render istelf. not much movement, doesnt allow for good flow, etc. you did good with what you have tho fam EDIT: honestly you could even keep the text, it works nicely My issue with flow in renders is that unless done correctly, it looks funking terrible. Appreciate ya fam. I would like to see the one at the bottom right of the 6-tag block, and the one below said block, with the Joker make-up.To me, the pink shades/filters/whatever look better than the blue~green-ish ones. You are probably right honestly, In hindsight I probably should've done that to a couple of them. ty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted May 2, 2017 Report Share Posted May 2, 2017 cool, needs some analogous bg displacement/noise to go with it these are some catman colors, coolio. Could use a nice blurry scenic stock for depth, but going the desaturated route you're gonna compromise depth regardless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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